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Reviews for Naruto Shippuuden: The Hitch Arc

By : HiroAyami
  • From edelta88 on July 28, 2007
    :O...this story is amazingly good. everything is well thought out, no plot holes, good plot... uber kudos to you
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  • From Dynamo on July 16, 2007
    OMG its awsome!!! please please please update soon!
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  • From p4s on June 07, 2007
    Excellent! Really_good_thing. I only hope that you won't overload story with lemon, as you say in the Prologue ("in accordance to the story"). The 3-d chapter is beautiful too ;) Of course there is slow speed of making a chapters, but... Good work, anyway! Keep it going

    p.s: it's funny - tomorrow I've an exam but instead of studying lessens I'm viewing NaruHina works :) yours, especially
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  • From HeartGaze on June 04, 2007
    Wow XD You so have to update this soon. I guess that means Sakura, Ino, and Shika all know that Naruto and Hinata had sex? :P
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  • From Tleilaxu on April 06, 2007
    Nice story keep at it. Although if I may suggest you stay away from words like gender, manhood, member, sex, ect ect when describing sex scenes andf parts. Use more common words like cock pussy cunt, dick ect for a much more steamy story in my opinion. Keep at it and I look forward to the next chapters.
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  • From Sean on March 28, 2007
    OMG, i feel so guilty i'm sorry i've been reading and not reviewing. sorry i got mmy own tthing now so time is scarce. I love your story. N/H is mmy favorite pairing and i love the story. THe idea of shika being hitch is great. and i always hope storys where Naruto walks in on Hinata. I find it funny and sexy. Alright keep it up it is so good.
    ~Dim Song
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  • From TheDarkLord on March 24, 2007
    very interesting. i hav 1 question is hinata now going to be normal around him?
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  • From Nameramthgin on March 22, 2007
    Good continuation. Just please update soon :)
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  • From Tenithus on March 21, 2007
    ..... I-I.... That was the most blunt Naruto I've ever seen, yet I would imagine that to happen in the anime. Great chapter comrade.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 21, 2007
    Nice chapter so he goes to her room and finds her playing and thinking of him. Now that was a good way to get him to fall flat on his face hope you update soon, and keep up the great writings please
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  • From Tleilaxu on March 20, 2007
    Good good I like how its going, slightly longer chapters and better update speed definetly appriciated. LOL

    Good job.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2007
    Crazy chapter. I agree whole heartedly on that hidden code of girls. I know how you feel with the little sister thing. I got two of em as well and they are annoying when it comes to my relationships with others. Anyway, I was expecting someone to over hear them talking, only I thought it would be at Ichiraku's ramen instead of his place. Great style of writing and there is a lot of character development on Naruto's part in that chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope it's up soon.

    Farezzz
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on March 15, 2007
    Nice update. And if the girls are all friends they will tell the other the good and sometimes bad. Not all will say about a break up unless they know that person was no good.
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  • From fmanerd50 on March 13, 2007
    great story i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Tenithus on March 12, 2007
    Damn you comrade, you have spoiled the mood of me writing how Hinata finds out in my story. Very good hapter thou, keep up the work comrade.
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