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By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Xenobia on May 10, 2008
    First of all, congratulations to you and your family!
    Wait to you get the first wiff of clean baby smell.

    I'm so happy for you!
    Awesome update by the by.

    >X
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  • From robyntalks on May 10, 2008
    KAWAII. >
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  • From monrque on May 10, 2008
    so what happened to Naruto's relatives in wave country?
    did they meet his family.
    will you go deeper into that
    i wanted to hear more about.
    this story is always good i love when you update.

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  • From lupin2000 on May 05, 2008
    HURRAY!!!!!!!!!!! yet another great chapter. Im actually glad that this story is so long, you are doing an awsome job developing the story. Keep it up
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  • From spooksies on May 04, 2008
    wow T.W. this chappie was very informative and way awesome as ever! give cookies to your muses for helping you! XD... your ri's danny sounds like someone i happen to know and love as well as hate with a passion...my hubby!!! hehehe

    anyways i will be looking forward to seeing the next installment!

    as always have fun! ~_^
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  • From LadyRonin on April 29, 2008
    this was a really nice chapter alot happened and you did a wonderful job putting it together. and thanks for making it really long too it was a nice treat. don't worry if you feel like the story is to long because it is one of the things i like about it (with my rereading sickness and all that). i love how sasuke and naruto are as a couple and i like how you are detailing their life with the kids (especially arashi who's my favorite). i could totally see mikoma being underneath naruto constantly (like how itachi was trying to stalk i mean catch him). can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From robyntalks on April 29, 2008
    Wow, it took me three days to finish this fic.
    I love it!! ^_^
    Thanks for all your hard work and well done so far.
    Can't wait for next posting :)

    Love Robyn
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2008
    Chapter 51: Wow, this is gonna be a long one. o_o; . . . . XD “TW: You may not be completely evil but you’re still an ass. Itachi: That’s part of my charm.” Love that! ^_^ . . . . XD You guys are great. ^^

    (*chomp* Just a comment for posterity. XD) . . . . I like the bit about “some kitsune having empathic abilities.” I always thought empaths were cool. =D . . . . Love the rock/paper/scissors routine. ^^ . . . . “Hide the kunai?” LMAO!!! XDDD . . . . Hey, you called them both “daddies” this time, instead of one being “mommy.” =) . . . . Niiiiice, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Love Kakashi’s oath for the future. ^_^
    Cuuuuute, that first image. :heart: . . . . “Back to normal physically.” So no more birth canal, eh? Cool. (Hopefully it won’t appear again, cuz they’ll have enough on their hands for life now.) . . . . I like the details about how and why they get (or don’t get) separation anxiety for Naruto or Sasuke. . . . Oh, I freakin’ LOVE the last parts of this scene!! She called him, “Chichi,” and Sasuke’s all dumbstruck, and then Kakashi takes a picture and says that?! XDDD So sweet and cute and hilarious!! =DDD
    Interesting mission.
    Oooh (*shivers excitedly*), love Naruto’s growled threat to the assassin and how he takes control of the situation. =D . . . . Ouch. >_< . How does Naruto feel about killing in general, I wonder? . . . . The girl knows Naruto’s from Konoha, but does she know which ninja he is? Or does she just know that he’s some ninja from Konoha? . . . . Holy -- Danzo? Seriously? Wow. (The guy’s a total prick if you ask me.) . . . . “My father refuses [. . .] only solution.” Jeezus, what is this guy, a jacked-up Puritan? ò_ó . . . . You said it better than I, Naruto. (*nods fervently*) . . . . Yay, she’s got major confidence in Naruto. :heart:
    Yeah, baby! Ninja village! =D . . . . Wait-wait-waitaminute, back up. Ichigo? Red hair? (*blinks*) Mention of the word “shinigami” earlier? (*blinks*) I think I know where this is going. ô_o . . . . I like seeing Inari like this. =) . . . . I like this line: “Hmm, your grapevine’s a little bit behind.” ^^ And I love how Inari reacts to the news of Naruto’s marriage to Sasuke! XD . . . . Red hair seems common in these parts. . . . OH, AWESOME! “Last of the Ninja from [. . .]”! =DDD . . . . I like what you did with this new character, how you didn’t totally clean him of suspicion and have him a little wary of Naruto as well. Totally natural in the ninja world, I expect. =)
    Heh. Love how Naruto’s all, “I know you’re there.” ^^ . . . . “I spent several years [. . .] if anyone’s watching you.” Great line. ^_^ . . . . “I beg your pardon?” (*snort*) XD . . . . Hmm, quite an intro there, Naruto. ô_ô (I wonder what people back home would say.)
    Interesting reaction, Shinji. “ I don’t know whether [. . .] or [. . .] to hell.” =) . . . . Okaaay, the chieftain’s reaction is beginning to alarm me. õ_o . . . . Wha, sister? Õ.Ô . . . . Wait. Is there a problem with him being a Konoha ninja, I wonder? õ_õ
    Wind dragon, cool. I’d like to see that. . . . Sheesh, one undramatic hit from a chakra scalpel causes this much damage. Yikes.
    Okay, Sachiko’s you’re-alive-you’re-okay-so-now-I’m-angry seems a little . . . I dunno, strange with her character to me. õ_ô . . . . And as for you, Inari, that was more smooth. (Not that I approve of you doing it, but I can see you doing it all the same.) . . . . Wow, that must be quite a shock to Naruto. . . . Huh? Naruto thought his parents abandoned him? Wow, I never would’ve thought of that. I always assumed they were dead, so I assumed that he assumed they were dead. The idea of his parents abandoning him never even crossed my mind. I’m glad you put that in there. =D . . . . You’re not the only one who didn’t expect that, Akihiko. (*amused*)
    Interesting charm she’s giving him. . . . Wow, quite an honor. (*snicker*) It would be kind of funny when Naruto hears about it, cuz picture this: Leaves the Land of Waves when he’s 12 years old; comes back at 18 to discover the bridge named after him; leaves again; comes back sometime in the future to discover a child’s been named after him; what next? ^^
    Be careful, Naruto, you could end up in biiiig trouble if you get caught. . . . Interesting, he doesn’t know who his attacker is. . . . Watch this guy, Naruto. He says he’ll back off his daughter, but he’s a shrewd one, so watch him.
    Don’t have much to say about Naruto’s discussion with Tsunade, except the whole thing was excellent. ^_^ And I like the ending line of it, hehehe.
    Love the greetings from both of them. ^_^ . . . . “Okakeri nasai?” I don’t know what that means, but I’m guessing it’s that “been a while” line. Am I right? Do I get a cookie? *_* . . . . I love how they smoothly just hold each other from the nursery to the bedroom instead of just going to sex right away. Makes it very real-feeling and natural and secure. =) :heart: . . . . Oh man, that was sneaky. That, “Oh by the way, something happened while you were gone.” It makes us all think about Mikomi’s words, and then the real event comes out. Nice. ^^ . . . . “I hope she inherited Sakura-chan’s temper.” Boy, that’d be scary if anyone disses the kid later in life! 0_0 . . . . (Heheh, Sasuke heard me. ^^) . . . . Aww, “Go to sleep, Naruto.” :heart: :heart: :heart:
    Hang on. (*rereads the line “She of course [. . .] immediately.”*) So . . . he’s still alive? I’m not sure, I’m a little grammatically confused here. õ_ô
    Mmmm, looove that first line. So . . . soothing. . . . Heh, knew it wouldn’t last too long. I love how quiet Naruto’s worry was shown. No exclamations or words, just rush. . . . Love how Naruto “laughed ruefully.” Like, “Oh well, I kind of expected something like this.” ^^ . . . . Good one, Naruto! You get ‘im! =D (Hee hee, Saaaaaaiiiiiii. *points at Sai, laughing*) XDDDD . . . . (*breaks up laughing again at the cleared throat moment*) XDDDD . . . . (*giggle*) Love how they keep going for Sasuke’s hair. Sasuke, don’t ever cut it, okay? ^^ . . . . His interaction with the kids is great! XD . . . . Oh good, Kakashi’s here. Go to it, Sasuke. ^_^ . . . . Or not. (*sigh*) A ninja’s work is never done.
    Ooh, cool! (Stay alive, guys, I mean it.)

