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By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - animelover on April 26, 2008
    tw, WILL U MARRY ME!!!!!!!!!! ahem .. sorry about that little outburst. honestly, you just rock! man, i was kthinking you were finished with this fic, but no, you pull a rabbit out of your fic hat and leave us with WAFF. i especially love the part about naru kick danzou's butt ... definitely worth staying up late to read. LOL!


    see you next update!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on April 26, 2008
    I read the latest chapter upon your recs. And WTF?! Naruto and Sasuke should have been TOLD the truth the moment they became Genin! Since according to what i read, Genins are considered as adults! Meaning they had the legal right to know the truth! Naruto should have been told that his parents died-instead of abandoning him! And- the entire thing with Itachi-*shakes head* Someone should have told Sasuke-but they failed BIG time! And now Sasuke will have to hear it from Tobi-whatever his name is. He says he's Madara! But I'm not buying it. There's no way anyone can live that long and NOT age! Remember as you age, your body goes out of shape...There's the cons that comes with old age, gray/white hair, brittle bones, stiff muscles, possible arithis, prone to sicknesses, longer to heal from injuries (My maternal step-grandfather was prone to getting sick, before he died 13 months ago, so I know what I am talking about. And my paternal grandparents are suffering from those systoms now. nd my mom says they are in their 90s... Close to Tobi's supposed age) So it's plain impossible, unless you know some evil magic. My mom once said everyone dies. It's part of life. So I guess what the Akatsuki did to post-prone their life could be considered as unnatural...But Deidara and Itachi didn't do any of that stuff, now I think about it. Itachi's behavior in the manga made ZERO sense at all... Deidara's jutsu was more like a suicide attack. I dunno about Kisame, I suppose we'll be finding out about him, if the manga ever decides to show the fight betweeen him and Suigetsu...Otheriwse loved this chapter. But I still feel that Naruto should have been told the truth about his parents. He's old enough to know...Plus he's strong and can protect himself from Minato's enemies. Unless Rock is suicidal, I doubt anyone would want to tangle with Sasuke!
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  • From ANON - Moiira on April 25, 2008
    OMG! Love the story!¢¾ It's so GOOD! ^^ and I absolutely LOVE your author notes their hilarius. ^^ You seem to have SOOOO much fun. Please don't stop writing *puppy eyes* I love the way you write I wish I could write fanfics but all I seem able to do are original stories and I'm too scared of posting those because of plagerism :( Oh well that's it...I think... ^_^'
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on April 25, 2008
    ::whoops:: A great update. And Naruto passed out! Man, that cracked me up! So, we're gonna be seeing more of the living members of the Uzumaki clan?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2008
    Chapter 50: Implication? I thought I noticed something was going on, but I wasn’t sure what. . . . (*snort*) Once again, I love Itachi’s concern. X3

    Wuh-oh. If those stay, Arashi’s going to have it rough in life. Kyuubi, did you know about this? . . . . “Oops?” ljsikogf;jdkil XDDDD . . . . Nice about the “antagonizing a vixen defending kits.” ^_^ . . . . Yikes, those are going to be tough kiddies! (It’d be interesting if one of them were to take a bad path later in life.) . . . . This is pretty cool, these abilities. Normally I’d think they’re over-the-top, and they are kind of extreme, but I like them and they make sense. I like how you described them. . . . Does the definition of “pack members” extend to Sasuke as well? Cuz that’d be cool. . . . (*snort*) Love how Naruto cooled down and then blew up again. XD . . . . LOL, Iruka’s line! “Well, I have to admit he’s cute like this.” XDD . . . . I can totally hear Tsunade yelling that. XD This is great. =) . . . . (*chokes on laughter*) Th-th-the s-s-s-sn-sn-snake. . . ! XD His attitude! (*falls over laughing*) Ho man, that’s crazy. ^_^ . . . . Err, whoops. “You and I both know damn well that was there before now so how and why is it there now?” Might want to change the first “was” to “wasn’t”. I was a little confused reading the sentence. ^_^;
    (*snicker*) “And Sasuke was trying to calm Kaji down and considering stealing some of Tsunade’s sake.” He’s probably getting a headache from all this excitement and jumping from one thing to another, but Sasuke, sake isn’t going to help your head, dear. ^_^ . . . . Lol, Naruto’s reaction of “What next?” That whole sentence was great. ^_^ Actually, that entire tiny paragraph was probably one of my favorites, because I can visualize it and hear it to total perfection. ^_^ . . . . Love exactly how they “hammered it out.” ^_~
    I get the feeling Sasuke’s going to try to make some amends. . . . Õ.Õ For God’s sake, don’t the ninja have any control at all?! If it’s good enough for the Hokage, it should be good enough for you not to attack a person in their sleep, damn you bastards! Sasuke, give the guy hell for me, will ya? Thanks! õ_õ (*huffs*) . . . . Thanks, Sasuke. Dude, you better listen to him, you know what he’s like when his family’s threatened. . . . (*impressed*) Nicely stated, Sasuke. Can I take lessons? . . . . Heheheh, love how Sasuke knows just how to describe himself. ^^ :heart: . . . . “May take them centuries for them to make a decision?” Isn’t that dangerous? I mean, are the snakes going to run wild or what? õ_ô
    I like how you described the exhaustion catching up with them. . . . Love their little exhausted conversation. =)

