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Reviews for Breaking Apart

By : cloudydayz
  • From ANON - animelover on September 26, 2007
    WOW!!! ok, i know i just reviewed but finished reading the remaining chaps. geez, this puppy is addictive. n e way, i think in my last review i wanted sasuke to get his butt kicked, now i want them to really kiss and make up. but i'm dying to know what gaara is up to ... will there be a hint of gaara/naru? i wouldn't mind. oh, and where did you get the clansman ritual stuff? if you made that up, you are a fipping genius and need to be making some serious money off this stuff. LOL! that was really interesting how sasuke and neji did the ritual conversation and s got a clue. well done!

    i know you just updated but can't want for the next installment .. oh, will there be any waff or fluff in this fic? any more lemons? later!
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  • From ANON - animelover on September 26, 2007
    YESSSSSS!!!! Naruto is back and ready to kick some a*@!!!!!! Ok, now we know who the real Naruto is, let the games begin!! please tell me he's going to fight back, PUHLEEASE!

    I absolutely love how you make psycho so fascinating to read ... how we watch Naruto reawaken and remember who he is. Gotta run ... wanna read a couple more chappies before bed. It's so fun when you get to read a bunch of them all at watch without having to wait for updates *evil laugh*. Yeah, I'm cheating and proud of it.

    See ya!
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  • From ANON - Sancta on September 26, 2007
    :fans herself: we get a lemon. thank god. this was so hot i'm melting
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  • From ANON - animelover on September 26, 2007
    Well, I just finished chapter 1, and all i can say is sasuke and shino have to DIE!!!!! Poor naruto. ok, I just can't write anymore ... gotta finish reading. LOL!

    Later!
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  • From ANON - Aice on September 26, 2007
    This chapter is a relief. At least they start to understand each other.
    Thanks for the story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2007
    it was so cool checking for new stories and seeing this one updated so soon, i'm elated about your newly freed schedule ^_^ I really liked the sense of madness that you put in both naruto and sasuke and how each recognized the other to be slightly nuts. I think a little bit of insanity must be like a prerequisite for shinobi. I'm looking forward to finding out what will happen and change once naruto carries out the plan of his.
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  • From ANON - SasuNaru723 on September 26, 2007
    HOLY CRAP!! I knew an update was coming out this week! How freaky is that?! In my head I kept on saying 'Today has got to be the day. I just can SENSE it for godsakes!' And what do you know? I was right on the money! By the way, even though this chapter wasn't the lemon I thought it was going to be yet, I'm glad Naruto is finally getting to know the true story of what happened while he was capture by Sound. As well as Sasuke in return realizing Naruto the whole time believed Sasuke to have wanted Naruto broken by Sound. It’s kind of sad that Sasuke believes he's finally going to get that feeling of being loved again like he once had in his childhood from his parent (mostly his mom) before Itachi murderalized them all. And updates will come a lot soon??!! That’s awesome!! I’m stuck to this sexy/dark story like superglue! In the mean time, have fun with it (the story of course)! ^_^


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  • From hisoka on September 26, 2007
    SO HE FINALLY FINDS HE LOVES HIM,TOO BAD THEY WONT BE TOGETHER FOR TOO LONG IF NARUTOS PLAN GOES WELL. BUT THEN AGAIN LIKE NARUTO SAID SASUKE WONT LET HIM GO THAT EASILY.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON THEIR PLANS FOR EACH OTHER ARE CRAZY BUT SO ARE THEY ONE MAD AND ONE TOTALLY INSANE.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 25, 2007
    I'm so glad they had their talk!! But they needed to talk more since Naruto still wants revenge. But then, Sasuke did sleep with half the village of Konoha. XD
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  • From Jelp on September 25, 2007
    ::rubs hands together eagerly:: Oooooo. I wanna see a more "in control" Naruto. Sasuke needs to be punished for his infedelity. He can't be allowed to do that anymore. Good update! ~ Jelp
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  • From Picspixie on September 25, 2007
    Oohhhhh you have the most deliciously demented mind ever, these themes are quite disturbing but i've become addicted to your story line, i doubt i could ever imagine this sort of thing on my own, so i am very thankful that you can do it instead lol, i hope you get lots of inspiration and can create another chapter as soon as possible, impatient person i may be but i will definately wait as long as it takes to read where u take this story :) i really do hope that naruto in some way will get some revenge for sasuke's many betrayals (i guess you could call them)
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on September 25, 2007
    Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Your discription in every chapter leaves me wanting more. I love how you portray every character. Words cannot express how much I cherish this story and want you to update.

    Please update again soon,

    ~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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  • From losthimagain on September 24, 2007
    O_O YOU LEAVE ME THERE?! Please update again soon! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Dicey 2 on September 24, 2007
    However said this wasn't angsty is a total moron. Nuff said.

    Man that stuff about clan rites.. That was really... Eloquent. Wonderfully expressed and complex yet intricate and really quite cool. Argh. That so doesn't do it justice. But seriously. Damn cool. Like the whole black market jutsu thing. But clans rites. Seiously cool. And Sasuke's found a bond! Yay! War?? Nooooo... This is not that dark at all. The earlier chapters were seriously freaking hot but right now it's just really really really really good. So wanna keep reading and finding out more (and hoping there's more to read) Lemons too of course. But all the character interaction and happenings. More then a dark PWP. Wonderful fic!! Stupid AFF.net not letting me review more then once in a day. When the heck did that happen? It's per chapter stupid website! Sheesh. So to not risk me losing all this err. Sorry but I'm just gonna start one massively long review and err add to it as I read along. Personally I reckon that'd be more annoying then lil drabbles cuz it's just one annoying chuck of text (and raving/squealing etc) So err. Shall attempt to format somewhat..

    OMG!!! And it totally heats up!!
    Damn Naruto's inside knowledge totally threw me there!
    God I love the way you write Ninja rituals! Reporting is different for different statuses.. That's just so cool... Ahhh I know you already have a fangirl (a couple really I'm sure) but I've definitely joined their ranks "waves banner in arms" And this whole mixed signals thing between Naruto and Sasuke.. It has me all upset and happy at the same time! Silly boys.. they think they know each other so well..
    Am a bit upset at the nonchalance everyone seems to have at Sand's total annihilation. Sheesh that is a lot of people you know. And Naruto! *whaps* Rokudaime indeed with that attitude!
    Gaara/Ino? Lol i think i prefer Temari/Ino Gaara's always been Naruto's boy!
    I love love love Naruto getting a backbone however! Hehe hot lemon on the way yes??

    OMG... Just realised that was the end. No way! OMG please please please!!! More! Update! Soon! Frequently! Daily! More More!!! Please??? *offers plushies in compromising positions* If it inspires right?? More!!!

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  • From ANON - Dicey on September 24, 2007
    Yes! Power struggle!! Uke in control? Even better! Shikamaru's reasoning and overall skills is just too mad. I meant his deduction and thinking skills. You wrote him very well I reckon. Not Neji huh? That's a surprise. Everyone else... Haha Poor Naruto.. Sasuke's such a slut. But a slut in love so that's okay. I really like how everyone keeps telling Naruto he's different. Til he realises in what way exactly he's different.. Oh i can't wait! Lovely chapter! Naruto is (and will most likely always will be) my favourite character and it's always nice to see more of his head! More more more!!!
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