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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on March 03, 2007
    wow i'm totally getting addicted to this story now, i was so pissed at sasuke and shino b4 but now i just want to know what sasuke is going to do next , i think he's totally going to flip out if he finds out that shino likes naruto too :S, poor lil naru has no clue, well not much of a clue, can't wait to see what happens to open his eyes, update soon k
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  • From ANON - Bubbles on March 03, 2007
    Waaaahhh!!!
    Sasuke thoughts are so weird, they're scary!!!
    anyway great chappy again, but short...or mayby I'm just greedy!!! LOL
    Please, update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - Kayla on March 03, 2007
    I'm really loving the fact that a new chapter is out everyday, but this is so good, that I still need more. It's like an addiction. -.-; What a sad soul I am lol. =^.^=
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 03, 2007
    Sasuke scares you? Hell, sasuke is scaring me!!! I mean - his character is really really dark in this fic and it's pissing me off that he's acting so f****** superiori deciding when Naruto has 'put out' so to speak when he's probably been screwing half of Konoha!!! Anyway, really good as it was the last chapter ^_^ can't wait for the next one.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From UzumakiLover on March 03, 2007
    O.o Sasuke crazy. That's all to it...he's fucking crazy! Like trapped behind a glass wall kinda crazy...hell I'm scared of him...and at the same time...I find it oddly arousing! I love it! Though...Shino's not gonna die...is he?! I mean I know he's gonna be pissed at Shino but still...Sasuke won't kill him will he?
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  • From waruwaru on March 03, 2007
    Somehow I find this story really fascinating! I just waiting to see how far Sasuke and Naruto is going to take this… before the BOMB finally blows up in there faces.
    And Sasuke is really like a psychopath, that has ONE and ONLY obsession. Naruto in this case…somehow is the only way he know how to live… see:
    His first obsession was:
    1)Be better than his brother (when he was little)
    2) Getting power(the snake had someting to do with that to.>__>)
    3) Killing Itachi (Avenge his clan)
    4) Make Naruto his possession. (His current priority )

    Sasuke had it coming…he was fucking raised to be a waco/psyko!=S *He kind of scares me*
    Anyway…all exited about this dark fic! Can’t wait to see more of it - your doing a good job on it!^^
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  • From ANON - insomniac001 on March 03, 2007
    Wow! YOu really have to update this, yeah! So sad............ ;.; poor naruto, going through so much hell..............*sigh* its' so sad... Update soon! ^^
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  • From kotikiz on March 03, 2007
    I love it!!!! PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - goldie on March 03, 2007
    Geez Shino, talk about mind screwage...

    This chapter doesn't disappoint at all. Far from it! At least we now see some of Shino's viewpoint; it's interesting to learn that he also loves Naruto. Oh Shino..

    Naruto is so lost right now. I hope he doesn't unintentionally do anything to 'upset' Sasuke, especially since that bastard's so unpredictable. (and possessive!) Naruto's optimistic mind is what seems to draw so many to him, and I hope he can someday rise up from his damaged state. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does in his suspicion. (I'm almost worried about Shino... XD)

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  • From sainaru on March 03, 2007
    i love this story i never read something like this before keep it up but i hate to see naruto so hurt. at least it's different than the other mushy junk with naruto and sasuke.....can't wait for the next chapter^^
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  • From Starryeyedstar on March 03, 2007
    Once again. Awesome. I love the fact that this isn't another fic that'll make me cry. The fandom of Naruto really needed a fic like this.

    I love the interaction between Shino and Naruto, and odd couple in my opinion, but it worked so wonderfully in this fic, same with Sasuke and Shino. Ah, but I do love Shino...enough of my fangirling~! XD

    I also love the pace of the fic...it moves slowly, but you give us just enough to keep up coming back for more.

    Can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - dana on March 03, 2007
    i really like the story i always say that a jealous possesive sasuke is the best but when you add sadistic it is just theat little something extra that makes it all seem so specail. are you going to make this end as a sasuxnaru or is naruto going to end up with shino or soeone else. can't wait to find out at the next update.
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 03, 2007
    oooh I like this, and I can get Sasuke...it really is never about love, not really, to those who rape and hurt those they claime to love is pretty dumb,in thier minds they THINK they love you, but its more of a power issue, they get off of being able to dominate and in Sasuke's case, to be the Hero Naruto needed in order to worm his way into Naruto's heart, its again about control and Yes I agree there is lust and desire in there, Rape and all sexual assaults are crimes of passion, but rarely about love in general or arousal, its more like they seem to get off on the power to control, to dominate, its a heady sort of aphrodisiac...ok enough of that, I cant wait to read more on this, although I know its dark and sad, and I hurt for Naru, I also know Naru is a fighter, so I dont believe Sasuke no matter how hard he will try, will actualy break Naruto, I think and hope in the end, Naruto will break him or at least free his heart from the person who has it chained to his..and no all that stuff above is not physco babble, or at least not too much, lol, I am a surviver of rape and abuse so I have come to understand some things on this subject and yes some may find it wierd that a rape/abused person reads stuff like this but for me, its sort of an outlet..in my mind I know its not real, and being said, I also know that there is the possiblity that ther will be hero so to speak or Naruto being able to protect and defend himself and not let Sasuke keep doing this to him, things I once wished for, for a knight in shining amor to save me, to have this ubber strength to protect myself...of course none of it happened, but readin stories that do have them in it, sort of helps heal old wounds...ok babbled enough sorry for that, but I do like this and wish to read more, its an interesting read and I cnt wait to read more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From waruwaru on March 03, 2007
    “You can break him without even trying. For your own sake, don’t do it. He is not stable.”

    I don’t know why but this brought a smile to my face! I was like: “And he probably will Sasuke.”
    Sometimes when I read fictions Sasuke always depend on that Naruto is going to stay with him for all eternity - Just because Naruto loves him. But somehow I don’t feel like this is the case in this story. I don’t think that Naruto going to stay whit Sasuke if he keeps doing what he is doing… and you said it yourself:

    “Please, keep in mind, we do have a damaged, vulnerable Naruto in this fic and not a vengeful Naruto (at least not yet….;-)”

    At least not yet. - That made me strangely happy! And I can wait for more of this fiction!^^
    It so dark and intense - even if in some parts I don’t really get Sasuke’s arguments and wants to strangle the living shit out of him. Just hope the “at least not yet” - comes soon!^^

    Loving the fiction!
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  • From Kaishiou on March 03, 2007
    ohhh. so Shino likes Naruto! duh, i'm so slow (face smack) do continue writing.
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