    Whaaat? Don’t rewrite it, it’s fine.

    Okay, I've reviewed every chapter! Pleeeaaase update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Chapter 49: (*still laughing from watching that series*) XDDDD Love the part in ep 1 when Deidara comes in. XDDD And ep 2! Itachi’s reaction to Bleach! XDDDD And-and then . . . *Pfft* Automatic door. . . ! (*dies laughing*) Oh, but that last part made me sad. T_T

    (*deep breath*) H’okay, I can do this. (Hey, where are Itachi and Sai?)

    XD “Damn it, Iruka, I wanted this to last.” Good line. X3 . . . . õ_- . . . . (*snort*) Love how Iruka’s all “That does it,” and gets busy. X3 . . . . Love how Iruka’s all “Grrr.” ^^ . . . . At least they’re not in a too public place, otherwise they could get in trouble for indecent exposure at the least. (*sweat*) . . . . They’re not gonna fall asleep out there, are they? (*sweat*)
    LOL, Iruka and Obito exchanging stories! X3 . . . . Oh no, poor Kana. . . . O.O Shit, this is bad. Who the hell is this nutjob? I wonder if Kana defending the kids will clear her identity a little more.
    Oh, so that’s the nutcase. I always tend to forget about him. 9_9 . . . . Wait, did Naruto just have a vision? Cool. Must be a Kyuubi thing. Nicely done.
    Yeah, if this doesn’t clear her with Sasuke, I don’t know what will. . . . Lol, “Correction, brat: I’m here.” ^^ . . . . Yup, that cleared it. Hmm, I kinda wish the distrusting thing was shown a little more before this moment, but that’s okay.

    XD There you guys are. Love Itachi’s concern. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Chapter 48 47: XD Love your dialogue with Itachi. ^^ . . . . XDDD It just gets funnier! . . . . (*starts chanting*) “They’re coming to take me away, ha-haa, they’re coming to take me away, ha-haa . . .” >w< . . . . And I still don’t approve of most of those pairings! >.< . . . .

    Chapter 47 yet again. (Make up your mind, already.) 9_9

    “Hideous genetic heritage?” I dunno, I think it looks kinda eerie. :heart: . . . . Love the line, “She’s kinda like a shyer me.” Totally. . . . Okay, forgive me for being a bit of a conformist, but that dog-shit was filler-only and a bad idea. Naruto’s really not that dumb/clutzy in the manga (at least I don’t think so). (I don’t know why the anime put so much gross stuff in there.) . . . . (*snicker*) Love the discussion about “Uchiha” and its synonyms. ^^ . . . . “In other words he’ll never warm up to Kana.” I’m hoping that he does after a very long period. =) . . . . It’s been a month already? Wow. Time flies.
    Oh jeez, those two arguing. X3 . . . . Smooth, Kana. . . . Yay, she gots a boyfriend! ^_^
    Holy cow! Kakashi, WAKE UP, dammit! And Iruka, LIGHTEN UP! Oy! (Idiots.) õ_õ . . . . Heh. Trust Sasuke to state what’s on his mind so bluntly. ^^ . . . . LOL, everybody’s reactions all at once! That’d make a great doujin page! XDDD . . . . Hmm, I like Iruka’s line: “For Kami-sama’s sake [. . .]” I agree with him, Kakashi; that is none of your business, friend or not. . . . Iruka kinda reminds me of me. I say things partway, and then just don’t want to bring it up again. (Though Iruka probably will talk about it some more.) . . . . Err, I like Sakura urging Kakashi on, but the way she said it: “Go after your man, Kakashi, before you lose him!” sounded . . . odd to me. I think it was the “your man” part. (*sweat*) . . . . LOL!! “Love makes the most intelligent people into idiots and stupid people into brainless monkeys.” XDDDD . . . . Oh HELL YEAH! You tell him, Sasuke! =DDDDD
    Ooh, ouch. Love that line: “Iruka pulled his fist back and clocked Kakashi.” So quick. . . . The fight looks . . . strange in my mind’s eye. ô_o . . . . I love Iruka’s reason for his feistiness. . . . Awww, Kakashi’s confession! :heart: . . . . Kakashi acting like Gai? Scary. o_o . . . . Aww, so cute. (And now I’m going to have to squint for this scene. =_=) . . . . Love the growled line, “You’re playing with fire, Iruka.” I can hear Kakashi saying it. . . . And I like the response as well. . . . Oh boy, I can feel another clean part of my unpure mind breaking. =_=

