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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - tina on June 13, 2007
    this story is very interesting. it kind of makes me want to throw up...and kind of doesn't. i REALLY want to kill sasuke now and i might as well kill naruto. of course this is a figment of my imagination. god. all this warped logic and fuck...sasuke is like seriously fucked up and naruto...jeez...no words. naruto is just LOVIN the fucked up life sasuke carved him. basically...they are a bunch of horny jackasses rationalizing their actions to keep themselves sane...this story is just brimming with S&M. it's lovely like a dead rose. expect this to be a partial insult and compliment on your part. may i throw up in peace.
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  • From Jadebyrd on June 12, 2007
    I had first started reading this fanfic from the very beginning and had only read up to ch.3 before i had to stop due to all my busy distractions in life (mainly school!).....and now that i just read the rest of what you have created right now, you would not believe how hyped up i am. I can still remember reading this fic back months ago and telling myself how the Naruto portrayed in the beginning when he finds out about Sasuke just didn't feel right! Somehow I just knew the real Naruto had to be hidden underneath....and lo and behold! BAM! Naruto starts to reappear. This new development has me so excited after I was finished; I was literally shaking from the sheer force of your writing. I know this may seem utterly ridiculous to hear, but it’s amazingly true! My hands are still shaking. I cannot wait to see what Naruto will do with this new revelation of his power over Sasuke! Now I am a strong fan of SasuNaru...but Sasuke deserves a whole world of pain right now, and Naruto is just the person to teach him a lesson on who is the real person in control. I love reading these kinds of stories of pain and revenge, even though I have always had a very very strong dislike for bastard men who think they can control their uke/woman/or whatever! If I could I would punch Sasuke's pretty face in! I once again repeat myself when I say that I cannot wait to read further into your story! Keep up the good work...Your Amazing!

    -Jenn

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  • From Gwyllion on June 09, 2007
    Oooh....I'm so loving your naruto here. Such plots he's thinking right now is making me die from curiousity. I really hope sasuke will pay for this. Wonderful sotry once again. Can't wait to read your next chappie! Keep it up! :D
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  • From serenagold on June 07, 2007
    wow.. the only thing missing from this chapter at the end of Naruto's though process was a loud and overwhelming "Mwhahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahaha bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaa"
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  • From Selow on June 06, 2007
    oh dear god I hope Naruto makes the bastard suffer... which isn't an exactly healthy idea of justice either, but meh :D And I curse my sense of empathy for trying to understand Sasuke. I want to mindlessly hate him dammit!

    It is an emotionally involving fic.
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  • From ANON - Sancta on June 06, 2007
    I would love to be your beta. I have the time since I am not writing myself and respond quickly too most things.
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  • From emp78 on June 06, 2007
    Very interesting insights. Good fic. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 05, 2007
    Thanx for the added chappies. I had thought you had died, but every time my mother left the house for groceries and she took too long I thought she had died. Anyway I liked the chappie and I can't wait till I can read what Naruto has instore for Sasuke. Also will Sasuke ever tell Naruto that he hadn't known he was there?

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2007
    well, this last chapter was an interesting insight into the way power shifts in relationships (even the odd ones like this one) i don't quite understand what fascinates me about this fic, but i'm quite sure i will continue reading. i enjoy the way you use your words to express the thoughts and emotions of your characters. good luck with the rest of the story
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  • From ANON - animehead on June 05, 2007
    *sobs* I've never hated Sasuke so much in my life!!! Let the torturing begin! Please tell me you're going to make him suffer. This is so angsty. The only angst fic that I really LOVE. Just because I want Naruto to get his justice. Not to mention that it's so well written. I can't (but really I can) wait for the next chapter. I'm going to die if Naruto doesn't do something evil to Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on June 04, 2007
    OMG!!! Chapter 12 ending is so great!! I MUST KNOW MORE!!! Now it's Naruto's turn to take charge! This will be very interesting to read in the next chapter or so! ^_^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 04, 2007
    I really love this side of Naruto!!! I can't wait to see how he punishes Sasuke!! :)
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  • From Rosebud on June 04, 2007
    Wow, this fic is wickedly twisted and I LOVE it.
    I do hope that you’ll post more soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - pinkmooncrystal on June 04, 2007
    good story...really good story. I love it so much. Your plot has me really captured. I hope you update soon. I also hope that Sasuke gets a taste of his own medicine or something to that effect. Naruto should make him suffer.
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  • From Jelp on June 04, 2007
    Another heart-breakingly good chapter! Keep up the good work. :-) Glad to see you updating again. ~ Jelp
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