    Oh, Ri’s back. (*shiver*) She’s not going to scare me this time, is she? ó_ò . . . . the hell? õ_ô . . . . XD Okay, at first I wasn’t so sure I liked this guy, but now that you told me who he is . . . XD I think he’s hilarious. . . . I wonder why he calls you “kitty.” On second thought, I’d rather not know. (*sweat*) . . . . Oh, thanks for the heads-up, Ri! Take your time, you guys, I’m just enjoying the story. ^_^ You know, Ri, we just might be friends. ^^
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  • From ANON - Nanin on April 27, 2008
    I barely found out about this fanfiction today. I read all 50 chapters, and I think my brain has turned to mush ((in a good way)). I really ((let me repeat)) really loved your writing! I've pratically squealed my lungs out at this story ((yeah I do that for some reason, sue me)). I really hope you will write another chapter!
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  • From ANON - arwen on April 26, 2008
    ive been trying not to post coz ive been drinking but i couldn’t hold it back after this, to be fair i have ignored this fic for well... ages now ive been reading it i regret it, you are a very skilled writer, you story line is powerful and intense ive never read a fic where they try to change the villages before, im really touched and am really in love with your fic sorry i haven't read it before and in any hope that my lame assed drunken comment came in any way keep you writing i would be overjoyed thank you so much for the privilege XD
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  • From lucrecia on April 26, 2008
    Great story , you stretched it out to 51 chapters without making it long winded. Great work. let me know when you are updating.
    bulletproof_angel000@hotmail.com
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  • From DragonsDancers on April 26, 2008
    that was soo good i cant wait until the next ch
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on April 26, 2008
    Heavens, girl! I have followed this piece from the beginning.
    I read each Author's note and the few aside stories you have written.
    Alas, all good things must come to an end but I'll treasure each chappie as they come.

    Luv ya chickie!

    Hugs and Fiesta kisses,
    >X
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  • From lucrecia on April 26, 2008
    That was clever. They received four cribs for three babies, then another baby appears.lol

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  • From Halskr on April 26, 2008
    Very well written story. It is nice to have one of these that is not full of anger and torment. Thanks for sharing this.
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