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By : oraday
  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2008
    Chapter 2: Yay, he’s alive! That’s a great way to begin the chapter, too. If it weren’t for the summary, it would’ve thrown the reader completely off. Which is a really good touch. ^_^ . . . Interesting. Sasuke’s just thinking, “I could use this to my advantage.” Nice. . . . Yeah, I wouldn’t expect Kabuto to be easy to kill. Good thing he did, too, otherwise look what would’ve happened. (*points to manga*). . . . This is great, Sasuke’s just using Naruto’s house and stuff without a care in the world. XD . . . Ahahaha! Naruto just walked in! XDD . . . Naruto’s odd reactions are a riot! Totally unexpected! ^^ . . . Nice touch, Sasuke agreeing to let Naruto help. And it makes sense too, he’d look less like an idiot than if he’d tried to do it himself. . . . Pssh. Hel-lo, Naruto. Ninja weren’t very honorable to begin with. And anyway, if you’re fighting a cheater, you might as well cheat first. (I don’t know if Orochimaru was a cheater, but you get the idea.) . . . XDDD Sasuke sure changed his mind fast about the massage! And so smoothly too! XDDD . . . Sasuke’s so blunt in everything he does, it’s great. ^_^ . . . Um, I don’t think he’s an S-class criminal. He went AWOL, but I don’t think that’s bad enough to fall under S-class. Now if he’d done something Akatsuki-worthy . . . . (*giggle*) Sasuke’s all smug. ^_^ . . . ALRIGHT! RE-JEC-TED! XDDDDD . . . or not. : Love Naruto’s question: “Did Orochimaru really baby you or something?” ^^ . . . Great label: “Stupid Teenage Stuff.” That’s so true! XD . . . Sasuke’s like a cat. “This is mine. Don’t like it? Tough.” . . . Hey, is Sasuke still naked? o_o . . . Come on, Naruto! Throw something back in his face! He’s totally asking for it! . . . O.O W~o~w. That . . . ending . . . was . . . was . . . (*blinks*) . . . unexpected.
    I REALLY like this story! :D

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Chapter 1: First of all, I loved you’re A/N at the beginning. That must’ve been rather awkward to write. ^^
    So far, interesting beginning. . . . Yeah, “politics…” (*sigh*) . . . Ah, but we know from the summary that he’s NOT dead. But still, that was a good little paragraph. . . . (*snort*) “. . . Or she’d finally cracked.” XD And I love Naruto’s blunt question. “What gives?” XDD . . . He is crafty. . . . And I just learned a new word: “abnegation.” ^_^ . . . I wonder, did Naruto ever see Sasuke with Itachi? I guess he must have. . . . Oh my. Naruto has those thoughts about him? *_* . . . Boy, that came fast. Not sure if I like it or not. It can’t be dragged out? ô_o

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  • From ANON - Halskr on January 20, 2008
    Very cool story. How is Sasuke hiding when someone comes over like Iruka? That might make an intersting chapter.
    Anyway its well written cant wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - peeps on November 07, 2007
    I really enjoyed your story. Please keep writing as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Meg on November 04, 2007
    I'm really enjoying your writing. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.
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  • From Loupiotte on November 04, 2007
    Is this what you come up with when you have a writter's block? Then you can keep on writing whatever your mood cause it's cute, hot, and it put me in a very good mood for the rest of the day. I love this fic.
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  • From hisoka on November 04, 2007
    GLAD YOU UPDATED,SHORT CHAPTER BE DAMNED I LIKED IT.DOES SASUKE HAVE NO FEELINGS FOR NARUTO WHAT SO EVER BUT LUST?HE COMES OFF THAT WAY,HOPE YOU HAVE TIME TO UPDATE AGAIN SOON
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 03, 2007
    I really like this fic. I can't wait until Sasuke panics because he realizes just how much Naruto means to him... Cause damn that Uchiha needs to be taken down a peg or two.
    slave
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  • From ANON - lo on November 03, 2007
    Nice job! I like this and what you are doing with the chatacteres.
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  • From ANON - Spoonerism on November 03, 2007
    An absolutely awsome story. The slow build up to actual sasu/naru bits was awsome and made the actual events more vivid. You write sasuke and naruto well. Plese continue with this great story. There will be pie if you do :D
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  • From Allys on November 03, 2007

    LOL, well I liked it enough for the both of us XD. Even the a/n at the beginning was fantastic, LOL, I can't remember ever having such a wonderful greeting XD. Lmao!! And the best thing is that even though it was everything you promised, it was ridiculously sweet at the same time!! Naruto is adorable in this fic. Innocent without being stupidly girly and wimpy, *Glomps u* for that alone you deserve a golden star. LOL, not to mention the fact that that was the best morning Ever, LOL, Sasuke in nothing but an apron cooking ramen, LOL, I'm surprised naruto didn't die of a massive brain hemorrhage through his nose!! LOL. And him passing out, cause he held his breath, *snicker* you're one of the first people to actually make the passing out seem plausible. That's such a beginner's mistake XD, LOL, but most people catch themselves and breathe before they pass out XD. And the perineum stimulation and Naruto being so fucking cute and wanting to experiment. it's like he's brand new XD. And I guess he is XD, is so fucking adorable. *Huggles him and you* And you got that without making him into a simpering Uke!! *Glomps u* you have no idea how impressed I am for that, LOL. You ROCK!! Thank you so much for the update sweetie, and LOL, for some reason with this story I don't mind the wait at all. Probably because it was that way from the beginning, I find that when authors start out updating often and then fall off, I tend to loose interest, but if the updates were sparse to begin with it's easier to deal, I don't know if that makes any sense at all, but meh, LOL XD.
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  • From on September 22, 2007
    Where is the next chapter dude? Hello..?
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  • From hisoka on September 14, 2007
    I LIKE HOW NEEDY SASUKES BECOME FOR NARUTOS ATTENTION,AND WANTING HIM ALL TO HIMSELF.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on August 18, 2007
    meanie bug! wat kinda place is that to stop?! grrr, u better not take long with its follow up!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on August 18, 2007
    This story is adorable. I like your depiction of Sasuke. Please update soon.
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