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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on March 06, 2007
    wow, awesome defense shino has, and i luved the reaction sasuke had when he first learned that naruto knew about his affairs , i can't wait to read more please update soon :P
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  • From sainaru on March 06, 2007
    This is soo good how did you come up with something like this. I like how sasuke is a complete nut case lol it's almost like he has two personalities.CAN"T wait for the next chapter keep this fic as dark as it is. :)
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  • From anapana83 on March 06, 2007
    I don't mind Sasuke's sadisticness at all. Its what makes the story different, ne? Anyway, wow, so Sasuke now knows that Naruto knows. This is gonna get crazy i'm sure. I feel kinda bad for Naruto. Surely this all stems out of love for the dobe...right? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - dana on March 06, 2007
    i so love this chapter it was really neat. is the technique that shino used a real one or one that you made up. i also like how you made sasuke think to make his chakra poisionious to shino's bugs to that was original. i can't wait to read another chapter of crazy sexy cool sasuke (that's my nickname for your fic). can't wait for the naxt update.
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  • From ANON - dar on March 06, 2007
    Wow....I love the fact that you made sasuke not be able to kill anyone he wants, giving him that all powerful feel. I am anticipating and scared of naruto of what sasuke will do to him, I hope Naruto will put up something of a fight, but thinking of his past....I really anticipate reading the next chappie!!!!! Please Keep Up the Good Work!!!! and Please UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From UzumakiLover on March 06, 2007
    *_* you enjoy my work! Well as much as I loved you before...now I love you even more! This was good, man I was so scared for Shino's sake...but damn Shino's got some mad skills. Give it up for the Bugman! Wow...Naruto is in deep shit isn't he? I mean like shoulder deep...man...it's dark and I know bad stuff is going to happen, yet...I can't stop reading. Also I loved when Sasuke found out...Shino came off as the nanny nanny kinda guy. Mmhmm your good...keep it up dear!
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  • From ANON - animehead on March 06, 2007
    With the crap going on in my screwed up life, it really makes me LOVE this story. It's dark, and at the momment...so am I. I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter. I could go on and on, but then I would be just ranting about my sucky situation and I know you don't want to hear that BS, so I'll just say that I am loving this story, and you have gained a loyal reader and reviewer.
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  • From ANON - purplekitty on March 05, 2007
    You know I've never really cared for Shino. Not that I didn't like him he just never appealed to me (plus I hate bugs). And I've never considered a Naruto/Shino fic. But if you write one I will definitly read it!
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  • From Kativachan on March 05, 2007
    Oh my gosh. I check this site qutie often to see if you have updated! I love this story so much, and you do seem to update often, which makes me very happy! I hope you post the next chapter soon because I'm extremly anxious to see it!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on March 05, 2007
    I love this story! I rocks. You must write more. And SasuNaru is sooo awesome. You are very talented. Please continue the story!
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  • From Kativachan on March 05, 2007
    Oh, this is getting good! I've been reading this since chapter one, but I haven't reviewed! I'm sorry! I always review when I read stories, but I didn't have the time to review.

    Anyway, I wonder what Naruto will think when Sasuke suddenly makes him his lover. Is he going to fight it? How will he take it in the end? And what will Shino say?
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  • From anapana83 on March 04, 2007
    Wow, Sasuke is so seriously sadistic here. *shivers* Who's gonna protect poor Naruto from all of this? Anyway, like it so far. Do update esoon.
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 04, 2007
    good god! he scares me too!! and, no, i don't find this as cliche as i thougt it might be when i clicked on it. this is honestly something i haven't seen great job, and i can't wait for the next chapter!!~
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  • From ANON - mukki on March 04, 2007
    ah! Update soon!! This story is captivating @_@
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  • From Vien on March 04, 2007
    That’s it, dobe. Want me. You are going to need all of your desire pretty soon to survive becoming my lover. And time is up, baby. Time is up. ~~ OMG I love Sasuke in this. And I love you for uploading that fast. I can't wait for more xD Sasuke is such a bastard and this is why I like him the most. In manga he is little emo but in your story he is everything I wish he would be. Luv ya ;*
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