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Reviews for Restless

By : Jelp
  • From Chria on July 13, 2007
    "You really have problemssss," Dokueki muttered. HAHAHAHAHA
    The relationship between Sasuke and Dokueki is some of the best written. I love it. Add more between those two when you can. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2007
    Wow! This was a marathon! But a good one! Neally laughed my head off at Narutos "Nani?" I can clearly see the expression on his face *laughes some more*
    One hour later: No really, you did great with this chappy! Just go on this way! Bye for the next Chapter! byebye^^
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on June 23, 2007
    I have to say that the naru/sasu lemon was better then the sasu/naru one. That could be because naruto turned out to be a kinky sod and i like that kind of thing...common the only way he could breath was by getting the air from a naruto's mouth...double anal with two narutos. Common it's like identical twins...and we all know how great those can be...only in naruto's case their is more then even three. Sasuke should be happy that naruto stole that scroll and learned that technique. I like kyuubi…and what was with that whole licking naruto thing…I liked it…*smiles* has a whole idea of the kyuubi being able to take human form and he wants naruto and sasuke is jealous…but common how do you fight something that lives inside naruto….I kind of want to read it…hope I can find one…I really don’t like writing fan fiction…..sorry for getting off topic but it sounds cool ne? Either way, I love your sex scenes…that have a flare on the kinky side of things and common normal sex gets boring after a while without something to spice things up.

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  • From ForgottenPrincess on June 23, 2007
    Chapter 1:
    what a wonderful way to start a chapter. And even if Naruto was the one who rolled on sasuke...sasuke was the one who did the act. I can't wait to find out what he is going to say. Will he really talk to naruto about what happened that night. Since sasuke wanted for that to happen again doesn't that mean that he was kind of annoyed when kakashi said they would be back home that same night?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2007
    Will Sasuke's plan succeed or fail? And will about Naruto? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From anapana83 on June 21, 2007
    This chap was awesome! One of the things i love about your writing is how descriptive you are. The plot is awesome, which i know i've said before, but i had to say again. I am anxious to see Naruto further reaction to this new development. I'm sure it's both saddening and happy at the same time. Crazy! Naruto might have an uncle now! Yay! I hope your pc does better, pls find a way to update soon!
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  • From Gwyllion on June 21, 2007
    OMG! THIS FICCIE IS PACKED WITH THE BIG ONE! D:

    Awesome fic! I squeed so happily that it was posted and the Naruto is actually going somewhere in finding his past. Yay for Kakashi and Yamato! Gotta love you characters....
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  • From kagome1303 on June 21, 2007
    Sorry about what happened to your computer. I remember when I tried to download something from an unidentified site, and I ended up with a trojan virus. I had to restore my system to the day before to get rid of it. Which means I had to get my internet connection to work all over again because the day before the virus my internet just wouldn't work for some odd reason, so restoring it made the problem come back. Well, I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter, and I hope you can get your computer all cleaned up.
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  • From serenagold on June 21, 2007
    DNA sequence was done brilliantly! The reactions and family descriptions were very well done.


    Also, Sasuke is still a bitch, but Dokueki is the best damn snake EVER!
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  • From roro237 on June 20, 2007
    Love it! I'm cracking up still. The story line with Dokueki and Sasuke is always funny to me:)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 20, 2007
    Hmm, wonder if Orochimaru will really die from the poison? I hope so! I can't wait until Sasuke and Naruto are together again! More smut!! :D Wonder how Naruto is going to react to the news that he's Yondaime's son?
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 20, 2007
    Heh I agree with Dokueki - Sasuke has issues - but oooh I love how the Naruto is yondaime's son thing is evolving!!! You're doing a really great job!!! Great chapter and thanks for the update ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - dana on June 20, 2007
    sasuke the necrophilliac is one of the funniest things ever. i don't know if i should be turned on cause crazt sasuke i sexy or totally grossed out that he thinks of screwing naruto when he's dead. and naruto's great grandfather running around and being so energetic is pretty sweet too. i can't wait to see the next update.
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  • From kagome1303 on June 17, 2007
    "First, train really hard. Second, become impressively strong. Third, beat Sasuke up and show him how much stronger he was than the teme, and fourth, beat or molest Sasuke until he realized that he was an idiot, meanwhile demanding answers.

    Yes, that was definitely a good plan."

    I love Naruto's plan. Especially that fourth step. I wonder what's in the vial with the white substance, and why would it kill Naruto. Sasuke really does have a deranged mind. Hopefully everything will be cleared up in the end.
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  • From kagome1303 on June 17, 2007
    I'm about to read ch. 8, and yes, a high Sasuke is a very scary thing indeed. Amusing, but very scary. I think I like it... I wish I could see a high Sasuke in in the actual story. Of course, I want to see SasuNaru smut in the actual story too, but it's not like that'll ever happen in a 13+ manga. Heck, even the american dub cut out Sasuke's and Naruto's accidental kiss, I hated that. That is why fansubs are much better. Or waiting for the uncut box sets, which have already come out, thank gods. I'll definately be buying those.
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