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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From anapana83 on February 21, 2007
    Oohhhh, i loved this latest one. So they finally kissed! Awesome. You even managed to put in a little angst in it. Not bad at all. It gives Sasuke something to fight against, neh? Naruto does deserve love so badly. That last line was killer though. I'm gonna steal your heart and make you love me...well I think several fangirls fainted reading that!

    BTW, i tend to do this sometimes simply because for some reason i always notice, but i noticed a small grammar error where it says, "Sakura hugged Naruto, "Thanks for tresting me to lunch even though you didn't get to eat." I think you probably meant "treating me to lunch" right? Well thought i outta point that out so if you're ever editting you can fix it. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2007
    OMG!!! i feel so sorry for naruto. i think i'm gonna cry,then beat the villagers up for the way they treat him! but at least he as sasuke now. please hurry and write the next chapter. i wanna find out if Naruto's life gets better. he really does diserve a better life. ok now i'm gonna kill the villagers.*grabs kuni in hand* bye.
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  • From on February 20, 2007
    I soooooooooooooooo love this story!!!!

    (sorry for all the 'o's in "so"...
    hehe!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!
    Good luck! I'll be reading

    -Ja!
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  • From ANON - bluewow on February 20, 2007
    I really love this. It is PERFICT! A very sexy Naruto, a Sasuke that loves and wants to protect Naruto, and a Sakura that wants to get revenge for Naruto (PLEASE let her get sweet revenge XD).
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on February 20, 2007
    I am sooo pissed...how can anyone treat Naruto like they do? I really hope that Sakura and Sasuke make the villagers pay for the way they treat Naruto.

    So sad and yet, I find that I'm pissed. Sasuke is so cuddly right now...

    Please contiue, I love it!

    Xenobia
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 20, 2007
    that was kinda sad... and kinda sweet, too. i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2007
    Aww I like it. It's very sweet, but I feel bad for Naruto that every single bad thing that could happen to him does. I really liked the bit about how which head of Mt. Hokage he sits on depends on his mood. That's a cute thing for Sasuke to observe.
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  • From VRon8899 on February 20, 2007
    awww...poor naru-chan! great chapter ^^ update soooooooooon!!!
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  • From ANON - jewel on February 20, 2007
    "Usuratonkachi. I want you. I'm going to steal your heart and make you love me."
    OK, absolutely LOVE that line!! Keep it up.
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  • From DirewolfLilith on February 20, 2007
    awwwww! that was a really cute chapter! i hope that sakura completly bashes the villagers and that sasuke gets his fox! great fic and can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Teania on February 18, 2007
    cool, please write more and tell Itachi that's he's cute. lol
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  • From ANON - Hello on February 16, 2007
    Nice, update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - jewel on February 16, 2007
    like it so far. is Sakura going to be supportive or jealous? please give her a break and just give her a different guy.
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  • From anapana83 on February 16, 2007
    I liked this chappie! Very nice. And i'm glad Naruto got a spankin new wardrobe. How generous the bastard can be. Now i wonder whats gonna happen next...*twiddles thumbs*. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - nette on February 16, 2007
    i lik this story so far. its funny how in the 1st chapter naruto lost his clothes and how sasuke and sakura got him to go clothes shopping. i wish i was there wit them XD. cant wait to read more and keep it up the story is good.
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