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From ANON - Sancta on August 30, 2007
Wow shit, Naruto is finding his backbone. Wonder how he's gonna cause Hell :winks:
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From serenagold on August 30, 2007
whoa. Naruto's determination to make Sasuke suffer promises a pretty hot and heavey couple of upcoming chapters. Woo-hoo!!
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From ANON - vampire sawyer on August 30, 2007
I really hope Naruto gets some revenge out of this. He has been hurt by too many people over the years. You got me all excited. Please write me when you update.
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From ANON - SasuNaru723 on August 30, 2007
OH. MY. GOD!!! Now you've got me on the edge of my seat with the ending of that cliff-hanger! I can't wait (but I really can and would have to of course) for the next chapter!! ^_^
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From ANON - hinata chan on August 30, 2007
Thanks for the update, as always, really worth the wait! I love this insight on naruto's thoughts and the hunter nins status. Red wolf and silent tiger suit sasuke and neji well but i would have expected a name like 'Fox something' for naruto. (but could be too revealing though)
Anyway : Naruto in hunter nin mode?? 'how hot'! neji and sasuke seem to think so too, or have i interpreted this inside joke wrong?
As naruto pointed out, it's surprising that tsunade trusted sasuke enough to promote him hunter nin! But the most surprising is neither naruto nor sasuke knew about each other's secret status! Won't sasuke wonder how orochimaru got his filthy hands on naruto when he sees naruto's real power? I hope he will find out the sacrifices naruto has had to make to save him. They really need to rediscover each other and it won't be pretty with the devious plan naruto is scheming! as the saying goes : 'Vengeance is a dish best served cold', right?
Naruto really is planning to play with sasuke's feelings, huh? I guess I must agree with naruto and say 'take that bastard'! (i enjoyed this part about naruto/kankuro so much!) Somehow (though he really doesn't deserve it) I feel sad for sasuke, especially after his talk with neji. Naruto is playing with fire here but it will be soooo enjoyable! I can't wait already!
Will next chapter be this same scene but from sasuke's point of view? It could be interesting, after all surely naruto can read him well but he has already been wrong in the past, and even now he is suspecting something more than friendship is going on between neji/sasuke. (well can't blame him after everything sasuke has put him through! besides he really knows nothing about clansmen and clan's rules so he cannot understand sasuke and neji)
Or next chapter could be the continuation of this scene and naruto putting his plan into action!!! *lemon* Sasuke will have to digest what he's just learned and he certainly does not expect naruto to give him a taste of his own medicine! It seems the mission to Suna will be tough! be it for sasuke (especially with naruto gaara kankuro and temari teamed up against him!), for naruto (as we don't know what gaara has in store for him or if he is kankuro's choice for a 'male life partner') or for poor neji who will have to deal with the whole mess while keeping a neutral position!
What was tsunade thinking teaming those 3 together anyway? Though naruto has already proven that he was far from dumb and that he was thinking along the same lines as sasuke and neji about fire being the worst enemy of a town in the middle of desert!
I didn't think it possible but this story is getting better and better! It will be REALLY HARD to wait for next chapter! I could make a review almost as long as this chapter with everything you've given us to ponder! This story is the BEST and the most thoughtful i've read around here so far! Well I will stop babbling my poor english incoherently now, I'm afraid you will fall from boredom after reading this!
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From hisoka on August 30, 2007
poor naruto.surprise tou updated gld though.wonder how sasukes anger will flair when he sees naruto with the sand nin
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From ForgottenPrincess on August 30, 2007
So unbelieveably great. so wonderful. i am so in love with this fic. i can't wait to find out what will happen next. well smut, yes? Naruto showing sasuke what he could have. don't tell me sasuke wants neji? PLEASE don't tell me that. i don't think he would but i can never be 100% certain you know. This fic seems to thrive on really messed up and wondefully great stuff. I have never heard of it but i kind of like the idea of kakuro being bi-ish. But Gaara my love and Ino? I guess if he loves her. i also like the idea of them and naruto being like family. maybe gaara wants to bring naruto because he likes him and he hopes he can be offical family if he ends up with kakuro.
please excuse my spelling i really don't want to check this over and i don't think it's too bad.
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From ANON - kai on August 30, 2007
Oooh,taste if your owm medicen sasuke, narutos gonna get sweet revenge.hope you can update soon
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From ANON - SasuNaru723 on August 23, 2007
So, while I and like everyone else that loves this story of yours awaits for your next update, I�ve been thinking of the many possible ways of what Naruto would do once Sasuke returns and also once he hears Gaara�s demand to have Naruto with him (I�m supposing for Naruto�s safety cause that�s just how protective Gaara is toward Naruto because Naruto�s like the friend Gaara�s never had till after they met). I was thinking that Naruto would play it all cool like he wasn�t thinking of getting his revenge on Sasuke for sleeping with all those people while in a relationship with Naruto (which by the way is really piggish of Sasuke to do such a thing. I am so siding with Naruto; Sasuke should have just masturbated or something if he was really that desperate, though I understand him not wanting to pressure Naruto into sex).

