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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 09, 2007
    i am truly madly inlove with your story. Call me a sick puppy but i can understand sasuke's evil twisted logic...and kind of sympathise with him /it's kind of making me see myself in a diffrent light. i still feel sorry for naruto..if i found out he had been cheating on me that long i would pull a sasuke. tie him up and whip him, only without the happy ending.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 09, 2007
    i love this new development
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on July 09, 2007
    i am in love with this story...so glad it's not a harem fic...i can see them wanting someone like naruto but not naruto you know what i mean...
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  • From ANON - ela116 on July 09, 2007
    youve got to continue. I've never read a story this...morbid before.Morbid is the only word I can think of @ the moment.I'm starting to think Sasuke really does love him.Well does he? anyway update as soon as you can. Im dying for the last chapter.


    -ela
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on July 08, 2007
    I'm so amazed that I was right about this new chapter of yours! That's so funny! Anyhoo, I think this Gaara you've describe fits his character vey well, plus now Sasuke see's that he truly does have a rival worth stressing and freaking out over in fear of having Naruto taken from him. Now I'm very curious to see what actions Naruto will take once he finds out about Gaara's demand. Great job so far with the plot of this story!! ^0^
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  • From serenagold on July 08, 2007
    Wow. I love the twist with Gaara. This definately bends the story into a whole new direction. Will it interfere with Naruto's sudden realization that he holds all the card in the relationship and his new desire to make Sasuke pay? Will Gaara's demands threaten the bond between him and Naruto? I can't wait to see Sasuke flip when he returns to discovered the sudden change in the attitude Naruto takes in their relationship. Everyone always underestimates Naruto and Sasuke's in for a rude and shocking realization.

    I love this story and look forward to your next installation. :)
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  • From ANON - Sancta on July 07, 2007
    I love Gaara in this chapter, he's so devious. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Vien on July 07, 2007
    Don't know why >< but after I read this chapter, I pitty Sasuke really much. An yeah, he is so lost in it, damn. But I think in some twist of way I like him more now, and I don't want Naruto to leave him for Gaara. Sasuke is 'lil insane (as we see Naruto too) but I hope he will also show his other face, that he has something more to shock Naruto too after all, I don't like the idea of Naruto take all the control... maybe it's bc I always like dominant Sasuke more? Naruto is to much full of himself for me, just like Sasuke was before - and this is bad, really bad, when you think that everythinkg is going to be like you want -it doesn't have to- and you have all control - you can lose it fast.

    Eh I'm confused. Hope you'll upload soon ;*

    (sorry if you didn't understand somethinkg that I mean - my english is still bad... :( )
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  • From Vex on July 07, 2007
    omg, You have Gaara! And the real one, not some emo ukeish guy.
    Squee! I think I just fangirled. >w
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  • From ANON - Jelp on July 07, 2007
    Ooooooh! Sasuke finally snapped. I almost hope that Naruto fools around with Gaara, just to piss of Sasuke - but not at the same time because I don't want Naruto to sink to Sasuke's level. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 07, 2007
    S*** things don't seem to be getting better - it's a really sticky situation they've gotten themselves in and if Neji hadn't been there then things probably would've gotten worse *sigh*

    Anyway, you're making me more anxous for what's to come!!! looool this is one of the best angst fics i've ever read - seriously it is and i can't wait for more. Thanks so much for the update!!!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - dana on July 07, 2007
    i like whatyou said in the an anbout lovely like a dead rose. when i read i thought that was one of the profound things i had evre read. i love horror and when i thought about it that description was perfect. i love this chapter by the way i totally see how sasuke and gaara would be the same. i love this story so much and can't wait til the next update.
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  • From animeaddict666 on July 01, 2007
    Bout time Naruto realized his own prowess! I love the interaction between Shika and Naru. Great dynamics and fabulous dialog. I'll await more with perfect patience!
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  • From Sendrine on June 22, 2007
    I Love this story, especially the deranged and sadistic Sasuke muhahaha. Naruto is equally captivating. Keep up the good work >_
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on June 20, 2007
    Oi, me here. If you're having a trouble with continuing the plot, maybe you can have Gaara come in to protect Naruto from Sasuke. Not as in to make it a gaanaru pairing, but I would think after all the times Naruto's saved Gaara, that Gaara owes Naruto protection at least. Plus, since Naruto could be the future hokage, a kage should protect a future kage's well being. Don't you think? I don't know... just and little inspiration if you're having trouble with the next chapter! I'm so excited to see what will happen in the next chapter!!
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