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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on July 27, 2007
    /squeals/ Oh - I'm so happy to have read this new chapter!! That whole rules with clansmen and everything was very interesting and I'm actually happy that Sasuke now feels as though he has family again and a sense of a clan. However, even though Sasuke's in good spirits now that Neji is one of his clansmen and Sasuke's realized his errors with how he's been treating Naruto, Naruto may not be as thrilled of Sasuke's return like he is expecting. I look forward to your next chapter!! ^_^

    Oh -and by the way - I really like how you've wrote Neji in here. It really does fit his character and so far he's one of my favorites in this story.

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  • From hisoka on July 27, 2007
    sasukes even crazier than i thought.
    updates
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  • From bluegenjutsu on July 27, 2007
    I'm glad Sasuke is now becoming saner and is questioning his behavior and feelings for Naruto. This story is really intense!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on July 26, 2007
    Hehehehe. I loved it. :screams: Warmonger!
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  • From ANON - mike~ on July 26, 2007
    i absolutely loved this chapter the most by far.

    the entire clan language completely blew my mind away - to think that sasuke and neji's conversations hold such deep symbolism sends shivers down my spine - the depth of their newly formed bond was intricate and intimate.

    the silent language between shika and naruto was written just as well >.
    i really loved all the thought you put into the conversations between all the characters. i would have never thought that ino was the traitor = but then i was only mildy surprised, the hint that you gave about ino never being with sasuke before kinda placated my shock at the info.

    even though sasuke's starting to warm up to neiji - im kinda disturbed at how fickle sasuke really is - or how confused he is about his own feelings towards naruto. does that mean that he doesn't really love naruto in the way he originally thought? although i love the new clans-men bond he has with neji, i fear that that kinship is actually stronger than the relationship he has with naruto. in the years it took for sasuke to "heal" naruto, the entire time, sasuke wasn't being true to himself - meaning the entire time was a fake representation of his feelings for naruto - does that mean he doesn't truly care for naruto, but just wants something, some "toy" to bypass his own loneliness due to the lack of a clan? ... hum, i think im starting to ramble now XD i guess sasuke's confusion is rubbing off on me.

    thanks for all the hard work - the first couple of chapters, sasuke was truly scary, morbid, and creepy - but i hope with the new found revelations (and naruto's self-awakening), that the sasunaru "true" relationship can finally start.

    great work, update soon!
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  • From Jelp on July 26, 2007
    Yay for Neji getting some sense into Sasuke! And I'm glad Shikamaru talked with Naruto earlier. Hmmm...Naruto should be the one to punish Sasuke for his crimes, ne? :-D Keep up the good work! Excellent chapter as usual. Just one request, don't have Sasuke "cheat" on Naruto any more? They did finally sleep together after all. ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Gai_sensei on July 26, 2007
    please please PLEASE *down on my knees begging* update soon!!! I've read this story over and over again! It's so good! I'm going out of my mind waiting like this!!! What will happen between naruto and gaara? will sasuke kill gaara like the beginning of chapter 2 suggests? I hope naruto will get stronger and beat the cr*p out of sasuke... but i also hope they will end up together too! See? I'm all confused now thanx to your story!! PLEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE NOOOW!!
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  • From ANON - Mishu on July 25, 2007
    I lovee your story!
    The angst
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  • From hisoka on July 22, 2007
    possesive horny people are a problem
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  • From ANON - a1231 on July 21, 2007
    please add mpreg!!
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  • From Gwyllion on July 20, 2007
    What an absolutely fantastic job you have done here!! I'm so glad that Naruto is is slowly trying to break out of his shell too. Sasuke deserves to be punished by his actions....can't wait to find out in future posts...keep it up! :D
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  • From ANON - kai on July 13, 2007
    i hadnt read this before but then i decided 'what the hell' and read it, i half ta say sasuke is even more possessive than i thought he could be.to screw that many people and keep them close to the one you love is kinda heart breaking and smart but heart breaking in the least.please continue i want to know how sasuke reacts to the real naruto and if naruto will get to see gaara at all or not, and if he stays with gaara or not.update please
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  • From ANON - SecretWorlds on July 11, 2007
    This story just keeps getting better and better. I love your writing, it is simply fantastic. I know i may be the only one saying this but... i kinda want naruto to end up with sasuke. I mean Sasuke really loves him!!! Its not his fault he doesn't know hw to love. I know, i'm taking sasuke's side and thats weird but... lol. Actually this story is sooo good i cant even really pick a side because they both such believable and pitiful characters. please update because i guarantee I'll read it and love it right away. bye bye ^-^
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  • From ANON - basilika on July 10, 2007
    wow.. mesmerizing. i've read tonns of fan fiction i my life, and this is one of the rare times when a story is so unique and captivating that it completely sucks you in and takes over your mind. heh. and i find myself incredibly influenced by the atmosphere of it. what, actually, is quite scary, 'cause i've become waaay more depressed and seeking solitude. on the other hand, the fact that this story affects me so much is just another credit to your writting skills.
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  • From ANON - hinata_chan on July 10, 2007
    thank you for this great story! i really love it! I've already read it twice and I think i will read it again and again *serious case of insomnia - it's all your fault!lol*. I can't get enough of sasuke's possessiveness over naruto, and I can't wait to see naruto piecing himself back together in the good order this time. Will he make sasuke suffer? I hope so! Sasuke needs to learn to respect him more even if it breaks him apart, besides, maybe that's what he really needs to mend his own broken soul. Naruto doesn't seem to believe sasuke can love, after all he really has been cheating on him since they came back (no matter what shike said). I wonder were he stands now concerning his feelings for sasuke. I wish you will make naruto stronger, strong enough to (beat the crap out of... hmm!) make sasuke understand he can't manipulate those he cares for. I can't wait to see what will happen with gaara, the kazekage must be worried about his friend and he seems to suspect sasuke has something to do with it. I don't know if this drabble really makes sense to you but all in all, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!
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