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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
    OMG! Naruto! Whoa.. didn't see that coming! (and typo from last review, I meant whoa not 'whole' sometimes i type without thinking) Okay this may just be a case of me reading too fast but I was under the impression Sasuke didn't "know" about Naruto for at least three weeks. He did save him straight away. Naruto however doesn't know that. And I'm loving Naruto's actual personality. Oh the angst! It's absolutely glorious! Haha to talk about missions and well it happens. Gawds I'm totally loving this fic! Can't wait to see more of Naruto's real self. As a reader I'm fairly... absolutely horrible at guessing.. which is why I don't, things happen and I take it as it is. Shock, Horrror etc. Where this fic is going.. not even beginning to speculate but just can't stop reading! More!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
    Whole this chapter was a turnaround! O_O Haha Sasunau almost seemed... Normal. Naruto freaking out about heard by the neighbours. Sasuke giving Naruto a massage and removing bondages and what not. It was kinda nice that this fic isn't entirely dark. As in dank and dark. Instead it's just really hot and dark ^_~ Coming from reading DSNaruto I am loving the Dom Sasu thing you've got going. Naruto as uke is just so right. Although what with being elite ninja and anbu and all... They are certainly free aye? No missions no summons no more Hokage dreams I take it? Ah well, its not that sort of fic anyway. Glad to see more of Naruto's POV. And that he's more then a doll. Sasuke seems more in love and obsessed then anything. Which is just a total turn on really! XDXDXD More!!
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  • From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
    To hear Naruto isn't as helpless as he seems is quite encouraging. Sasuke obsessed and crazed as he is still isn't too psycho that he is naught but a total depraved freak. Sadistic with redeeming qualities. ^^;; That was a hot lemon. Man can't wait to read more! Pretty sure this is Sasunaru the whole way but if it ever does swap.. you've got my vote. More!!
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  • From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
    OMG this is so twisted!! O_o I LOVE IT! Sasuke is just obsessed. Reminds me of a manga (Yaoi) I just read. Guys falls in love with a window cleaner, kidnaps him, captures him and rapes him for a week. Rapee falls in love with rapist. Only in manga. Personally I reckon its stockholm syndrome the whole way but well. Art was pretty. Um yeah. Lol Shino's rather interesting. Personally I hope he doesn't die. Cuz he's got mad bug skillz. But yeah. All powerful obsession psycho Sasuke is so fun to read. Angsty timid broken "broken" Naruto. Dang. Love it! More!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2007
    i know this fic is agnsty and dark, but you somehow have a way of turning it from the dark to something really sorta uplifting. Usually when i read stories like this i end up in sort of a depressed bad mood, however i tend to finish these chapters on a good note, in anticipation for naruto to regain control of the situation and over sasuske. i hope you don't ever stop writing this story, because i'm really on the edge of my computer chair waiting to see what sasukes reaction will be and what will happen when he meets up with gaara again.

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2007
    I'm enjoy the darkness of this thus far, and though I'm only on chapter 3, I just had to review to tell you that I'm really loving this intensity and foreboding feeling.

    I do have a complaint though. Since you're doing everything in first person narrative, you really don't need to put the narrator's thoughts in single quotation marks, all that does is making it hard for readers to differentiate between double and single quotation marks since you put in thoughts so often.
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  • From animeaddict666 on September 23, 2007
    Ah, I love the political intrigue, as well as the depth you exuded to describe the hunter nin. Beautiful plot line. This is one of my top five favorite stories, a place a reserve for pieces with originality, flawless characterization, perfect language, and intricate plots. Such a pleasure to read.
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  • From sunlight159 on September 08, 2007
    I love this story, but is there any hope for a happy ending for poor naruto and sasuke?!?!
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  • From leanne on September 07, 2007
    I am deeply impressed with the dark nature of this story but I am truly pleased that Naruto is finally aware again and is fully capable of paying Ichiha back for all the whoring around he did, make Uchiha pay !. I just don't think making Naruto do payback by having sex with someone is really a good way of paying that bastard back but showing Sasuke that Naruto is strong without him and is capable of standing on his two feet and he still carries that fire to be strong to be hokage to be capable of caring for others that would totally show that bastard that Naruto is Naruto and that he should respect him and not treat him like a possesion or a child anymore but as an equal. Naruto kick that bastards asss! Show him your the stronger person that he is!
    Naruto just needs to tell him he broke because of Sasuke not showing up like he was suppose to.

    Really awasome fic now that naruto isn't so ill and is finally aware that he is strong and that its time to make that Uchiha pay for keeping him week.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 31, 2007
    I loved this chapter! I'd love to see Naruto get back at Sasuke, even though Sasuke isn't involved with Neji, he did sleep with almost all the rest of the guys they both know.
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  • From ANON - Gina on August 31, 2007
    Mohahaha!
    I'm in love with this story!
    It's developing really good now - can't wait for the next chapter!
    Evil Naruto IS love!
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  • From Menow on August 31, 2007
    Yeah...it's startin' to get really, really good now. Don't slow down on the upates (please)
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  • From ANON - Sealink on August 30, 2007
    I am a little disturbed, I admit. More because of the unasked questions, misunderstandings and assumptions then anything else. Silly boys, they never grow up do they? Men are so stupid when it comes to emotions at times. It is incredibly well written. I keep having to slow myself down so I don't miss something.
    I hope that an update is put up soon. I want to see how Sasuke handles Naruto's obvious rebellion and level of...I guess...maturity. ^-^
    Though I do have mixed feelings about how long it might continue. o.o Mostly because this means ignoring the story long enough for more then three chapters to be posted. -.- I also worry if you'll actually finish the story. lol
    Here's hoping you do!

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  • From TseuTsumi on August 30, 2007
    OMG! This is such a great story! I mean, it is the best SasuNaru story I have ever read. I cant wait for the next chapter. You are a genious!
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  • From Jelp on August 30, 2007
    :-) Glad to see you writing again! Another good chapter. Hope you update again soon. ~ Jelp
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