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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2007
    I so so love this fanfic!!!!!! I read it in one swift and i fucking love it. It has so much angst and its so twisted!!! Cant wait for the lemon *_*

    P:S: Possessive Sasuke and vulnerable Naruto is love *_*
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  • From UzumakiLover on March 08, 2007
    Yeah...I'm scared...but I wanna read it...because Naruto came off as a little pain freak kinda. He knows Sasuke's plans on ripping him a new one, one for his own personal use...yet he's all hard-ons and swollen balls there. Hehe but I did enjoy Naruto's smart remark about Sasuke's had everyone else as well. Got a chuckle out of me. It lighted the mood some, which was nice. So yeah I wanna read it...I know it's not going to trun out all sunshine and rainbows...but I have hope that it won't be all bad...something at least will make Naruto continue to want Sasuke. Oh...and will Sasuke every start working with a full deck of cards again, or will he remain crazy?
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  • From Zrina on March 08, 2007
    Here I was thinking about what to write in this review when my brain went "Ah, someone who is using all my favorite letters in their fic: B & D, S & M, S & D... M-O-U-S-E!" I don't know where that last part came from, but it continued. "B-O-N-D-A-GE, M-O-U-S-E! Bondage Mouse, Bondage Mouse.." At that point I decided that I had drank a little bit too much Mtn Dew this morning.

    Then of course there is the old joke (roles switched for yaoi goodness):
    Judge: Sorry, Minnie, you can't divorce Mickey because you think he's an idiot.
    Minnie: I didn't say he was an idiot, I said he was Fucking Goofy!

    Yeah...Okay.... About your story now: I think it is fooking HOT. I love hardcore smut (am guilty, *raises hand*) espeically when it gets all twisted and both parties end up happy with the relationship.

    Anyway, can't wait for more! I have loved every chapter of it so far. Oro got what he deserved and I love how you get into Sasuke's twisted little mind!
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  • From anapana83 on March 08, 2007
    Wow, you're almost scaring me lol. I will brave it and read the next chap. This chap made me quite curious. Sasuke is a sadistic bastard here. Something tells me that thats not the tip of the iceberg. Good job.
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  • From ANON - dar on March 08, 2007
    YAHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!YAY THANKS 4 THE CHAPTER!!!!SADISTIC BUT I LIKE!!! Pleaes update soon!!! i really look forward to it!!!
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  • From sainaru on March 08, 2007
    yah finally the smexy scene is coming(it's coming hmmm that sounds weird) oh ohi can't wait for the next chapter and i see u like katavia work too i a fellow lover of her stories lol, i see the next chapter has a sadistic sasuke poor poor naru-chan stuck with a crazy uchiha ( someone save my naru-chan from bastard boy plz lol), plz hurry and update
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  • From Kativachan on March 08, 2007
    YAY! I love you! I'm sorry if I bug you. Haha, but between this and waiting for chapter 345 of the manga, I am going crazy...
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  • From kotikiz on March 08, 2007
    aaaa... I can't wait... please update!!!
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  • From ANON - O.O on March 08, 2007
    AH! PLEASE UPDATE! I'm going crazy!!!!!!
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  • From Kativachan on March 07, 2007
    I go through withdrawel when you don't update...this fic is like a drug...
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 07, 2007
    oh and I also wanted to add just like everyone else is, SAsuke is some screwed up piece of work, he is definitly a scary charactor and as much as I hoped it wouldnt come to it, I know there will be pain involved in one way or another, good job of making Sasuke ubber asshole, he soo fits it lol, even though I lurves him...but in this, hes certificably nutso and scares the jeepers creepers out of me...guys with his mind set oftne do, you want to hit upside the head for being so self absorbed and dense but on the other hand are scared to set them off on some homicidal rage lol, huggles and smiles Mija.....:-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 07, 2007
    ooh dont worry, I am not disturbed at all...wierd huh?? you think not being disturbed about it makes me a disturbed sort of person?? lol, dunno, Ive always been a bit odd like that, and yes its fanfiction, when things like that happen in RL its a tradgedy, but one a person can survive and move on from, for the most part, lots dont, but anyhow I am liking this fic, I sooooooo want to see Sasuke get broken by Naru but if it doesnt happen soo k, as you said and I have said this is a story, not real life and that is something I can deal with, with storys you can write what ever sort of ending you want, be it a happpy or sad one and I myself being the type of person who adores LOTS of styles, dont mind reading fics about stuff that has happend to me before..so no worries k?? doing a great job, Sasuke reminds me of a really possesive bf I had, he was not nice at all, very abusive, and me very stupid lol, anyhow, great work hope to read more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 06, 2007
    this is coming along very well, and, actually, i'm liking the idea of shinoxnaru now too... but dang, that's not supposed to happen! shino is MY man!!! >
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  • From celticfx on March 06, 2007
    I think you're doing a fantastic job with the perspectives! No need to worry! In fact, you do an amazing job picking up on details from each chapter.

    I really enjoyed the exchange between Sasuke and Shino. It's great to see someone stand up to Sasuke with such confidence. Throughout the anime and manga, I've felt quite indifferent about Shino, but you've made me really enjoy his character.

    Please update soon! (:
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  • From TakiTenshi on March 06, 2007
    This story is fast becoming one of my favourites.

    Now Sasuke knows Naruto knows...dun-dun-dun-duuuunnn!! What will happen next? Oh lawdy, send poor Naru-chan a savior! Don' let Sasuke have his way with him - please!

    P.S: How I got the italics to work? [Lmao], I used to have this same problem when I first started writing a story and when I got told how to do it, I spent five minutes of my reading time thinking how foolish I was for not noticing something this simple and easy. It's basically like any other html programming thingy-majig.

    Italics: < i > "Your speech or whatever" < / i > (Of course, you'll have to get rid of the space).

    Bold: < b > "Your speech or whatever" < / b > (Again, delete the space).

    To underline: < u > "Blah-Blah" < / u > (You know what to do to the space...)

    That's all I know at the moment. But there's also headings:

    < h1 > "Title" < / h1 > - This is the biggest form of headings. If you want the font to be smaller, for example, as a sub-title or something or the other, simply change the h1 to h2 and so on and so forth. H4 is the smallest, h1 being the largest.

    Errm, I hope I was of some use to you. Update soon!

    Ki`Tara
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