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Reviews for Tension

By : desolatebutterfly
  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Wow, that was fast. . . . I like that paragraph with the use of “here” and “there.” . . . Do I sense a little denial in Sasuke? . . . ^^ “And they weren’t f***ing. And why were they still talking?” ^^ . . . Sasuke’s hot; I love his threats. . . . You said it, Naruto. He. Is. So. -- yeah, you get my meaning. . . . Ooh, GREAT ending!! :D The Shadow of Doubt! I was going to say that you should’ve dragged the story out a little more -- not plot-wise, but porn-wise -- but that ending line made it all unnecessary! This is going on my list!

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  • From LunarAlchemist on October 07, 2007
    This is definitely the sign of a good author. This story is sexy, descriptive, and beautifully written. Any author that can write smut without all the disgusting dirty talk and unnecessary details really demands my respect.
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  • From Rosebud on June 15, 2007
    This was good. That last line was sad though.
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  • From ANON - animehead on February 27, 2007
    I really liked this, both of them were very in character. It was a refreshing to read!
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  • From nekochannya on February 27, 2007
    I can quite picture them doing that... it figures... nyah... it has possibilities... maybe you can do a couple more one shots as they develop into something else or something? *hint hint* I like it... nyah!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 27, 2007
    Wonderfully awkward and hot and uncomfortable and... whew.

    :“Idiot,” Sasuke breathed...:
    Love that line.
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  • From Adi on February 27, 2007
    *puddle*

    last line hurts :(
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