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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From Telpei on February 04, 2008
    Bittersweet, eh? More like downright depressing. What about a happy ending, eh??? *pouts* So not fair. I hate the way angst makes me feel all sad, but at the same time I just can't resist the beautiful flow of your writing and the unique point of view into Naruto's character. *sighs sadly* If only there was a happy ending that I could look forward to, but alas, I doubt it will be so... :(
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 04, 2008
    I'm glad my reviews made your night because you updating made mine :-) Even though I should have been doing my college stuff. I think Shino/Kankuro pairing would be amazing!!! I really like Shino and he is totally underestimated powerwise and his hotness level. I hope Naruto ending things doesn't turn into a huge catastrophe, but then there wouldn't be much drama if it didn't lol. Your talent is really limitless, and I can't wait to see how everything will unfold. Now I really am a fangirl ^_^
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on February 04, 2008
    I can see it already this story is going to have a sad ending. NO! WHY?! Oh well i am glad you finally had some time to update. I loved this chapter, Naruto is so wonderful, and so is sasuke in his own way. I still hope for a happy ending, ah. They are beautiful. I agree Sasuke needs more then sex, as it is so easy for him to get it from anyone. This has to be something special.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on February 04, 2008
    Um...if you're looking for bittersweet, you've pulled it off fantastically. I just stumbled on this story today and I am blown away by the depth that you have brought out in the characters and the situations. I can see how you could really end their romantic relationship with Naruto's farewell, and yes, that would be sad, but very real. And yet, there still seems to be room to heal what is between them.

    In my opinion, this is a wonderfully done story; definately dark; there is an underlying realism that is almost scary. Dark isn't usually my thing, and I honestly don't see this as one of the fics that I re-read (too much angst) I am really interested in how you finish this story so definately looking forward to updates.
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  • From serenagold on February 04, 2008
    This chapter was incredibly sweet, although all together sad. Its good to see Sasuke in such a state of vulnerability. The two of them have been through too much and at least deserve that one night of togetherness, trust, bonding and closure that Naruto is offering. I'm glad that you are not rushing this. It makes for a much better read and adds a lot more dimensions to the characters. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Jelp on February 04, 2008
    That was very beautiful. I really liked the change in dynamics for Naruto vs. Sasuke. I also really wish for them to be together, though I can see Naruto leaving. I really think that Sasuke, in his own twisted way, really loves Naruto more than anything. He just royally screwed that up.

    I really hope Sasuke fights for Naruto. I know Naruto expects it, but I think Sasuke should fight for Naruto in a different way. Sort of more in his vulnerability, almost begging. Sasuke begging, getting rid of his pride, I think that might help make Naruto see that Sasuke loves him, if he does. Perhaps have Sasuke do such relaxing things to Naruto? No matter what happens, this is quite an intriguing story. Can't wait for the next update! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - gigi on February 04, 2008
    awwwww!!!!! gorgeous!!!!!pleaase!!! i want a hapy ending....i dont wanna naruto leave sasuke!!!!please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 03, 2008
    'I’m so sorry, baby. I used to think I was good enough for both of us. But now I know better. I am not good enough. Or maybe you are too twisted. Either way, this is all we have. Don’t turn it down. Please. One time. Do this one thing for me.’

    This was my favorite part. Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is so complex. Naruto is pretty possessive of him in his own way. The way you portrayed Sasuke's vulnerability was brilliant. I think noone is more perfect for the other than they are for each other. The blow job scence was amazing by the way!!! I want to know what Gaara's motivation is and will there be more from Shino? Sorry for 2 reviews in a row, but I just had to add more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 03, 2008
    I think the approach you took with this chapter was perfect. It was very poignant. Of course Naruto's special night with Sasuke would be more than just sex. I am just so glad you updated...I almost had a coronary when I saw this ^_^ Loved this chapter, will probably read it repeatedly until you update again~ that probably makes me a fangirl in the best sense of that word :-)
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 03, 2008
    Welcome Back! I think this chapter is sooooo romantic and sweet, even if it is in a bitter way. and I'll be sad to see them part company.
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  • From ANON - Melony on February 03, 2008
    I just love how deep this is... sigh... They switch roles and sometimes it seems like they were in that role in the beginning... I love this story!!! XD
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  • From industrialmidnight on January 22, 2008
    I have to say, I was quite afraid to read this fic, but it is absolutely AWESOME. I understand and am guilty of not updating myself, but I would beg you with all the fervor of a highly-maniacal Naruto fangirl--PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN. This fic is abso-freakin-lutely wonderful!
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  • From Deandraquin on January 21, 2008
    Great story so far. I think you've done a great job in portraying both personality's. Although I love the angst and morbidity, I really hope you give sweet and (not so) innocent Naru-kun a happy ending. Can't wait for the next update, but take all the time you need.
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  • From Jelp on January 21, 2008
    Take as much time as you need! Don't apologize to us. We just appreciate that you write it at all. Well, I guess I shouldn't speak for everyone, but *I* appreciate that you write, and you don't need to apologize to me. I hope everything goes well for you in the non-Sasuke/Naruto fanfiction part of your life. ^_^ ~ Jelp
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  • From hisoka on January 21, 2008
    im just wonering how much of what naruto said was a part of his plan.did he really plan out this whole conversation if so...thats kinda freakin scary.hope you can update soon no matter how long that may be youve still got support remember that
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