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Reviews for Dream Girl

By : DevilnBlue
  • From LadyLaran on January 21, 2008
    So very sad. His mother is going to have a serious wake up call when puberty hits and no breasts or anything else. I feel so very bad for Naruto. Maybe Sasuke can help him through this..hopefully. Wonderful story so far. One question...the death certificate would have had Rini's name on it since the medical examiner would know that it was a girl that died, not a boy. The funeral home would also have known this due to preparing and dressing the body and would have advised the planner of the ceremony accordingly. I don't know if you thought about that or not. But I am loving this tale so far.
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  • From oohshiny on October 06, 2007
    alsi i 4got b4 can you email me when you update? my emails deannathx@comcast.net if you catn see it
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  • From oohshiny on October 06, 2007
    WAHHHHH UPDATE ALREADY I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT DX
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  • From novaline on August 24, 2007
    Poor Naruto. How can his mother make him be his dead sister. I really hope that Sasuke and Itachi can help him get better.

    Great story and please update soon, I want to know what happens =)
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  • From ANON - gp on July 11, 2007
    go itachi-san!! he will save poor naru-chan from his demented mother, with the help of sasuke of course, and after that little misunderstanding in the end is cleared...
    plz POST THE NEXT CHAP!!! =D (i believe this is the 15th review!! right? =P)

    now really, this is a great story, and i hope you continue soon! =D
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  • From Kerrisa on July 10, 2007
    Review all of you gosh darn it!! review review review!!! *Stomps around carrying a "REVIEW NOW" sign* What do we want!? REVIEWS!! When do we want them!? NOW!!


    Lol ok ok i'll settle down, but if you hadn't gathered all ready I'm a major fan of this fic and if i can get quicker updates by pumping up the masses to review then by golly i will!! This fic is beyond awesome, it has originality, creativity, emotional depth, a wicked plot line, and whatever it is that inspires the readers to hope and cheer on for the characters. On top of all that the characters are actually in character and your writing style is magnificent. What is there not to like? I hope those 15 reviews come in quick! =) Keep up the stupendous work!
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  • From ANON - Ann-Chan on July 09, 2007
    Hey, I love this so far. Its a really cute story. Lookin forward to the next chapter, till then, may you hands always know the keys you wish to strike
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  • From ANON - ladysessame82 on July 09, 2007
    Hi..um, i read your story just now and i just completely fell in love with it. its a new twist that i havent seen in a while. i read a lot of stories here and yours is one of the best ive read in a while. not many have grabbed my attention in the first 2 lines. so if its not too much, i would really like to see how the story goes. i hope u add my review and get your fifteen so a new chapter can go up. i cant wait to see what happens.
    JaNe!!!
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  • From ANON - Reiko on July 09, 2007
    I stayed up an extra hour or so to finish reading this story. It's really good, i love it :3 I can't wait until the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - osvark on July 08, 2007
    I'm excited to see what will happen to naruto and what itachi will do now that he knows, I want itachi and sasuke to save her from her mother, but I suppose its more dramatic when its drawn out too. I'm looking forward to that moment of happiness for the next chapter, although I wonder if it will only serve to make naruto feel worse knowing happiness and then going back to her mom. Either way, i'm sure whatever you write will turn out good. Thanks for writing.

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  • From ursweetheartless on July 08, 2007
    well, THAT was quite the depressing little chapter, even if it was full of necessary revelations on all sides. i really am enjoying this story, hopefully you update soon?
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  • From dutsada on July 08, 2007
    my my.. Sasuke had a misunderstanding did he? oh man i feel that things are really getting out of hand for poor Naruto.. You are so good with that dream.. I used to have odd dreams too and man their not nice. They leave you feeling empty and filled with confusion.

    Interesting chapt. I wonder what Sasuke had concluded bout the bathroom incident.
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  • From Kalariona on July 08, 2007
    This is a really good story. Emotional and real. I understand the writers block thing since I've been struggling with that a lot too.

    Please update soon. Looking forward to it

    Rie
    xx
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  • From spoon10488 on July 08, 2007
    very very cool. Poor Naruto all the hard work he put into hiding his gender only to be ruined in seconds. Well it is probably for the best, maybe they can help him 'to be a real boy' (I loved that comparison) Well I hope you get more then 15 reviews because I'm die to read the next chapter. =)
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  • From ANON - dana on July 07, 2007
    thanks for the new chap. i glad to see your witer's block on this story is cured. while i was reading you put iruka as sasuke's brother instead of itachi. it confused me for a minute because i was like when did iruka become an uchiha. other then that great chapter. i was glad that someone now knows the rini is really naruto although i am sad that the first person to find out was itachi instead of sasuke but i think you might have a reason for that so i'll just wait and see.
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