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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Mitsuko on July 25, 2010
    Argh! I love this story, and im not on ff.net! does that mean there arent going to be anymore...'good' bits of the story?
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  • From ANON - mignonne422 on July 25, 2010
    Cloudy! I was so excited to see updates to this fic and just gorged myself on the last few chapters I'd missed. They were gorgeous and delicious and just, ugh, they're both so broken and lonely and I just can't wait to see what you have in store for them.

    I'm sad you're going over to FF only! I do hope you consider double posting. Maybe AFF doesn't have the volume of other places, but the interest is genuine. Not to mention, you don't have to censor yourself here. And goodness, I do hope you don't censor yourself too much. You write beautifully and your love scenes are just so powerful. It would b sad to lose that.

    But anyways! The point of this review was to tell you how awesome you are for keeping up on this, even if life has gotten in the way at times, and writing such a wonderfully captivating fic that just sucks you into their world. I am so very excited for the next part
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  • From ANON - kaliu6-san on July 25, 2010
    oo come on! i just finished the last chapter and at a time when I am supposed to learn for my biochemistry exam... which is in 2 days! It was so fucking interestin i don't know why there aren't many views! Probably because of the long chapters... But never mind, this is like the best serious fanfiction I've read in sooo long! I couldn;t stop reading after chap 4, seriously it was that good! How do you come up with such ideas? And so much psichological stuff... honestly it drives me up the wall, it's so marvouless! If you're gonna post it on ff can you pleeeease pleeease leave a ling as a last chapter or smt? I just gotta read the next part but I rarely go to ff.... It's too bad about the smut really, i loved the rimming part and all that... but if you still don't want to post it here, please at least write me a mail or smt to at least know how the name of the part is!
    One more thing - you wrote in one of the chapters that all Hokages have to have been hunter nins - how did tsunade end up being Hokage - or was that only because of need and there was no one better? Cuz I somehow don't see her as a hunter nin.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 25, 2010
    Ahh please continue posting on aff! Sorry that I haven't review every chapter I read (I rate them tho!) but I do thoroughly enjoy this story. Also I noticed that some of the heavier stuff i.e. BDSM chapters wasn't posted on ffnet, sooo where will you post the more mature content chapters if not here at aff? I love this story, you add much depth to your characters (something that's lacking in many other fanfics). Cannot wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 23, 2010
    I refuse to be the only one feeling the burn of our failed love.
    I would dare to hold him together with my air, like he put me back together with his fire.

    These are two of my favorite lines from this chapter. All different aspects from previous chapters are being woven back in and further flushed out as the story progresses. Is Shino going to be reappearing anytime soon? Anyways excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 22, 2010
    Wow! Sasuke has grown and changed so much as a character ever since accepting Neji as clan... the whole chapter was tinged with this bittersweet quality to it. Naruto is so resolute to leave now that Sasuke can be the partner he has always wanted but I guess it's hard to forget the past. I really enjoyed the no pain part and Sasuke really indulging Naruto in his night. The sense of uncertainity permeates this fic because what is the next step? Will Sasuke let Naruto end it? How will Gaara play into the plot and going to the Sand? etc. etc. Anyways moving, amazing writing ^_^
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  • From megera on July 18, 2010
    yes. yes. yes
    I wait it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From kiyomine on July 17, 2010
    Chapter 19 was just as wonderfull like the whole story. I didn't expect this twist in the story, i thought they would have their farwell night and things would start to unfold the next day. But i must say i was wonderfuly surprised.
    What i love the most about the stoy are you Sasuke and Naruto. They are so deep in their own beliefs that they don't even see the thruth. I myself don't know who to side with. I understand sasuke's twisted logic and Naruto own desilusions and true feelings whole thing. Truthfuly, they belong together in some kind of twisted way. I feel sorry for Sasuke about the suffering planned for him by Naruto. But well, karma is a bitch.

    I'm glad you will finish the story, i really love it and your writing style. Thanks for you hard work until now.
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  • From ANON - animelover on July 17, 2010
    wow! that was totally intense and definitely worth the wait. a little confusing at first but i get it now. ;-)
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  • From hisoka on July 17, 2010
    wow things went so terribly wrong with at one question things really just shot down hill.im so glad this was updated ive been wondering about this one for a bit now and a so glad to see its been updated.im so excite for the next chapter too and all to come
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  • From Carousel on July 17, 2010
    I just started reading this fic, all 19 chapters in one sitting. Holy fucking popsicles. I absolutely LOVE this. It is torturing me emotionally in just the right way. I cry, I laugh, I cry. It's perfectt Naruto is a little naive to the Dom/sub thing though....but in many ways he is right. But then again so is Sasuke. Please make them be happy in the end.
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  • From niceladysakura on July 17, 2010
    thanks for updating!

    finally the truth is reveal..hmm i am looking forward for the next chapter.. how will sasuke prove naruto that the two of them is special than sasuke with anyone else?

    naruto is really as possessive as sasuke he doesn't share, does he?

    please update soon
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on July 17, 2010
    I just started reading this today, and I am amazed.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 17, 2010
    Glad to see your back... this fic doesn't seem dated at all ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on October 14, 2009
    Hey reread the last chapter and the story is still as potent as ever. I almost forgot about this fic, and hope that another chapter will be coming soon. Best of luck ^_^
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