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By : cloudydayz
  • From on August 18, 2008
    Ooh, I am so glad you updated! I was worried that you were planning to stop writing this. And this was an interesting chapter, finding out what's going on in Sasuke's head. I really, really, really hope he gets what's coming to him. Naruto deserves so much better, especially now that he's recovering finally. Lol, I really want Sasuke to suffer.

    Thank you for the chapter. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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  • From LadyWolf on August 17, 2008
    Hey!! I almost forgot how deep this fic was. This is a truly dark and twisted side of Sasuke that I've ever read. You've written him so well that he jumps off the screen. It's sad thought, to me Sasuke is the one that was broken, that's fragile. He so needs Naruto to keep him sane, even though he seems crazy.

    But these two need each other. I know some bad shit has to happen in order for them to realize this, but what happens will happen.

    I leave my manic ramblings with one of my favorite lines "This to shall pass" Should be both Sasuke's and Naruto's mantras.

    Please update soon
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  • From hsbs on August 17, 2008
    Awesome...awesome...awesome

    This update from Sasukes POV absolutely was worth waiting for.
    Setting up the next chapter so erotically, so beautifully.
    With your descriptions of both of their physical attributes, their inner thoughts and the words they have spoken, without giving away your intentions, you have allowed possibilities to keep me so addicted to this story.

    It is intriguing and darkly sexy.

    Will you marry me?

    love
    garfield
    (hsbs at LJ and DA)
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  • From ANON - Sancta on August 17, 2008
    You did it! You came back with a vengeance :huggles: I'm so proud of ya!
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  • From zanax on August 17, 2008
    Woah, this story is really dark...

    But I like it! I am a sucker for happy endings, but I have a feeling I won't be getting one this time :(
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  • From Kalos on August 17, 2008
    Holly C*** they are F****** Insane!!! @.@ OMG I love this fic it's soooo twisted(in a good way) that I cant begin to make up my mind on who is more out of it. I men seriously it's like they are competing to see who is more out there. I want to hate Sasuke and I want to smack Naruto but in the end, some how they make me go awwww poor sick little puppy.o.o; Im sad that I only found out about your fick yesterday but im glad that i got to read 18 chapters in one.... two go's, seriously i locked my self in my room and put up a do not distub sign up O.O. I look forward to your next chapter and pleeas now that you ahve come back to this fic dont stay away too long. O.~
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on August 17, 2008
    Actually I very much agree with you, cloudy. This chapter helps us –well me I guess –see Sasuke’s point of view during Naruto’s efforts to make this a ‘one night’ deal. Just like all the other chapters you’ve written with Sasuke’s point of view in them, this one doesn’t leave any disappointment whatsoever. It was an excellent update! Also I can now see Sasuke realizes Naruto is trying to leave. I’m not surprised Sasuke isn’t planning on letting Naruto go. Don’t keep us in the waiting for too long! I look forward to what you have in store for us reading fans in the next chapter!

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From hisoka on August 17, 2008
    sasukes either paranoid or hes extremely smart, i think its alittle of both especially with the way he thinks of things.if whoever you healed became yours after than doctors would have alotta people by now and those people would ahve free medical attention probly...yano,that wouldnt be so bad.well hope you can update, eventually
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  • From UzumakiLover on August 17, 2008
    Yay! I'm glad you took a step back and showed Sasuke side, it really did put everything out there. I got where Sasuke was coming from and though I thought him crazy at first...in an Uchiha kinda way it makes perfect since. Great chapter can't wait for the next one. No rush mind you, this story is worth waiting for ^^
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  • From ANON - animelover on August 16, 2008
    wow, this update was absolutely worth the wait. it was just so darkly beautiful with the descriptive language evoking feelings. you do good work, and i look forward to sasuke's rocky road. seems like it will be a learning experience for everybody.
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  • From Sendrine on August 16, 2008
    Thank you for updating Breaking Apart :) This is one of the best pieces of fiction that I have read. The story has really drawn me in and I can honestly say that waiting for the update was like torture lolz.. I love how detailed the story is and how you get really deep into the minds of the characters. The internal dialog is what really makes it so amazing. I took your advice and re-read those chapters as you suggested and I am glad I did. I loved and enjoyed Sasuke's discussion with Neji. I think that he he truly helped Sasuke take a step back from his mania and forced him to think about what he was doing and what he really wanted.

    The internal battles Naruto and Sasuke are fighting are just so intense and emotional. Plotting and planning against each other but loving each other at the same time... madness! As messed up as their relationship is - I honestly cannot really see these two with anyone other than each other. Sasuke is a twisted, selfish bastard yes - but I just cannot bring myself to hate him for all that he has done. I'm looking forward to seeing what he plan on doing next very much actually. And Naruto too >_< He really is a surprising dobe. Again, thank you for updating and sharing more of your talent with us.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on August 16, 2008
    Oh and also Sasuke didn't give Naruto what he needed when he cheated with everyone! He had to know that promiscuity would come back to haunt him. Besides if he wouldn't let Naruto sleep with other people what made him think it would be acceptable for him...just had to add that point ;-) Really am happy over this chapter!
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  • From Jelp on August 16, 2008
    YAY! I'm so very happy to see this fic updated again. :-) I had actually re-read the previous chapter when I saw there was an edit, so I was doubly excited when I saw the update. I think I might end up re-reading the whole thing again some time soon.

    I hope everything is going well for you. This chapter felt right in place in continuation from last chapter, and I think it's all starting to fit how the two of them sort of missed what each other was saying/thinking. While I get the feeling that Naruto won't be able to truly ever get rid of Sasuke, I still get the feeling that Naruto will have some sort of "revenge" for Sasuke's unfaithfulness. I mean, yes Sasuke took care of him, but he went behind his back too. Though, in some ways, that betrayal was what sort of woke Naruto up. Still, I hope that Sasuke get the idea that what he did was wrong. lol

    Looking forward to the next chapter! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Ivy on August 16, 2008
    So glad that you updated!!! It was good that you wrote this chapter in Sasuke's perspective to see what was going on in his mind. Its great how lingering questions are flushed out and answered in each chapter. They both seem a little out there with their reasoning for their decisions but that's what makes this story so compelling. I like the dynamic you've established and I'm glad you don't rush your lemons. Please don't take months for your next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on August 14, 2008
    This last chapter had tears running down my cheeks. The music I had playing didnt help at all (In your head by Zombie). This story is so painful for me. Just thingking about Sasuke fucking everyone...it breaks me. Weird, huh? Anyway, I hope you get to update soon and also, if you have a mailing list can you please add me? marqqui @ yahoo . com

    Truly sad

    Moonmoore
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