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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - animehead on April 18, 2007
    I think this is my favorite chapter. I have a feeling Sasuke just fucked with the wrong shinobi. I am so anxious to see what Naruto is going to do now. It's so suspenseful. Can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From Menow on April 18, 2007
    I'm quite the fan of this story. This little twist makes me happy. There's the Naruto I know and love.
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  • From llyoung on April 18, 2007
    I like this plot twist. Thank you for updating.
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  • From ANON - dana on April 18, 2007
    you are really talented i love how you are shaking things up. i saw this coming i knew that naruto would not remain broken it seemed that you would not keep just following what sasuke said. i think the big hint was that he followed sasuke (someone trully broken would have maintained the statis quo. i love this story and i was really pleased about what's been going on since i last saw it. i now cannot wait to see how sasuke acts to naruto's new conviction this aught to be fun. i totally love this story and can't wait to see the next update.
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  • From ANON - Damp on April 18, 2007
    OH MY GOSH! This chapter reminds me of this book my little nephew is reading. *I had stolen it from her and was reading it...then I got hooked on the trilogy...and I don't like how it ended* The author is Scott Westerfeld and he wrote the trilogy: Uglies, Pretties, and last *but not least* Specials! *I would totally recomend them* This chapter just reminded me so much of how you can rewire the brain and such things...oh wow, I didn't think the brain was so brillient!

    You're brillient! Please update soon!
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  • From Jelp on April 18, 2007
    Woot! I hope Naruto does to Sasuke what he did to Naruto! Give it to 'em hard Naruto! ^_^ ~ Jelp
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  • From marquesgue1 on April 18, 2007
    Oooh - just read the last two chapters (somehow missed the last oen don't know how - so sorry!) but yeah. I liked chapter 9 - but i liked it that even though there was a slight show of softness from sasuke it didn't stop and blind naruto from seeing things as they had happened so i liked that :) and chapter 10 - by the end i was like 'whoa'. What happened between Naruto and Sasuke almost seems like a cold splash of water that woke naruto up O_O. Finding out that sasuke waited three weeks before going to find naruto made me want to beat him up all over again *sigh* but naruto's ending line has given me hope. I'm wondering if he will stick to this 'fuck sasuke' feeling that he showed at the end or if he'll let it go once he sees sasuke again... i guess i'm mostly curious as to how sasuke will react if naruto does stick to that hardness. (okay that totally does not sound like ho i wanted it to lool). But yeah. Good updates ^_6

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. i sorta rambled today didn't i?
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  • From Gwyllion on April 17, 2007
    Oh man...my heart broke so bad to see Naruto like this. I'm enjoying this fic so far and i hope you will continue it too. I really hope Sasuke will change for the better and will treat Naruto the way he deserves. My poor poor naruto.... T__T keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Damp on April 13, 2007
    O.O It seems to me that Naruto knows a lot...but knows every little, as does Sasuke. No I don't have a problem with doctors...but I do have a problem with hospitals. The exact same problem as Naruto does...he hates them and I hate them too, too white and plain. Don't you ever get tired of looking a white and plain? Unless of course you're operating, then it gets interesting ^^. I can't wait for your next update, And does this mean that Naruto is going to eventually break up with Sasuke? Or that they're never going to like the stiuation that they're in?
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  • From LifeonHiatus on April 13, 2007
    I figure I ought to review, seeing how I keep reading your fic. Your style is very different from what I normally read, but its that eerie charm that lures me time after time again. cool chapters, and hopefully many more to come. :-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2007
    Another great chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From NinPao on April 13, 2007
    wow...
    o_o

    what a great story!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 13, 2007
    I missed when the lemon chapter came out! It was great and so was this last chapter. Even though Sasuke is being very bad, he was being a sexy bad and I loved it! :)
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  • From UzumakiLover on April 13, 2007
    Lol! Wow, well I'll have you know I'm working on three things right now. An update from my first two once shots, since you asked for one. I feel is only a small thing to show you how much I enjoy your stuff too ^^ the first real chapter to rehab and another story i have in the making. I hope to have everything up buy next week sometimes. All three of them. ^^ So keep an eye out for them okay!

    Now...on to your review.

    This chapter answered...and yet rasied a few questions for me. One being the one that Naruto himself is asking. Just what is going to become of those two? I mean will they find some scene of normal life style together and Sasuke just pull out the slave card when he wants some booty? I really don't think that is the case. Hmmm also I enjoyed the slow flow of things, I mean that ease glow that happens after sex. It was a good come down after such a powerful chapter. I wonder, does Sasuke really love Naruto? Or does he just want to control him? Sometimes it seems like he loves him, and then other times it looks like its all about control...Umm maybe it's a little bit of both? None the less magnificent job...lol as always.
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  • From animeaddict666 on April 12, 2007
    Ah. Poor Naru. He still doesn't get it. I do adore your continuing characterization, though a purring Sasuke had me choking with laughter. I'm sure that seeing him reduced to such a state would be intoxicating...I am so glad I stumbled across your fic, and I can't wait to read more.
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