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By : emp78
  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2007
    AAArRRRGGGHHH!! Dont take it down! Ill cry! Please please continue this story!
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  • From ANON - Desprately Wanting More on June 28, 2007
    Please, please, please continue!!!!!!!! This is one of my favorite fic on here, and I wanna read it to the end. MPreg fics are rarely carried out till the end. I don't want this one to follow the same trend when it is so well written. It dosen't matter if the characters are a little OOC... it is called a FANfic after all. It just depends on the FAN that is writing it. So, PLEASE continue!

    PS: PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Mikinyet on June 28, 2007
    Well I think your story is ace I hope you don't take it down but it's your choice and I don't want to sound demanding. I can't to find ut if Naruto and the baby are going to be okay.
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  • From LadyAquill on June 28, 2007
    Jubes should be glad its not possible to bitchslap someone via the internet. coz as non-volent as i usually am that review gave me the urge to and seriously wasn't nice. bordering on flameing. Jubes deary, go spit venom somewhere else. if you don't like the story don't reveiw. I personally think this is an awesome story and it would be a shame to take it down. giving Itachi a reason to for killing his clan humanises him and adds to the story. having said that, the later chapters need the teenyist amount of tweaking to make it flow just that much better. other then that don't change a thing Kaa-san!! *hugs juu*
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  • From ANON - RebelC on June 28, 2007
    Ya know I really like this story so dont listen to the shit heads of the world. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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  • From Zigana on June 28, 2007
    Jubes is stupid. I really like this story and I really want you to continue it. I've been really enjoying it. Please ignore Jubes and anyone else like Jubes and continue with your writing.
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  • From ANON - Jubes on June 28, 2007
    Okay your grammar isn't so horrible... but I feel like this is being written by a 12 year old who has really good spelling and grammar skills. This is COMPLETELY OOC. Horribly so. People now in days have a hard time finding good stories, so when they find the promise of an author who keeps updating, and they're actually able to understand what is being written, they get over excited... it's sad but it's true. I don't hate you, I just don't like the fact that itachi has an EXCUSE for killing his caln? What the fuck... if you're gonna write a story so fucking OOC make a frikken warning, why dont you? I was soooo appalled by this. Itachi is a cold blooded murderer, and really, does he need an excuse as to why he killed his family... even if he does have one (which is unknown to us, excpet maybe to become more powerful and to gain his sharingan) It sure as hell was not going to be to protect a little boy... Who cant whipe his own bugers. *sigh* You're lucky that my review is even this long an I took the time to explain... I only did it because really if you came up with a better plot, characters that are not so horribly out of characters, and maybe a little realism involving characters that people are used to watching with their OWN personalities already intact, then perhaps you could be a good writer...


    Prove me wrong. Im called a bitch beccause I speak my mind. I dont mean to be an ass, but if I have to be one just to be honest... then Im an ass. Don't give up on writing though... I wouldn't want to take somthing like that away. Just realize that you need to keep them in characers... and bla bla bla I give.


    -- Jubes.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 31, 2007
    I NEVER liked incest before...this is the first time I actually like it! Although, I still think it's wrong...I mean, aren't Itachi and Naruto a couple?!! OH WELL!! I'll still read this cuz it's so awesome! XD!!

    -Damp *Please update!!*
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  • From ANON - Rolio87 on May 27, 2007
    I don't mind the threesome but i want Itachi to be more dedicated & in love with Naruto.
    What I really want to see is sex between just Naruto & Sasuke.
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  • From trystkinkou on May 27, 2007
    Puuurrrrrrrrrrrrr.. delicious... and I agree with Naruto on the mental images. YUM! PLEASE add more soon! This has becoem my own designer drug!
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  • From punkrockerhottie69 on May 25, 2007
    OMG!!! Sooooo good u got to update sooon lol please
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  • From ANON - ShiningPrincess on May 24, 2007
    More More!! Lol. This is interesting.. ;3
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  • From ANON - Sandra on May 22, 2007
    No it was not too much... I've been waiting to see if you would put in a sa/it/na scene. Loved the chapter, I hope that this has a happy ending. I'll end with a customary please update soon!
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  • From RoseNymphGreen on May 22, 2007
    Will someone kindly crank that fan to High? Damn that was hot. Never expected that twist. But holy danm crak monkeys.... Yeah that says it all. Keep 'em comming. pun intened.:p
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on May 22, 2007
    ok just started reading this today and i must say update update oh and update. this is by far the best naru/itachi.sasu fic i have read thus far. you must continue i hav to find out what happens next. XD
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