    I guess that was evil. I don’t really mind it, though. Actually, you’re just living up to your name, right? “Truly Wicked”? ^_^ . . . . Huh, I’ve never heard of that series. I’ll have to check it out. . . . Episodes 3 and 1, got it. (*goes to watch YouTube*)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Chapter 47: O.O That . . . was . . . random. Õ_Ô

    (*snort*) Oh, Hinata. 9_9 . . . . Ahahaha, talk about being seriously startled! XD (*after reading Hinata’s apology to Kana*) . . . . Judging from Kana’s style, she and Hinata should be pretty good working together, I’d think. . . . Maybe she’s got ‘Rochi-kun’s intelligence if not his personality.
    Oh shit, Anko. õ_õ . . . . It’d be kind of interesting if Kana’s phobic about snakes. =) . . . . Well, that went well. ô_ô . . . . Well, so far more and more people have been accepting Kana without too much of a problem. I wonder if a bomb’s going to drop sometime.
    HUH?! Sai and . . . you’re kidding me?! O.O (Actually, I like this idea. One of the best pairings I’ve seen in this fic.) . . . . (*snort*) Funny, Sai being “a screamer.” Hard to imagine. ^^ . . . . Ooh, good idea, Sai! I can totally see Obito as a teacher! =D (Though Iruka’s going to be on edge if things don’t get sorted out soon.)
    Hmm, I like Sasuke’s thoughts on Naruto’s words and the situation with Kana. . . . I also like how he didn’t just say, “You’re right and I was wrong,” right off the bat. I like to see progress, but slow progress is great. ^_^ . . . . So “avenger” has become “former avenger.” Nice subtlety. ^_^ . . . . Way to break up the mood, Obito! X3

    Oh, I forgot about how Itachi might take the news. X3 . . . . Hell yeah! Itachi OWNZ ‘Rochi-kun! XD . . . . I like your analysis about seme/uke, but I have to agree with Sai on this one. Sorry ‘bout that. (*sweat*) I think it can be pretty hot when the younger guy is the seme, even to an older seme-type. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Chapter 46 45: Oh hey, Jiraiya. . . . (*snort*) Love this part: “Sai: I think I’m going to give up on trying to maim TW. She always finds a way to slither out of trouble. Itachi: Much like Orochimaru.” XDD (Sorry, TW, I’m a connection whore. I love it when people make connections between things. *sweat*) . . . . “[. . .] but his ass is still untouched.” And then we met Madara, and that apparently changed. (Not by me, it’s just majority. ^^;) . . . . You and your darn spoilers, TW! Why’d you have to tell me what’s going to happen with Kakashi & Iruka? õ_õ

