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Reviews for Sunburn Blushing, Sexual Flushing

By : dragonagility
  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2008
    Overall: YEAH!! This story was AWESOME! How come it’s your only one?! You’ve got talent! You should use it! This is going on my list with 5 stars out of 5 stars! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2008
    Chapter 2: To the AN: “Without further adeu,” XD It’s “ado.” XD
    Oh, those cheeks. ^^' You really had me there. Was that on purpose? . . . I like Sasuke’s in-shock attitude. . . . Hahaha! “Any more torture and he was sure that his groin would explode.” XD I’ve never heard that one! . . . Yeah, I’m getting shivers too. What is Naruto planning?? . . . “Hesitancy mixed with confidence?” Curious. . . . Yes, more. @_@ . . . Whoa. That metaphor: “Why only give a [. . .]” Wow. O_O I likes. . . . Mm, I think “dobe” was kind of unnecessary (maybe I’ve just heard it way too much with all the fanfiction I’ve been reading XP). . . . Heh, I liked that bit when Naruto squeezed Sasuke’s sunburn. I love it when there’s a mood and then something happens to make one of them go “Watch it!” ^^ . . . Heheh, I absolutely LOVE the way Naruto said, “Um . . . kinda. I . . . couldn’t help myself.” XDD . . . Very erotic talk; just the simple “You’re hard.” (*purrrrr*) . . . Man, this is really good. . . . Haha, I should’ve seen that coming. “No they’re not . . . argh.” XD . . . ALRIGHT! “You damn tease, Naruto.” I like how you just used the word “damn” instead of “f***ing.” I can hear him saying this totally. And the context was perfect. . . . All this flipping over is fun. . . . Nice use of the phrase “sunlit perfection.” It’s in great context, so it doesn’t seem cheesy. . . . “Combats?” Perfect! I didn’t know what those were, so I just looked ‘em up. Those are what he wears! Thanks! They’re not just “shorts,” their “combats!” ^_^ . . . Huh? How does Naruto grind himself into Sasuke’s knee if Sasuke’s straddling him?? . . . Oh wow, that was original. Sasuke just had his peak without even realizing it while he was concentrating on something else. Clever. . . . That was funny about the “dobe” joke. But I still hear way too much of the word. XP . . . Wow. “A few minutes later,” That fits well. It’s not cheesy. . . . Sasuke’s confusion is back. And it mixes well. I also like Sasuke’s thoughts on the whole thing and that final question “Was this . . . love?” I like how Sasuke really takes into consideration if Naruto deserves someone like him, instead of just thinking “no.” . . . And there’s the question again. . . . Enough with the “dobe!” Rrgh! . . . I like it when Sasuke points out the opposite effect of Naruto’s “treatment.” And FINALLY! he uses “usuratonkachi” for once. Thank you.
    Oh, clever! One gets cured, the other gets sick; one had sunburn, the other gets a cold. Nice. It’s a little symbolic to their personalities: Sasuke was burning for hotheaded Naruto, and now Naruto’s out with the boy with the cold personality. I like! ^_^ . . . Alright, now Sasuke’s the doctor! ^_^

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Chapter 1: Hee hee. XD That beginning was hilarious. . . . Poor guy. What the hell happened to get him so sunburned? . . . Oh, that’s what happened. . . . He’s hiding behind his bangs. I like that. I do that too sometimes. (Well, I don’t have bangs, but I let my hair hang in front of my face.) . . . XDDD I loved Sasuke’s three reasons for not wearing makeup. Especially that last one. XDDD . . . Nice last line of the segment.
    Buzzing hormones. ^^ . . . The writing in this is really good. . . . Mm, “passing faze,” you mean “phase.” . . . (*snort*) Oh jeez, a staring match. XD – HEY! Sakura, you just made him lose! (*gack*) And she’s getting all sappy too. XP . . . Haha! Kakashi just cut himself off! XD
    Oh god! Poor Sasuke! That’s gotta feel horrible! :( . . . Wise advice, Kakashi. Sasuke, you’d do best to heed it. . . . Do it! Do it! Do it! The offer’s wide open! *_* . . . Waitaminute, why would Naruto have remedies at home? Wouldn’t the Kyuubi keep him from getting sick? . . . “Fun together?” Hmmm. . . . .
    Hahah! “Sasuke suddenly wished that he’d had a colder shower.” XDDDD
    Yeah, makes me think of other things too. ^^' . . . Naruto came in?! . . . I likes the massage. . . . “Just as hot as before the shower?” Here comes the flushing. . . . I dunno, does he know? -- Now why is he stuttering? . . . Wha? What kind of question. . . ? NEXT CHAPTER!! XDDD
    No, the characters really aren’t OOC! Although Sakura was a little too cutesier than usual, I think. But so far, everything else seems fine.

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  • From Rosebud on June 02, 2007
    I LOVED it!!!! XD
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  • From Darkestfairyqueen on March 02, 2007
    OMFG!!! I LOVED IT THAT WAS THE CUTEST NARUTO/SASUKE STORY I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME..... (I'M NOT JUST SHOUTING FOR JOY ALSO MY CAPS BUTTON IS JAMMED...)

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  • From roseying on March 02, 2007
    awwwwwwww!
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  • From Reyn on March 01, 2007
    YaY! It was awesome! I like how Naruto managed to argue that being a dobe didn't count when it came to sex. LoL
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  • From ANON - jewel on March 01, 2007
    fabulous!! and a pretty good ending too.
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  • From VRon8899 on February 28, 2007
    Aww So Cute!!! I'm so happy you finsihed it!!! Nicely Done!!
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  • From DirewolfLilith on February 28, 2007
    bravo bravo! really great ending to a good story. i definetly enjoyed it!
    -direchan
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  • From ANON - Cat-san on February 28, 2007
    OMG! That was hot!!!! ...Can u really get sunburnt on ur lips? ...Hmmm, I should try that, hehe... *smirks evilly* Great job!!!!! They were both horny teh whole time. NICE!
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  • From LycheeTea on February 28, 2007
    Soo good! I'm glad they finally found an even ground... I look forward to your other works!
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  • From ANON - Hello on February 28, 2007
    He, he. I like the ending so much. Cute... yet hot. :)
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on February 28, 2007
    that was absolutely adorable, in a yummy, delicious, totally cute way. (OMG, i sound like i'm sugar high or on something. oh well!) yeah, i'd like more fics in this vein, so keep up the good work and have fun on your next fic!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 28, 2007
    Wheeee! They can be so cute together. And there's something about cute boys having orgasms while they're still half-dressed that's just... *yum*

    Good stuff!
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