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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - jin on March 28, 2007
    this story makes me sad:( poor naruto. i really hate stumbling upon stories where he's powerless.
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  • From Minjin on March 28, 2007
    This is so hot in a way *_* wow you are an amazing writer im your fan!!!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on March 28, 2007
    Keep up the good work! Like it!
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  • From Jelp on March 28, 2007
    I'm glad Naruto isn't completely broken. He should make sure that Sasuke realizes that too. Please update soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 28, 2007
    I shudder at what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Hanna on March 27, 2007
    Blah, too depresing.


    I fucking hate Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Damp on March 27, 2007
    I'm not trying to make this into an insult but it's not exactly a compliment either if that's what you think, so you can take it as a compliment or as an insult. You sounded like a therapist for some odd reason. I don't know why but you sounded so...smart o.O right then and there.
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  • From Zrina on March 27, 2007
    /drools... I liked that chapter a lot. It was interesting to get into Naruto's head. And of course they fit! The sadist and the masochist! I can't wait to read the next chapter, it promises to be really freaking HOT!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on March 26, 2007
    UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate!!
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  • From kotikiz on March 24, 2007
    I guess there will not be updates... it's realy sad...
    but I still hope...
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  • From littleolmee on March 21, 2007
    Wow, just read the story so far and all I can say is wow. Dark, yes . . . hot scenes, well yeah . . .
    I like how you have presented it. Sasuke 'saving' Naruto from Orochimaru and killing everyone, I could see it. The possessiveness Sasuke has is interesting too and how Naruto reacts to it. I just wonder if Naruto will take everything and really be broken how Sasuke wants him or rebel? You have given us readers a little peek of Naruto rebeling; even going so far as to suggest leaving Sasuke or cheating on him. Please stay with the story, I'll be keeping a watch for more from you. Thanks for sharing your story.
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  • From Kativachan on March 15, 2007
    I'm going through withdrawel! Wahaha! I hope you update soon.
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  • From kotikiz on March 14, 2007
    It's realy sad that there are no updades so long... please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2007
    *cries* Update.........I'm gonna die!
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  • From kotikiz on March 12, 2007
    UPDATE! please...
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