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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From sainaru on March 01, 2007
    plz plz plz let naru-chan leave sasuke and find sumone who really loves him. BY THE WAY LOVING YOUR STORY speacially how u portray sasuke i love him when he's all crazy. i also really love it when naruto finds sumone else to love him and he get so jealous the bastard deserves it.;)
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  • From Onawa on March 01, 2007
    Whoa - well written. Very, very dark.... Don't groan, but is there going to be any sweetness in this? Poor, poor Naruto!
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  • From celticfx on March 01, 2007
    I LOVE your story! You've written it with so much emotion and expressed it through all of the characters SO well! I can't wait to see how Naruto acts upon Sasuke's betrayal. I would love to seem him get a little revenge after all the Sasuke has done to him. Wow! Great job!
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  • From waruwaru on March 01, 2007
    Eh...I think it good but i don't really get it...*or maybe i'm just an idiot?*
    Sasuke is in LOVE with Naruto, but fuck's Shino? Sure, he get a bit frustrated but hey...he can just jack off. or...something...>__>
    Cheating is just so...harch...do you really CHEAT on someone you claim to LOVE? I think that Naruto should tell that sheating bastard that he KNOW'S that he is fucking around.
    Anyway - it's an intresting story, really looking forward to the Naruto and Shino talk.^^
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  • From Starryeyedstar on March 01, 2007
    What a lovely fic you've got going here. It's such a nice change from all the mushy romances you see out there. It's a welcome change. I'm excited to see what Naruto will say to Shino, though, I have to say, if I were in Naruto's shoes...Shino would be a dead ninja walking! *snickers*
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  • From Kaishiou on March 01, 2007
    omg. wicked totally wicked. i love your depiction of Sasuke, he sounds totally sadistic and insane at some levels. i wish to read the next chapter soon, so do continue writing.
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  • From ursweetheartless on February 28, 2007
    that was deliciously fragmented and poetic, a completly believable insane!sasuke. something about sasuke makes me want to either hurt him or turn him into this crazy meta-avenger of some sort, and i feel like this characterization here is spot on for Sasuke, falling apart in his own head. please please continue, its hurts a little but i am teh masochist ^.^
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  • From Stacy on February 28, 2007
    You said that it was dark.....and boy were you right! And I loved every single line of it!! Update quickly
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