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Reviews for Under the weather

By : ceruleus
  • From ANON - S3R3N17Y on August 27, 2008
    I would really like to know what happens next. Please keep this story going.
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  • From Imagy on April 30, 2008
    I have a comment
    it needs another chapter
    or two
    or three
    I'm not picky
    'cause it seems like a good story
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  • From ANON - Zwii on February 09, 2008
    I really like it!
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  • From snnj11220 on February 07, 2008
    You should continue this, I love the concept behind it and the first chapter was great.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on January 27, 2008
    Wow I really hope you continue this story it sounds really cool!~ please keep writting it. I cant wait till Naruto goes to school!~
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  • From kati on July 29, 2007
    i'm really really curious...you have to update so you answer all the questions buzzing around now!! How's the baddies? Was it a Hyuuga that took naruto in? Are Hyuugaas the baddies too? Is sai a baddie (don't you just LOVE that word? ^^)? Why did naruto run away? UPDATE!! ^___^
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  • From on July 22, 2007
    That was amazing!!!! I loved it! I can't wait until you put the next chapter up! ^^
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  • From ANON - Claediar on June 05, 2007
    I love the story line and the multi-identity thing. I want to read more~
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  • From Lihrah on April 15, 2007
    Hm...the prologue reminds me of Sukisyo somewhat. Otherwise, I like the idea, keep writing, love!
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  • From TkCorvis on February 23, 2007
    Please update! This is probably one of the best Adult Fan Fictions I have ever read! I'm completely addicted to it!

    -TK
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  • From ANON - dana on February 23, 2007
    kinda like naruto meets the pretender i like it. is the kis in glasses who saved him shino. and the person who found him the night he ran away neiji. can't wait for more updates to find out.
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  • From nekochannya on February 22, 2007
    other than 'where's the rest' not much to add. It is clear he was a torturous experiment for the snake man, that he was 'saved' by the hyuuga and 11 yrs later felt the need to leave his 'saviors' to forge a life of his own. Quite spectacularly if I might add... I really want to see where this is going. Its very promising, so yeah... continue your experiment... ok?
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  • From TheGingerLady on February 22, 2007
    You have to update soon! My sanety comands it to remain!!!! Pleas!!! *pappy eyes*
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  • From Kerrisa on February 22, 2007
    Awe i hope to read more of this! It sounds so promising!! An insanely intelligent Naruto? Who'd a thunk >_> Lol but yes! Keep writing!!! I'm eager to find out what awaits our incognito'ed blondie! =D
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  • From on February 22, 2007
    wow. this is looking like it's going to be an amazing story. you have a lot of potential and it shows in this piece. i can not wait to see how this shapes up to be, i'm interested in it, my curiosity has been piqued. your characterization was superb, and i'm very curious to find out how onii-san is. please, please update soon! i'm eager to read what happens next!

    great job!
    ~hanyou-elf
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