Well, as I was saying, Naruto greets Sasuke and they of course initiate in sex, but this time without Sasuke holding back. Then, as Sasuke climaxes, Naruto grabs for the needle that he had hide someone (like under a pillow or between the bed) and stabs Sasuke with it. The fluid that�s now in Sasuke�s blood stream has the ability to make all of Sasuke�s sexual desires become numb and will last for months, so that no matter what Sasuke did or even if he had sex with anyone or masturbated �he wouldn�t be able to get off.

I don�t know. At least it was an idea that I had, but half of it sounds kind of sudden and corny maybe. Still� I hope the next chapter with your ideas is better than my own �of course! ^_^

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From ANON - hinata_chan on August 21, 2007
Come on now! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE! IT HAS BEEN SOOOOO LONG! breaking apart is soooooo great! 3 weeks without a new chapter, i'm reaching my limit! i need my fix! for my sanity please? what will happen now that sasuke has returned to konoha??? pleaaaaase post next chapter *begging with teary eyes*
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From akiravadel on August 15, 2007
Good job on the story. I like how you turned things around and how your slowly building the story. ^-^ I can't wait to see what Gaara will try to do to Naruto. I wonder if Naruto will sit there and take it or if he'll fight back wanting to be only Sasuke's. Maybe Sasuke will come to the rescue or will he be too late to save his dobe. ^-^ Keep up the great work I can't wait to see what you'll do next!

~Akira~
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From ANON - megera on August 09, 2007
author. It is super.
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From ForgottenPrincess on July 28, 2007
I really like this chapter. I thought it was cute how Neji took Sasuke as part of his clan. Also how the connection between the two (neji and naruto) were talked about, how Sasuke couldn't sleep with neji without cheating on naruto. Got to love that kind of logic. I also am very interested in sauske's confusion in regards to naruto. i want to know the answers to those questions too. So naruto's body can't fix its self like it use to...i wonder if sasuke even contenplates that he is partially to blame. Although he did want naruto to be broken so he could fix him and keep him. But Naruto was never really his. Ah! My brain hurts! Hope you feel the urge to update soon.

~Ja ne

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From Rosebud on July 27, 2007
Great chapter!
Update soon! ^^
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From ANON - gai_sensei on July 27, 2007
Thank you for updating! this chapter was really worth the wait, as always! this story is so great!
I never really thought neji could be an interesting character but you proved me otherwise! I was wondering what's so special in naruto and neji and you just answered that question! thx! moreover neji did knock some sense into sasuke and that's no small deed! I love the way he said: "I live with Shikamaru. You are an open book compared to him." sasuke finally has someone to talk to, someone he respects (without sex). I thought the whole reasoning about naruto not being a slave nor a child was really well writen. It seems sasuke isn't over with what happened with itachi and that's great he found some substitute of his clan in neji.
'I don't hate Naruto! I lov-.' aaaaaaaaah i thought i would scream (uh i think i did in fact!) when his thoughts ended there! FOR REAL? sasuke really is confused if he doesn't even realise what his feelings are for naruto! I thought he had realised by now that his so-called possessiveness was really nothing more than jealousy. At least Naruto knows how he feels towards sasuke (even if he wants to take his distances). Maybe he was right thinking sasuke couldn't love, shikamaru seemed to think differently but sasuke himself is wondering if he loves naruto.
With sasuke unsure of his feelings for naruto and wondering about their relationship, i wonder if he's really ready to return home yet. (isn't the ride to suna supposed to last 3 days anyway?) Last time Naruto seemed dead set about making sasuke suffer so it might annihilate the small progress sasuke made thanks to neji. AAAH so complicated! I LUV complicated!
I hope we will have other chapters in naruto's pov. I wonder how this whole story with gaara is going to turn out. Naruto has a war to avoid now, that is IF sasuke and tsunade accept to let him go to suna which is very unlikely! is it friendship that makes gaara want to see naruto or something else? Why did ino run away from konoha anyway? Can naruto convince her to come back? How will naruto 'welcome' sasuke when he gets back?
I guess I'll have another 20 days (but i really PRAY it will be less, ne?) to ponder all this questions until next chapter! Sorry for the LOooNG rant, I just so love this story!
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