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Reviews for Dream Girl

By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2010
    It would be fun to see Sasuke & Gaara competing for Naruto's attention. Will Naruto have to hide that he is close to an Uchiha again from his mother?
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 11, 2010
    Horray! An update! So they're finally get to see each other again. I can't wait to read Sasuke's reaction and Naru's as well. Thank goodness Naru has made some friends that don't judge him. I'm afraid that he'll need them real soon. Anyway, looking forward to your next update whenever that may be.

    ~Devious
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  • From Kerrisa on January 10, 2010
    You were scaring the pants of me before about this chapter and how you'd thought Id hate it but I actually really really really liked it xD I liked the Gothic Lolita Alice picture you painted with Naruto and yes I jumped up and down (albeit in my head) when he told them he liked being called Naruto and that it's a guilty pleasure. It should be more than that tho! Tis his name! But I really like Gaara and Haku (lol Temari is questionable seeing as how her art comes before everything, including a person bleeding too much in an alley way) and that they've befriended one another. Three cheers for Naru and Sasu still remembering one another! (Guess it would kind of be hard not to) And Oh snap! Sasuke to the rescue for his fallen (er, fainted) angel! Lol the females in class are probably livid xD I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see how things play out between Naru and Sasu! I'm sure there's no way he's turning down being in charge of showing "Rini" around now xD XOXOXs! Kei-Chan
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  • From mykonosparadise on January 10, 2010
    I like this story, you should definitely continue- I know exactly how you feel,because it's depressing when one puts so much effort and love into writing a story and people read it, but don't review...
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 10, 2010
    I really love this fic. Naru's mom needs to get a grip >.>
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  • From ANON - Teelavan on January 09, 2010
    I really like this story, but its so sad...I don't like Naruto's mom. I like the interaction between the Sand siblings and Naruto but I don't like how you made Haku, thats my favorite character of all time. Will Zabuza appear?
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  • From Kerrisa on December 30, 2009
    *Sulks* I'm so mad at Naruto's mother right. I wish Itachi had returned immediately with social services and took Naruto away!! But No. She got away to hurt him some more, and Sasuke's upset with Naruto and ahhhhh! Tis all falling apart! Graahh that woamn has me so angry I'm surprised Itachi didn't tear her a new one when they "conversating." And those horrible people who let Keiko get away with it! Darn you all I hope your jobs are at high risk! *Shakes fist* I want to sulk more, but I'm going to start reading Promise and hope it will cheer me up some! At least distract me from wanting to yell at Keiko for utterly failing at being a mother. I need to read the next chapter of this fic to find out what happens to Naruto D= I don't want him to lose his identity.. =( XOXOXs
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  • From ANON - Akaku on August 17, 2009
    omg. Poor Naruto. His mother has reallly gone off the deep. I really hope she comes to her sentences soon. Itachi really does push things too far!!!! *angrily pouts* poor saskue. His little heart has been hurt but not broken. If only he could see Naruto again...Im sure things would be better. That is if Naruto doesnt try to kill himself. well wonderfully written. It really captured me. I cant wait for the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - labooboo93 on August 03, 2009
    This is one of the best stories, fanfiction or not, I have ever read.
    The idea is so great and the execution is just fabulous.
    I really hope you finish it, because it's just spectacular and I can;'t wait to see what happens next.
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  • From nameless42 on July 30, 2009
    i love this story and can tall that you hvae clearly put a lot of thought into it i hope that you would keep wrighting an update soon
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  • From reamane21 on May 28, 2009
    what happen to next. did they get the whole pay off that my son is died bit switch or will it still cause a problem to little Naruto-kun in the future.
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  • From angelofinnocence on April 27, 2009
    I think it would be good to continue the story, even if you get no reviews. If you are enjoying writing it, you should keep at it. I'll do my best to keep up with it and review as often as I can, I promise. I think you would be making a mistake if you stopped writing it now. Anyway, I am enjoying it thus far. Please update soon.
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  • From jordash00 on April 17, 2009
    I would like to see you continue this story. The story line is unique and I have yet to see one even nearly similar.


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  • From Midnightstorm on April 16, 2009
    Please continue this story. I really like where it's going and you stopped at a very good spot....please do it for theo nes who do read your stories...sometimes i don't have time to review and i rush through the chapters....so sorry about that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2009
    Please continue, I like this story ^^
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