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Reviews for Love Deeper

By : CherryJade
  • From Adi on February 17, 2007
    writers like you come along less frequently than a blue moon
    you have the perfect balance of description and action that keeps the reader interested.
    so in case you haven't noticed, i LOVED this chapter
    the writing flowed so well from one scene to another, i was rather surprised there wasnt a detailed smut scene, but i think its better without.
    i like the story line too!
    i cant wait for the next update,
    oh and i love your angry!naruto (very hot)
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  • From ANON - ai-chan on February 17, 2007
    Kyah!
    I love it!
    also love the fact you put the prologue n chap 1 together lol
    love how sexxie yooh made sasuke~
    love how you made the story go around~~
    much love!
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  • From ANON - Akiru chan on February 17, 2007
    WOW. I simply loved it. You must continue it. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From nekochannya on February 17, 2007
    oooohhhhhh... this promises a lot of good laughs and soft moans... nyah! me likes! Write more! I would love to be a fly on the wall to see their reaction when they realize they are boss and secretary... LOL that will definitely be worth reading... good style... smooth and flowing... keep up the good work, ne?
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  • From ANON - Kamilla on February 17, 2007
    I'm really looking forward to read more. Good fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2007
    nice. i liked how you didnt focus too much on the act of sex itself. very tasteful. hope you update soon.
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  • From KansouAme on February 17, 2007
    Good start!.. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - jadebyrd on February 16, 2007
    ok i admit it, i cheated....i really loved your story! so after i read it, i went ahead and read all the reviews you got. when i realized some of your reviews said you had more chapters posted on ff.net, i looked for it there and read the next two chapters! it's sooo good so far! i really like it...i can't wait to hear what happens next! don't worry though i will still leave a review for every chapter here (even though i have already read ahead on ff.net) keep up the good work, i'll be waiting for your next update!!!

    -jenn
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  • From ANON - Jen on February 16, 2007
    I'm sorry!!! I just found your story on ff.net and it is in fact your story. Thank goodness! Well update with the three chapters you already have! And then write more! Bye!
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  • From ANON - naru reader on February 16, 2007
    I like the plot, the idea and the basic story. This looks like something I would get hooked on. However, if I were you, I would polish this fic by getting a beta to fine tune the grammar and the word usage. Or, maybe all you need to do is check for mistakes once you're finished with each chapter. Keep going with this; I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Black Ice (not logged in) on February 16, 2007
    I like it so far except that it was Sai that Sakura cheated on, he's just way too fruity.
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  • From waruwaru on February 16, 2007
    intesting, intresting!^^
    Like it so far!XD
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  • From anapana83 on February 16, 2007
    That was short and yet ohhh so hot! I loved it. That Sakura. Let me not start on her. So Sasuke's gonna make Naruto forget. I like that idea alot. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - marcii07 on February 16, 2007
    Ooooh.....I'm all excited about the next chappie!! ^_^ YAY!! I now have something to really look forward to! No pressure though. *hugs* As far as I know, this plot is pretty unique. Anyway, I kind of thought that Naruto's decision was a little hasty...but who knows? Maybe he was blinded by Sasuke's smexiness!

    Muuwaaaahahahahahaaa!

    Thanks for sharing!!

    *Me
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  • From barara on February 16, 2007
    good! i liked it! post more soon!
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