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Reviews for Uzumaki Story

By : OmicronFayt
  • From RacerX78 on March 11, 2007
    the story itself is good I would read more of what you write in the future. The problem is your dialogue is very hard to understand, you should clean the conversation up a bit. Some spell checking will help too, some words were difficult in deciphering and running smoothly with the mood you were setting. Well all in all it's good. It's good someone is writing het there aren't many of them here. There is too many Yaoi. Well hope to see more of your stories.

    I was wondering when you create a new story could you take a shot in creating a Naruto/anko/ kurenai they're my fav pair. Well good luck with your story.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 09, 2007
    Can you clean the conversations up a lil because that is confuising me. At the moment. in four and five the end of the chapter is confusing. What will happen now
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 09, 2007
    Well a nice start. The last chapter was a bit confusing because all of the people were talking all at once. Why does Sakura care now after all this time. She hates Naruto and now she wants to be with him. She is a very confusing person. What will happen in the next chapter for Ino Sakura and Naruto. Shikamaru and Hinata are going to be together.... Not the best pairing that I like but who knows they may make a good couple.
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