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Reviews for Dream Girl

By : DevilnBlue
  • From spooksies on April 15, 2009
    i just finished re-reading the story from the start. the last time i saw this story, it was at chapter 3 (or was it 4?)......anyways, to my surprise there was a lot of chappies to read. just so i could leave a good review for ya.

    i would love for you to finish when you have the chance. this is a great work of art for you!


    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 15, 2009
    it was my first time reading this story it should be kept up. how will they find each other again if naru moves to whereever his mom is taking him. hmm and i hope she gets a grip soon. and i hope sasuke accepts naru as he is and knows that what he has in naru is better than a dream
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  • From meeshmeh on April 15, 2009
    I just found this story tonight and I like it very much, it is different from any naruto story I've read and I would love it very very much if you would continue to write this story I've had entirely too many good stories abandoned and now that I have found another I would like to see it continued...I was surprised when your story caught my interest because to be honest with how many stories are being left to die, I find myself only reading ones that are completed...so I hope that my review can at least bring you comfort and note it is only praise and purely selfish desire that i want you to continue this story...so please do not leave this story to die...
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  • From ANON - ZN18 on April 14, 2009
    Dx omg, Please don't quit on this story!!! I love where it's going right now and would love to see what happens next. If Naruto and Sasuke make up in the future, and what happens with Naruto now that his mother is basically out of the picture. DX
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  • From lilliandragon on April 14, 2009
    Please don´t stop writing.

    I read all the chapters so far in almost one go and you had me crying a few times... That doesn´t happen often!
    I really like it. Not only the sad scenes. All of the story.

    I want to know what will happen to Naruto. Will he continue wearing women´s cloths? And will he maybe be allowed to leave his mother to go, maybe, study and live in the dorms and meet Sasuke there again? What will they do? Will Naruto start wearing mens´ clothes after some thime with Sasuke? ... Will his mother get the help she needs? I think it would be funny to read that Sasuke, who hates all his fangirls, suddenly has Naruto as 'girlfriend'. Maybe, for his peace of mind as excuse(at first), to get his fangirls to leave him alone.

    I really like to read more of this story. And it doesn´t have to go according to my (demented) fangirl-brain.

    I really hope you change your mind and continue writing and posting.
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  • From ANON - madidi on April 05, 2009
    Nooo!! You can not do that!! I absolutely love this story!! I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed this lovely piece of art before.. I'm not really sure if I indeed have or haven't.. I've kind of got a relly bad memory.. xP Soo.. anyway you can not possibly not continue writing this when we're just going to meet the older Naru-chan and Sasuke-kun.. Besides! I have been waiting for chapter eight for who knows how long and been really anxious about it too.. So I'm really sorry if I haven't reviewed before.. I really can not remember.. ^^'' Uhm.. Well yeah I love your stories in general.. I hope you keep updating this darling.. And I'd also like to read the next chapter of 'Youtube Fool' which I've also been waiting reeaallyy MUCH!! ^^ I just love your stories.. Uhmmm.. I hope that I've atleast reviewed 'Youtube Fool'.. But I'm really sorry if I haven't.. ^^''.. Uhm.. Yeeah.. Well anyway.. Hopefully this makes you feel better.. To know that this story indeed is LOVED but you just happen to have really forgetful fans.. ^^'' AND.. I also hope that you will forgive me IF I haven't reviewed your story or stories before (HOPEFULLY I HAVE.. I'll beat myself up if I indeed haven't xS) So then.. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!! I am reding this at two o'clock in the morning and I have school tomorrow.. Well what can I do..? I mean isn't it inevitable that I red this at the moment I see on FF.net that you have updated this^^? THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS LOVELY PIECE OF ART!! AND PLEASE DO CONTINUE!! (Although.. Just so you know I won't come there to beat you up if you won't update this that soon.. I mean I understand that you most likely have a life outside of your computer, unlike me, so I won't be that mad if you indeed decide to go on hiatus.. But I really hope that you won't) THANK YOU ONCE MORE!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Carla on April 04, 2009
    I am reading and waiting for the next installment. I hope you are continuing. I like the story and would love a happy ending.
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  • From reamane21 on April 03, 2009
    No you have to con't, I want to know what happens with Sasuke and Naurto.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 31, 2009
    wow...poor baby. i 'm looking forward to the time skip and seeing how his mother copes with the change puberty will put him through and if he'll being a bit more defiant towards his mother actions towards him. looking forward to your next update.
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  • From lexjamandme on January 30, 2009
    Excellent story. I love your portrayal of Itachi and Naruto's mother certainly has a "mommy dearest" vibe going for her. Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2009
    Wow! What a GOOD story! I loved it!
    Maybe sasuke will meet naru again when he goes to the new school?
    I can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From HikanDas on January 28, 2009
    There's a book I read a while ago that basically had the same plot but the main character was a girl pretending to be her dead twin brother and the mother was wayyyy crazier than your version. The book was called Celeste if you wanna look into it. :D

    I like your version much better though!!!~
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  • From oohshiny on February 03, 2008
    YAY YOU UPDATED!! i can't wait for the next chapter, and the TIME-SKIP~!



    ...heheh. yay.
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  • From ANON - Sheila on February 03, 2008
    This story is absolutely beautiful and tragic. I love it so much. The funeral made me cry so much becuase I can relate to the feeling of loosing a sibling. Keep up the great work!
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  • From LadyLaran on January 28, 2008
    Nicely done! I still can't wait to see how you'll handle the issues we discussed about the paper trail and legal problems that will engender. The fair was a nice touch.
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