    Chapter 45 again. 9_9

    Love that whole first paragraph. ^^ . . . . I don’t blame you for being worried, Iruka, but don’t count the chickens just yet. . . . Is Kakashi really oblivious to the cause of Iruka’s anxiety? . . . . Must’ve been a lot of work to heal Obito. He was buried in a freakin’ rockslide, for crying out loud. . . . I like the details to Obito’s treatment.
    I like this discussion and the reason for Obito’s irritation. . . . Very well-done argument. . . . Wait a minute, Obito’s abused? Dang. o_o . . . . Hey, do I see an echo of the argument that Sasuke and Naruto had at the Valley? . . . . This is an awesome scene! =D . . . . Awww, so sweet. :heart: . . . . You know, this might be the first Kakashi scene that I’ve liked (when it comes to adult stuff, you know). . . . (*snort*) “. . . I can’t believe you just said that.” XDD . . . . Wow, GREAT scene! I like how it ended! And I probably would’ve still liked it if they had gone all the way! Good job! =DDD And I also like how they subtly planned stuff for the next night and it wasn’t too blatantly obvious. I had to remember that the next night never happened. Really well-done. ^_^
    Good first line, Obito. . . . “Kakashi laughed, ‘I’ll bet that was fun.’” XDD . . . . “Long past midnight,” wow. Understandable too. Iruka’s not going to be too happy, though. . . . Aww, poor Iruka. This also had a very nice description, this scene.
    I wonder why they’re all looking cowed; is Iruka being scary? . . . . Well, that answers that. Nice one, Iruka, growling at Sasuke like that. ^_^ And Sasuke, you need to lighten up and give her a chance. . . . Cute, Kana offering to help and Iruka gently saying “No thanks.” I like Iruka’s line, I can hear him saying it. ^_^ . . . . So Iruka gets feisty when he’s jealous, eh? Heheh. . . . XD “Give Gaara a run for his money,” yikes. XD . . . . Sasuke, can you possibly be any more subtle? (*sarcasm*) . . . . I do like his line: “I think that your empathy [. . .] danger she could be.” I like the reasoning, and not just jumping right to it. . . . Naruto has a good counter-reason as well. . . . Say, when did Naruto hear about Obito’s story? . . . . “I have a mission to get to.” I wonder if that’s Sasuke’s way of giving in, or if he’s just being a stubborn ass. Hard to say. Guess I’ll find out, though. I liked that response. . . . Kana’s coming off as a bit of a martyr to me. . . . Interesting ending. Wake up and smell the jutsu smoke, Kakashi!
    Let’s hope this will go well. It’d be bad for someone to overreact and just jump right in and interrupt.

    Dude, that’s not funny, Itachi! Jeezus! õ_õ . . . . (*to your question*) Oh! OH! I see where this is going now! =DD
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Chapter 45: Call me a stiff, but no chapter for a week isn’t anything to die about. Now, if it had been the case of the author dying . . . that’s what I call a good reason to die. (*nods with conviction*)

    Ooh, Orochimaru had a kid! =0 . . . . “Corpse-pale,” nice description. =D . . . . Interesting story. . . . Heh. Love this part: “Naruto, forgive me, but I’m about to complicate your life.” ^^ . . . . Ooh, interesting about Naruto possibly being cool while Sasuke’s being untrusting.
    Right off the bat, Sasuke’s on guard. . . . . Hmm, did Kakashi have a thing with Obito in the past? Or does Iruka just think so? . . . . (*snort*) I’ve love to see Tsunade bitch-slap Sasuke. XD . . . . Ooh, nice one, Naruto. =) . . . . I like Tsunade’s last line of the scene.
    Ooh, nice room! Where did that come from?

    That was a cute chapter! I liked it! :heart: . . . . How come they’re pissed because of those pictures? They know you have pictures of them and it’s never bothered them before. õ_ô
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 44: Heh. Love your dialogue with Itachi. =)

    Mmm, nice. . . . Yeah, this scene is really well-done. . . . Ooh, that’s mean, Naruto. =) . . . . Wow, never heard the word “screw” as this type of description. I mean, I’ve heard it as a reference to sex, but not quite like this. =) . . . . Man, this scene is great. Love the slight touch of Sasuke taking a little bit of initiative as well. . . . O.O . . . . This . . . was probably the hottest scene I’ve seen yet in this story. =D
    Obito alive? Wow. I wonder what Kakashi’s going to say. I wonder how the hell he survived that landslide-thing. õ_ô . . . . Huh? Who is this girl? Is it Rin? And does Tsunade know her? õ_õ

    Love the whole dialogue between you three. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 41 43: I know how you feel about the whole Tobi/Obito/Madara thing. Actually my first response to seeing Tobi like that was, “. . . what did Deidara’s explosion do to him??” ^^; . . . . I like Itachi in this scene. ^^

    Huh? 43? How’d it jump to that?? o.O . . . . (Hey, does Naruto still have that birth canal?) . . . . Heheh, loved the sexy scene that got interrupted. ^^
    Love Iruka’s quiet threat. For some reason I can totally see him issuing it. ô_ô
    Oh, for God’s sake, Naruto, I would’ve thought Iruka would’ve had all that stuff covered anyway! You suggested him because of that sort of thing, after all! õ_o
    Ooh, goodie! =D (*leans forward eagerly*) . . . . Mmm, nice and slow. . . . Hopefully this won’t be the only time of NaruSasu.

