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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From marquesgue1 on March 03, 2007
    Aww man... Naruto :S... and Shino umm does that means that he'd like to be with Naruto after his final comment? Sasuke - well, what can I say I mean is he just sleeping with Shino because Naruto won't sleep with him? Call me dmb but I'm as clueless as Naruto and the fic's making me really sad - which I supposes is good lol because I guess that's the reaction you're going for (Hina no baka, it's called angst!) Anyway, really liking this one so I'll be looking out for the update ^_^

    Hina xXxx
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  • From UzumakiLover on March 03, 2007
    Can I just say this...very few writers can do what you do. You hold such power in your chapters, in your words. I read chapter two the other day. I read it and moved on...but then it came back to me. I could recall the chapter as if it were right in front of me. Your story stays within the mind of the people who read them, some say I have the same gift...I'm not too sure. Yet, you are very gifted and I hope to see you grow and write many more things. This chapter was not a disappoint. I'm glad Naruto got some insight, small as it might have been. I too fear for Naruto, Sasuke could cause him such harm, and I think Naruto would allow it, because his love runs so deep for him. Wonderful written and I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From celticfx on March 03, 2007
    Thank you for such a speedy update! Wow, there was a lot to take in this chapter. I kept wanting Naruto to punch Shino, but then, we all would've missed out on their enlightening conversation. Things just keep getting more and more interesting! I wonder if Naruto will have any run-ins with Sasuke's other lovers? I can't wait to see how Naruto acts around Sasuke now that he and Shino have had their talk. Either way, keep up the great work! I look forward to your next update! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kaa-san on March 02, 2007
    Shino is as much of a twisted prick as Sasuke, but at least he seems more stable. Poor Naruto.
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  • From Stacy on March 02, 2007
    Awesome!! What can I really say?? You wrote it!!
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on March 02, 2007
    X3 X3 X3 You're making my psych bunnies go nuts over here. XD XD XD
    At this rate, Shino's just confusing the poor boy. Naruto can't understand something so out of the context he's been thinking in, especially to the extent you're taking this. He doesn't know what the uber controlfreak mindset is like; he can't comprehend what Shino's trying to warn him about. Dammit, Shino, you're smarter than that, you should know: spell it out for the poor boy! ...just a thought I was mentally screaming to the computer. =9,,9= ;; Kudos on making me do that.
    But surely someone like Iruka or Tsunade would have noticed something disturbing by now? Or, yanno, anyone with a brain? This whole web isn't that convoluted, is it?
    Wow, I'm interested in a plot and hot at the same time? This is a novel cocktail of a concept. *laughs* I'd feel terrible if this weren't fiction. Hell, I feel kinda bad anyway.
    Idunno. I just know you're my current fic-god. *worship*
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  • From ANON - Just another no one on March 02, 2007
    please update asap!
    im'a soo exited what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on March 02, 2007
    I love you! You have no idea how long it's been since I've read a GOOD naruto fic. I was starting to give up hope and then poof here you come along like magic! I could kiss you and hug you.....em but you might not like that so instead I will just say thank you so much. I love a little sadistic madness and not many people can pull that off cause they tend to go to overbored and it dosen't seem real or they don't go far enough cause there scared to be dark. You've achieved the perfect balance. And the twists that come along with it! like that Shino part or in the second chapter with how aware naruto is. It's like you think you know but each chapter makes you think over the previous chapter. It's so in depth! I love you again! Thank you so much I can't wait for the next chapters^^
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  • From dragonagility on March 02, 2007
    Love it!

    No matter how dark this fanfic turns, I hope that it has a happy ending!
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  • From ursweetheartless on March 02, 2007
    oh sasuke, you freaking mental case! >.< sigh and /shino/? i don't have anything against him really, but dag yo, has he really slept with everyone else? because shino wouldn't be at the top of my list... poor poor naruto, both of them are crackedand broken. good job
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  • From Shosuro on March 02, 2007
    Damn, that was some dark stuff. I really like the twistedness of the story.
    I kinda want to know what kind of stress or what was going through your mind in order to give us such a twisted fiction? I hope that you update soon....maybe tomorrow....or that too soon?.....damn I think I am just Jonesing for a good story!
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  • From UzumakiLover on March 01, 2007
    damn...this is good, i'm kinda scared to se what will happen next, yet at the same time I'm dying to know. Very addictive...wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - goldie on March 01, 2007
    Yay, finally a sadistic Sasuke fic that doesn't fail! I'm glad that you've gone deep into Sasuke's POV so we readers can at least see where he is coming from... despite being off the wall nuts. XD

    He seems to care about Naruto though, and it's obvious that Shino or whoever else he sleeps with aren't important to him. Just people to satisfy his lust. But from Naruto's vulnerable and damaged POV, things are going to seem more dramatic than they are. (right?)

    Shino smirking at him was pretty rude though, and he won't be so cocky when he sees he's just being used.

    Either way, I love how this story's going and can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 01, 2007
    well. this is an... intersting story. i can't wait to see what happens. sadistic as this may sound, the entire reason i clicked to read this was because of the rape warning, even though i've read SO many rape-fics, i think i have to read them all... anyway, good job so far, update soon!!~
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  • From ANON - Kayla on March 01, 2007
    Please write more!!!
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