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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From Jelp on April 12, 2007
    I really hope Naruto finally gets that if Sasuke hadn't been screwing around with, well, everyone, that when his turn finally came, Naruto would be very very hurt instead of very very pleased. I also hope that Naruto gets that Sasuke does love him, in his Sasuke-ish sort of way. Hopefully Sasuke can also lighten up, the teme. Love him dearly, but he's still such a teme. ~ Jelp
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  • From OceanBlue on April 12, 2007
    Sasuke definately has some problems. It's like he has a split personality!
    Oh, and a question.
    What did Sasuke mean when he said 'Kyuubi is being true to our deal?'
    Did he talk to Kyuubi?
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 12, 2007
    heehee. thanks for responding to my review. It's just that dark fics depress me, but this does the exact opposite. oh I hope you continue with such excellent updates! I think I have a dark side because I love this story sooo much 0_0 (is supposed to do work)
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  • From ANON - rini on April 12, 2007
    Sasuke should pay for his sins.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi_No_Ryu on April 12, 2007
    Naruto is such a doormat in this fic...yet this kind of Naruto is still oh so satisfying.

    UPDATE SOON~!
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  • From ANON - Gonrie on April 12, 2007
    Love this story though still not fully understands Sasuke.
    Good job though!
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  • From UzumakiLover on April 12, 2007
    My I'm overjoyed by the out come. Normally you'd expect Sasuke to lose control while with Naruto, and to some level he did. Though it was great to read when Sasuke did take him, but held back enough to not fill him fully. I've never seen that before. Also the blood play did turn out rather well, I would have thought Naruto would have been a bit more fearful due to his treatment at sound, it just goes to show how well Sasuke is a blocking such things out of his mind. Heh also the end just made it all more wonderful, just enough fluff, Naruto got to pet Sasuke to sleep. Man...I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter. Overall I'm your fan girl...no matter what you write or whoo you pair up, I have faith in you skills woot!
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 12, 2007
    Wow, I had mixed views on how I was going to react to the lemons in this story but I liked it :d I think you wrote it well and the insight into both their thoughts helped make it hw I thought - and Naruto yielded as you put it. I can't wait to see where they are going to go from here, it'll be interesting to see. Anyway - last two chapters were really good so yeah ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on April 12, 2007
    I almost had second thoughts on reading this, but I'm glad I took the chance. This is such an excellent story. I hope to read more...

    *is dead from the sheer intensity of this story*

    will Sasuke love Naruto?
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  • From kotikiz on April 12, 2007
    Waw!!! thanks!!! I really love this story!!! This fic is much different than others... There are so many emotions, I fill it... as I think Sasuke has 2 sides: first is love and second is sickness, and they both for Naruto...

    SO, plese update soon...

    p.s. sorry for my english... it's not my speaking language...
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on April 12, 2007
    =^,,^= *full of yaoi happy*
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  • From ANON - Kativachan(2 lazy to log in) on April 12, 2007
    YAY! You finally wrote the lemon! I was waiting soooo long for it! But I understand that it would take a while, and it was sooo amazing! It was worth it! Hmm, I wonder what will happen afterwards, eh?
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  • From emp78 on April 12, 2007
    All I can say is "WOW". I don't get in to the pain thing, but the way you write their reactions...Hot!
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  • From ANON - animehead on April 12, 2007
    Brilliant! Sasuke is so dark and I fine myself really enjoying it. Until this fic I used to shy away from the darker fanfics, but for some reason I am getting into them now. I want to write one, but I don't think I am capable of it. Maybe I will try some day.

    Anyway, the lemon was perfect. Everything just...fit. It screamed power. I think you did an excellent job. I enjoyed it. I will continue to read as long as you continue to write.
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  • From animeaddict666 on April 12, 2007
    Well, you have added a complex level to these two and their relationship. Their character development was flawless. I can see the progression from their current personalities to fit this roll you've created. Also, you portrayed the sub/dom dynamics with exquisite insight, though some reviewers seem to have no clue what that is...ha. This relationship is the epitome of BDSM. Fabulous. Please, do update. I love your plot.
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