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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2007
    You spoiled us by updating so often, and now you're killing us!
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on March 11, 2007
    Eh. You know what I mean.
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  • From ANON - Damp on March 11, 2007
    Let the lemon begin! *I'm so evil when it comes to rape Naruto* (forgive me naruto!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2007
    Still interested in story. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - BlooShadowFox on March 09, 2007
    oh my gosh! i love it! please update soon im dying of mere excitment over that last chapter!
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  • From Kativachan on March 09, 2007
    Well, either way I think the lemon will be interesting. I do wonder what will be going through Naruto's mind the entire time, though. And what will he think of Sasuke afterwards? Will he trust him? I'm glad you said this is still a romance story, because I do love dark stories with romance. I rarely read/write fluff because romance isn't all happy and fun. I love angst/romance because it's so much more real. However, my favorite type of stories are those with extremly angsty plots, with a happy ending.

    And you like my stories? I didn't know that...
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  • From ANON - animehead on March 08, 2007
    Well, you're not turning me off LOL! It is nice to read something different. I honestly really like it. I can even look past the fact that he cheated on my sweet Naru because it's fresh and new, and well, I've run out of things to say. It's really good though. Okay, now I've run out things to say.
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  • From Jelp on March 08, 2007
    I really do hope you make Naruto enjoy his er..."true" first time. Poor Naruto. ~ Jelp
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  • From celticfx on March 08, 2007
    this chapter was great! don't worry about sasuke being too sadistic. honestly, it's great for this story and you're just staying true to what his character is within the world you've created. if he was suddenly giving naruto roses or buying him chocolates...then it'd just be weird. keep up the great work!
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 08, 2007
    This chapter made me very very sad - this is angst at its most extreme I think and extremely dark. But I liked it, I thought it was well written :)... but Sasuke seems to me like he's lost it, there's this seriously twisted edge to his character that really makes me want to kill (?) him. I mean, he doesn't even acknowledge that what he was doing with Shino was wrong, he just didn't want Naruto to find out because he wouldn't 'understand' but not because he regreeted it and then he has the f****** nerve to call Naruto a liar? Damn teme! Anyway... I have mixed feelings on the upcoming lemon - I want to read it and yet because I know it's probably going to be awfull for Naruto... hmm... well update soon and we'll see, ne?

    ^_^ Hina
    xXxx
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  • From yeagerbomb on March 08, 2007
    oooh! this is really good, and i can't wait for more! i'm actually kind of excited for this lemon (of course, i'm always excited for a decent lemon) and i hope it's good! i haven't read much bondage/BDSM, but this looks promising... hope to see another chapter soon!~
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  • From kotikiz on March 08, 2007
    WAW!!! Fantastic!!!! Cant wait next chapter!!!! UPDAPE SOON.
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  • From Stacy on March 08, 2007
    Yeah! It's about time that lemon showed up! I'll be at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.....don't make me wait to long!!!!
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  • From waruwaru on March 08, 2007
    For fuck sake Naruto snap out of it and kill/beat him! *pulls hair in frustration*

    Sorry...a bit dratsic there!^^;
    Sasuke is really...a psyko...I mean really...Damn - he scares me.
    I just wonder what will happen after Sasuke..well kind of Rape's Naruto there on the bed.
    Oh, my - this is getting really intresting...
    Update soon, ne?
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  • From ANON - Minjin on March 08, 2007
    ^This comment was mine lol forgot to write my name XDDDD
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