    YES, that WAS evil!! How could you?! ò_ó . . . . (*snort*) Love Sai’s innuendo that gets both him and Itachi laughing. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 40: XD Sai’s antics. (Sorry, TW, he’s just too funny. I hope it didn’t hurt too badly. Actually, never mind -- I know it must’ve hurt like hell. >.< .)

    Oh good, the revenge is successful! XD . . . . Duhhh, Kakashi. XD . . . . I hope he’s not grinning due to a new counter-revenge he just thought up.
    Love how Hinata’s giggling at Naruto like this. ^^ . . . . Interesting idea. ô_ô
    (*thinks for a moment after reading the first paragraph*) . . . AHAHAHAHA!! XDDDD You’re right, Iruka, that is funny! ^^
    Love Sasuke’s slight frustration.
    Kakashi? “Baby-phobic?” I think I just made a new friend. ^^; . . . . Love Iruka’s line: “Not that I’m complaining, but why isn’t the house a disaster?” XD . . . . (*snort*) Iruka’s laughing at Kakashi. XDD . . . . (*snicker*) I wonder if Kakashi had been hoping Iruka would promise something else instead of “time to make dinner” (though I’m not complaining that he didn’t, thank heavens).
    Love how Kakashi and Iruka are just taking in the scene. ^_^

    Oh, so there is going to be a shower fight. I wonder if it’ll lead into anything else. . . ? . . . . Darn it, TW, that was hypothetical! Quit answering and spoiling the story, damn it. õ_õ . . . . (*after looking at picture*) Carbon-copies, scary. o_o How is it that they all resemble one person each with no mixture? õ_ô
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 39: Why is your muse so crabby? . . . . Good luck, Sai.

    Like what Kyuubi has to say about the kids. Also, I agree with both him and Naruto when it comes to Naruto (not) using his enhanced senses on a more regular basis. . . . Ooh, he got you with that one, Naruto. Maybe it would be a good excuse to use them now. . . . (*giggle*) Cute touch about the kid grabbing Sasuke’s hair. ^^ . . . . XD Love Naruto’s impression and how Sasuke’s embarrassed. XD
    Oy, Sasuke, don’t swear around kids! ò_ó . . . . Eww, that’s gross. (Probably happens a lot, but I don’t care. >_< .) . . . . Okay, why is Naruto reluctant to say “penis?” õ_ô . . . . (Oh, hey, Sasuke noticed that, too.) . . . . I wonder how Mikomi might feel in years to come when she doesn’t have the senses that her siblings have. . . . Oh my, extra observation, I know where this is going. 6_^ . . . . Guess not. Ah well, that’s fine. (((Err, you spelled “Sakura” with as “Sajura”.))) Triple ceremony?? Jeez, I’ve never heard of that one before. o_o
    I guess that’s a hazard of having a bunch of babies in one room -- but then, they can’t exactly have one room per kid. How the hell are they going to calm them all down? õ_o . . . . Uhh, I’m confused about the breast pump/Sasuke sleeping/Naruto feeding/etc. Please explain? . . . . Great idea, Naruto. But it’d still be less privacy, darn it. . . . “Sasuke smirked. [. . .] can be.’” Hopefully it won’t be a breeze with Kakashi. And hopefully Kakashi won’t bug Naruto and Sasuke with stupid stuff later. >_< . . . . Ooh-hu-hu-hu, I luuuv the “wickedly calculating expression.” (*rubs hands together maliciously*)

