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Reviews for Sasuke's Lost Bet

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - dustin on October 12, 2008
    yay!lemons are sweet contrary to popular belief. very sweet...excuse, me, im dripping blood on the keyboard...i need a tissue. ttyl.
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  • From asm613 on June 30, 2008
    ((("It is a good morning. but what do you say we make it a great morning teme," and he kissed Sasuke.
    The Uchiha broke the kiss, "Hn, I think I'd rather have an incredible morning usuratonkachi," with that Sasuke got down to the business of making Naruto scream his name so loudly that he'd be evicted. He had to get Naruto to live with him somehow, right?)))

    What an 'incredible' story. Short, Sexy, and Sweet. The only problem with it was that it ended too soon. Thanks for sharing the story with us.
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  • From RyuuOokami on May 31, 2008
    In the beginning I was a bit 'WTF?' (in a good way). But I had so much fun! Kakashi is a wonderful pervert. But I'm surprised you didn't let Sasuke's fangirls try to ravish him when they saw him in those clothes. *smile*
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 14, 2008
    You.... wow! You... damn. It was really good THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Chapter 1: I can’t believe it either, Sasuke. . . . Simple plot so far, but enough. . . . “Welsh on a bet?” I’ve never heard that phrase before. . . . Ooh, “Naruto-sama,” is it? Sexy. Uh-oh, something to wear? That can’t be good. . . . Oh, that’s not bad. Could be worse, Sasuke. And you (the writer) would have to show me a picture of it for me to believe it shows more than Sai’s shirt. . . . Got that right, Naruto. . . . I take back what I said earlier, Sasuke; this is worse. . . . Oh God, what will Sakura and Kakashi say?

    Chapter 2: Aw, they know? Bummer. . . . That’s the funniest description of Kakashi laughing that I’ve ever heard. ^_~ . . . Heh, “Only if you’re suicidal.” I like that one. ^^
    Okay, that is so not fair. I would never do that to someone, make them pierce anything. Ooh, onyx-and-blue, pretty. Could be worse, I guess.
    I guess paying for it is the least he could do. . . . Boy, that was fast. I think it would’ve been better if you’d given little minor details to their arousals. The longer it lasts, the better.

    Chapter 3: Mm, seems kind of hurried to me. Sorry.
    Heh. “The term is ‘gay’ and yes I am, now get out.” I like that bit. XD . . . Boy, they slept a long time, then, didn’t they? I would’ve guessed they did it in the early afternoon the day before, and now it’s the next morning? Where’s all that energy they usually have? . . . And it’s the end already?

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  • From serenagold on August 25, 2007
    hehehe... that was awesome. =^^=
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  • From ANON - Psalm 69 on August 21, 2007
    Greatest...Yaoi...Fanfic/pairing...EVER!(in my opinion)
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  • From Rosebud on June 18, 2007
    This story was awesome!XD
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  • From ANON - annonymouse on May 04, 2007
    >.> make one where naruto loses a bet or somthing similar that was cool
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  • From ANON - Rymika on March 17, 2007
    Hi! I loved it. And I would love if you posted a sequal soon. It were a perfect mix off humour and yaoi and kinky stuff (hihi). Totally liked this story! Bye
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  • From ANON - Karas Krahe on March 17, 2007
    GAHHHH!
    I MUST HAVE MORE!
    I CANT WAIT FOR BLACKMAIL!
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  • From dragonite2388 on March 16, 2007
    cool!!! how did u manage to write 2 fics at the same time?! haha you're soooooooooooo great... so are ur stories... hehe
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  • From ANON - jewel on March 15, 2007
    great story. loved it.
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  • From anapana83 on March 15, 2007
    Sweet! And this is funny to me because last night i think i listened to The Bad Touch from BG like 4 times lol.

    Ah, i just have one little thing to point out that you might wanna keep in mind for future reference. If i remember correctly from the anime and manga, when it comes to arriving into a house, room, or unbarricaded location, Kakashi can just poof into the place. No lock picking needed :).

    I'm enjoying your fics. Please continue to write more.
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  • From on March 15, 2007
    I find the ending where he need toget him to move in somehow quite funny, the story was very good
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