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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - dana on June 04, 2007
    yeah yeah for the update. sorry to hear you were unwell and i am glad to know that you are better. looks like naruto and you both got your stregnth back. i can't wait to see how long he makes sasuke wait to get some again. oh how i see the citizens suffering. i hope your health continues to flourish and improve if this is the results.
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 04, 2007
    Whoa O_O that's a lot of people Sasuke's slept with. God heh I'm doing a good job of mirrorring Naruto's emotions, I don't understand wither and it pisses me off because Shino and Shikamaru's words come off sounding so patronizing, largely because what they say si coming at a time when Naruto doesn't really want to hear what they're saying I suppose, it does seem almost like they are trying to rationalize but - I suppose they do know what they're talking about. I like how this new information isn't putting Naruto down and that he's working it out in his head and I also like how you kept Shikamaru very much in character despite the situation they were in ^_^ chapter was worth the wait.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on June 04, 2007
    wow, this just keeps getting better and better. I love Naruto in this, only because he won't take shit lying down. but then again, he never does. excellent work! I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nell on June 04, 2007
    It would be a nice payback to have Naruto sleep with Itachi.
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on June 03, 2007
    Wow -this is soooo good! I just got hooked from the start! I don't usually take liking to rape and torture stories -but this one I just love and can't seem to stop reading!! Please update to chapter 12 as soon as possible! I must know how this story turns out in the end and see what happens to Sasuke and most especially what Naruto does! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Reincarnate on May 28, 2007
    (too lazy to bother logging in)

    this is so great, its the perfect twist to keep this story interesting. omg I can hardly wait to see what Naruto does next!
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  • From Ukagau on May 23, 2007
    I really like the dark aspect of this story. A very good dark Sasuske and a strong Naruto appearing within the cracks. Awsome! I wonder how Sasuke will react to this harder Naruto neh? deep down inside......*I think he'll like it* Keep up the good work.
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  • From Jelp on May 21, 2007
    Jelp reviewing again. You haven't updated in over a month, and I hope everything is okay. Good luck with whatever is slowing you from updating. :'( Just saying hi in case you needed encouragement, ne? ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - SecretWorlds on May 12, 2007
    This is orety mucg the best fanfiction ive ever read, i absolutely love it! I love how you get into both their heads. Please update soon!! It would men so much to a sad little avid reader like me! lol See ya
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  • From animeaddict666 on April 26, 2007
    Huzza! Great twist. Very believable characterization, as I've come to expect from you. I can see Naruto sacrificing for Sasuke, and Sasuke seeking control over what he has always wanted. (Sasuke is always trying to control the world around him and his destiny, and always failing miserably.) You have captured many facets of Naruto's personality - as a person, a friend, a lover, a ninja. Congratulations! This is such an enjoyable story. I so love reading.
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  • From Gwyllion on April 24, 2007
    Way to go Naruto! This fic is a huge twist in what I usual would read, but I got addicted after the first few chapters. I'm still hoping that Sasuke would change for the better and that he would finally come to accept and love Naruto the way he is. Can't wait till the next chappie. Keep up the wonderful work! :)
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 23, 2007
    Oh man, I think Naruto has just had a couple of epiphanies...(sp?)... Anywho this story is very exciting to read and i can't wait till you update aagin.
    I wanna see what Naruto is going to do when Sasuke comes back and if Naruto will listen to Sasukes explination. They seriously need to have a talk to straighten out all their problems.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From UzumakiLover on April 20, 2007
    Mha! I agree...fuck sasuke!...on the bed...of the sofa...kitchen table...hallway wall....shower wall...wait...off topic! At any rate this was good, I kind of got the chills like the real Naruto just woke up from a coma or something was pissed to find out what was really going on. Puzzles must have not been the Uchiha's thing as a child ...I mean if you can't but the piece back they way they should go...then you shouldn't play with them at all! Hah...I hope the next chapter is an insight on Sasuke.

    Thanks for the support!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on April 19, 2007
    Interesting chapter. I have to say, also, that I really enjoyed the previous chapter, too. (dark and hot... awesome) Naruto's reasons for being caught are very, very intriguing, and make a lot of sense. Looking forward to the confrontation that is sure to come soon, when Sasuke comes back and Naruto has his renewed sense of purpose... I'm sure sparks will fly. Great job!
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  • From TakiTenshi on April 19, 2007
    Hey, wasn't Iruka the first one to acknowledge Naruto?

    Yeah, anywayz, I have to re-read the first few chapters because I seem to have missed the part during the three weeks - no, I read that, but I missed the part where it gives clues that Sasuke deliberately saved Naruto later on because he wanted him broken...

    So...I'll go do that now! YOOOOSH!!

    Nice chapter by the way.
    Hope you update soon.

    And I see Sasuke isn't the only one plotting here! Go Naruto!!

    Ki`Tara
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