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Reviews for Memories of the Future

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - LenaKitsune on February 23, 2007
    I started reading this story to pass the time, not really thinking it would be good. But it slowly drew me in and when i got to the end of what you had written I was so sad that I wanted more. You have a very nice balance of story development and suspense and I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - jewel on February 23, 2007
    well if Sasuke and Naruto had the bond that I think they had, Sasuke is going to get suspicious but he'll tell himself that he's either losing it or imagining it. that would hold true for everyone else. plus Kakashi can't help but act differently. really like the story so far.
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  • From anapana83 on February 23, 2007
    This chapter was great! Finally someone knows whats going on....more or less lol. I think it was went well. Eitherway, if you aren't satisfied with it, you could always tweak it later. Ahhh the power of editing. Kakashi was the pefect person for Naruto to confide in. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on February 23, 2007
    I love this story!!!
    Anyway I think he should run into Shikamaru then we can find out who he is married to and he can interact more with Shinsuke. :)

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2007
    I like the way Naruto let Kakaishi know who he really was. At least, now he has someone to talk to and help him out. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Digitalkisses on February 23, 2007
    I think you did great going with Kakashi and no please don't rewrite the chapter, Kakashi will do his best to help him keep up the appearance while Kyubi figures some way out to turn back time so that Naruto and Sasuke can be together as they should be!

    Another great chapter, thanks you again for the email letting me know you updated *huggles*
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on February 23, 2007
    I like this, but it's so sad, Sasuke must be in eternal mourning for the loss of his mate, might be why he can't stand hearing his name spoken. Everytime he hears it, he probally wants to break down and cry. Poor Sasuke. Keep up the great work, I'm looking forwerd to an update. ^^
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  • From ANON - Jelise on February 23, 2007
    Gaara or Kakashi, hands down. I just think that they have the most interesting possibilities for reactions to finding. By the way, great story. I'm really liking it thus far. It keeps you trapped, hooked on every word. It's wonderful. It's also an interesting way to view the whole concept. It's not something you'd generally see, and that makes it all the more wonderful in my opinion.
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  • From SpiritSealedSlumber on February 22, 2007
    You make me cry. Every damn time. I ALWAYS CRY WHEN I READ YOUR STORIES. Granted, half the time it's from happiness rather than sadness. This time, it's both. Oh god. I feel so sorry for Naruto. It hurts just thinking about being flung sixteen years into the future, seeing your kids grown and the love of your life still grieving over you and NOT BEING ABLE TO SAY ANYTHING. Well, I was screaming for Naruto throughout these first five chapters. I can't believe how much subtle angst you've managed to pack into these chapters. I love it and hate it at the same time. Wonderful job with the kids. I mean, I've read a lot of Mpreg SasuNaru, but you added a fabulous touch with Ayame wearing orange and Kei/Touya both hating and loving ramen. As for the vote of who learn Naruto's secret, as cliche as it is, I vote Sakura. After all, second to Sasuke, she knows Naruto best. Besides, she's also female to Yuki's female, so she would be able to help Naruto out in "female pinches" so to say. XD Well, enough rambling. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as with all your stories. Also, know that I truly DEEPLY fell in love with this story, as I'm almost never bothered to write seriously epic proportion reviews. So, consider yourself warned. You might have another paragraph next chapter as well.
    Until then~
    SSS
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  • From ANON - SeveredWings on February 22, 2007
    I think it should Kei, he seems to have a fondness for Yuki...and to prevent a wierd incest thingie he should tell him. OR, ayame, she seems the most stable and would be able to handle it better. Not to mention she could tell him anything he needs to know seeing as she lives with Sasuke and is the mirror image of Naruto's sexy jutsu.

    Thanks for posting this, i truly enjoyed it!
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  • From DirewolfLilith on February 22, 2007
    well, if you asked me, i think gaara should be in on the act. he is someone who owes his entire 'life' to naruto and based his new personality on him, so he would probably be most likely to pick up on his little slips, being close enough to naruto yet not as blinded by pain as sasuke and the rest of the villagers. great fic and cant wait for more!
    -dire
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  • From ANON - Damp on February 22, 2007
    Wow, that's a hard choice. I'm going to have to go with Kakashi just because he's an old man and most old men know how to handle wierd situations *such as this on* and also because he's close to Naruto and Sasuke...Sasuke esecially. KAKASHI ALL THE WAY! *Do you plan on Kakashi figuring it out in the next chapter of in one of those later ones?*
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  • From ANON - blackmombafairy on February 22, 2007
    I love this story. It is very well written and i love the plot. I think Kakashi should find out cause he was so close to naruto and sasuke and he would keep the secret.

    "MAD"DY
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  • From ANON - seraphym on February 22, 2007
    kakashi! Besides, he's such a genius he probably knows already anyway, is that what he was talking to Sauske about while Naruto/Yuki was passed out?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2007
    I think one of the twins should know. I think it would be best!!
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