    Yeah, I know about that wing. Seriously. Although I just can’t get over how it didn’t affect Sasuke’s back in his normal form and at the same time not grow back later. : (If you ask me, I like the thing Zrina put in The Sound of Dreams about that sort of issue.) “And I think Deidara has Itachi issues.” (*snort*) Oh really, you think?! XD . . . . Oh hey, Itachi. Love your line. ^_^ . . . . At least Ri’s happy. (*sweat*) . . . . I’m pretty sure that Itachi can lie damn well when he wants something bad enough. X3 (Don’t get me wrong, his affection for Sai is probably genuine, but I still can’t rule it out.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2008
    Chapter 38: O.O Knew it would happen at an inopportune moment: when Sasuke’s not there. >_< . . . . “Ri?” Who’s Ri? . . . . Oh! Nice to meet you! ^^ . . . . “Wrinkle boy?” x_x I prefer “weasel-boy,” thank you very much. (*sweat*) Actually, I think those lines under Itachi’s eyes are cute. In an, uh (*eyes darting nervously to Itachi*), um, very manly and sexy way that, uh, is – uh -- perfect for -- for -- for making an erotic and/or scary scene! ^_^; Heh. Um, I’ll be over there. >_>;;;; . . . . Don’t worry about the mistakes, I’m pretty sure a lot of us here are virgins. Um . . . yeah. (*hides in corner again*) >_>;;;;;

    (*snort*) That -- that -- Warning! X3
    It’s kinda funny how Sasuke’s the one giving signals on a team with Kakashi and Shikamaru. I wonder how he got that position. ^^ . . . . That’s funny, the guy doesn’t know Sasuke. Boy didn’t do his research, did he? . . . . Luv this: “Who are you?” “None of your business.” ^^ . . . . This guy sounds so corny. Sorry, but his lines are so . . . heard. . . . Nicely played with Hinata. I’m usually pretty picky about her when she gets tough or assertive (it’s kind of hard to get it just right), but this is pretty good. I like how Kakashi introduced it. . . . Owwwwch! >.< That -- has -- got -- to -- hurt. (Well, Kakashi did warn him. *sweat*) . . . . Sasuke’s awesome when he’s angry. :heart: . . . . Oh, such drama, Sasuke. It would’ve been pretty cool anyway even if you hadn’t told the man your name.
    Yeezus, it just occurred to me: the guys aren’t going to have to be looking after 3 babies anymore, but four! They’re going to run out of diapers before the week is out! O_O . . . . How worried is Naruto about Sasuke, considering that the guy has been gone for a month? . . . . That is kind of ironic. “All you have to do is pick her up and she settles down.” I guess from one to another with energy. ^^ . . . . And I still think you should switch to Lee, Sakura! õ_õ . . . . Uh-oh. . . . Interesting reaction from Naruto. ô_o
    Um, I think you mean “vicious contraction,” not “viscous.” (*sweat*) . . . . It’s all right for her to tell Naruto to “push” and he may have a birth canal, but can he feel the muscles there, now? Cuz if he doesn’t, will he know what/where to push? õ_ô . . . . Aww. ó_ò Poor guy. . . . “Paler than usual,” eh? Understandable. He probably looks a little sick. . . . LOL, “Shit, fuck, AND hell.” XDD Good one. . . . Wrong thing to say, Sasuke. “It can’t be that bad?” Jerk. ¬_¬ . . . . Hah! He gotcha back, Sasuke. ^^ . . . . Jeezus, that was some threat. O_O;;; . . . . Man, that’s gotta be disheartening: “We’ll have the first one out.” So now you have to go through this about 2 more times. Eesh, poor guy. õ_o . . . . Wha? Sasuke cut it? I think that’s a little wrong. 9_-
    Man, this is just going on! o_o . . . . Heheh, I like Sasuke’s line about the second kid. I guess the first one will take more after him, though. ^_^ . . . . (*giggle*) And I love Naruto’s point about Sasuke being loud when he wants to be. Very true. ^_^ . . . . Feet first? That’s a little unusual, but it happens a lot. . . . Heh. “Hell no, you manipulative ass.” Love how Naruto knows what Sasuke’s doing and states it. ^_^ . . . . O_O Shit, this could be bad. . . . (*whew*) Thank God. -_-;;; (*blinks*) “Indignantly?” X3 . . . . Aww, so cute! X3 She looks like her, uh, blonde daddy (not going to say “mommy” >_< .). . . . The middle child sure is . . . strange. Is that hair even possible? It’s kind of interesting how if you line the children next to each other, it’s like a fade of Uchiha to Uzumaki. The middle child seems to have his brunette daddy’s seriousness and his blonde daddy’s lungs. ^^ I wonder if that’s really just the case or if there might be something . . . off. Hmmm. . . . Aww, cute names. :heart:

    Huh? Newborns have blue eyes? I’ve never heard of that. õ_ô . . . . Oh! I learned something new today! ^_^ . . . . And thanks for the clarification for the story with Akuma.
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