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Reviews for Missing Valentine

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From sethian on March 12, 2007
    Haha! What A *charming* story!! I love it! It actually made me laugh more than once and I thank you for that ^.^
    The poems were cute and authentic in my opinion, they suit Naruto just fine!
    I say, write some more, this story has a little something that I love!
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  • From Onawa on March 12, 2007
    Oh, would love to read Naruto's side of the story. Have you thought of doing Valentine's day greeting cards. Your notes were quite clever and I think there is a market for quotes like yours.
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  • From Onawa on March 12, 2007
    HeHEHEHEHEHEHEEEEE!!!! Take THAT!!! I liked the whole entrails part.
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  • From SasuNarulover on March 10, 2007
    THAT WAS SOOOO CUTE!

    I loved it. so so much.

    Kudos on that!

    I like the last poem that Sasuke wrote. That was cute. aha. "You old bastards are witless"

    Genius.

    XD
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  • From MikiyuSado on March 09, 2007
    ohhh! I liked this very much. awwe. Naruto's little poens were kind of clever and soo freaking cheesy that they were cute.
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  • From anapana83 on March 08, 2007
    Lol, sweet ending. Well deserved. Damned council. I liked it very much.
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  • From ANON - VII on March 08, 2007
    What!?!?! i was expecting another xxx type scene...and we don't even get to know the baby's name.....cmon one more...

    VII
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  • From ANON - mary on March 08, 2007
    MORE!! PLEASE!?!?! i like your fanfic very much!
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on March 08, 2007
    AWWWWW!!! NO MORE???? Oh well, when can we start petitioning for the sequel?

    Tree leaves are green
    And so are clover;
    I am so sad that
    This piece is over!

    Let me know if I can help!

    Smoochies and other mushy junk,
    -X-
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  • From Belovedlovex2 on March 08, 2007
    Kawaii! another i want another
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  • From tovah on March 08, 2007
    The last poem sent me into a fit of giggles. It was by far the best!
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  • From DemonicTenshi on March 08, 2007
    That was a very sweet fic and the end made me laugh for some reason I could just imgen the counceils faces and I burst out laughing XD anyways yeah really good.
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  • From llyoung on March 08, 2007
    This was a really sweet little story. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From ffpandayaoi on March 08, 2007
    Pffft! That was funny!! Had me snickering. You're quite talented with those Roses are Red rhymes!! Well done! The only thing that bothered me was the use of the word "ravenette", because words with the ending -ette are normally reserved to mean either little or female, so I kept imagining a tiny female Sasuke. The twist at the end, very cute!! Good story!
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  • From roseying on March 08, 2007
    Thanks for writing this, this fic was really cute and I liked all the little rhymes you came up with. It made my day a little better. I like your ideas and plots for most of your fics and have become a fan. However, I do have a comment: sometimes I find small grammatical and spelling errors and it annoys me because it keeps your good fics from being flawless. Maybe you should look into getting a beta or just proofread before you post the fics up. I'm sure that it would make your fans' reading experience more enjoyable. Thanks again and please keep your fics coming.
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