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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Mar-chan on March 05, 2007
    Ahaha! I was actually like Itachi when Tsunade told them the side effects. Naruto's soooo nice! I just love that little blond. please continue the story.
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  • From ANON - nette on March 05, 2007
    omg i enjoyed reading each chapter. they were so cute, disturbing and downright hilarious. i agree with itachi an impotent sasuke would be funny to see, but dont tell him i ssaid that. cant wait to read more and that last scene in chapter 13 was so cute. XD
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  • From ANON - AerieTigre on March 05, 2007
    "T.W.Hey! Jerk. Okay there's something that's been bugging me for a while. Orochimaru is self-proclaimedly weaker than Itachi, right?possible spoilers ahead. Well do you all remember when Naruto and Jiraya went looking for Tsunade? Weren't Itachi and Kisame rather relunctant to take Jiraya on? I mean they even ran away when Jiraya showed up. Does that mean that Jiraya is actually stronger than Orochimaru? That's just been in the back of my head for a while now."

    On Itachi leaving Jiraiya's presence: I wondered about that too. However; the best predators don't risk injuring themselves unless they're guranteed sucess, even in nature. It is not about cowardice or strength, but picking your battles.

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  • From ANON - moecque on March 05, 2007
    this is a very good story
    i enjoy reading it.


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  • From ANON - Xenobia on March 05, 2007
    WEEEEEEEE! I love Skee-ball and I am so happy that Naruto continues to think of others before himeself.

    Ummm...western breakfast. But, you shoulda made flap jacks too! Yum-o!

    I loved this chappie...keep it up, luv.

    Snuggles...-X-

    PS...for the reviewer who wanted to know what "Usuratonkachi" meant; it loosely translates to "Moron". It's meant as nice tease rather than an ugly one.
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  • From antilogicgirl on March 05, 2007
    This is a really fun story. I like how you have them together almost immediately, and make Sasuke work for it. But what I wanna know is where are you getting the new chapters of Naruto? *sniffles* I can't seem to find them anywhere.

    Keep up the good work!

    a/j
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on March 05, 2007
    That was a fast update, but a lousy place to leave it! When is Sasuke going to wake up?
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  • From anapana83 on March 04, 2007
    WOOOOAAAAH!

    Iruka's gangsta! He disemboweled the dude. Damn. Well....he had it coming. Poor Sasuke lol. I don't blame him for his actions either. I woulda gone nuts if i found out that way too. Oh, and as for the clothes thing...i dont think i minded the first option so much. But why a white sun on a green shirt for the second one? I don't get it. Well either way. It doesn't bother me i guess. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Drac on March 04, 2007
    O_O Ooooooooooo..... *makes grabby hands at Iruka* share?

    Nice chapter! I really didn't see Iruka coming out of that one!
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  • From ANON - Jaclyn on March 04, 2007
    I like it alot so far!
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on March 04, 2007
    Iruka avenged Naruto? He did all that gore-filled payback? Yucka-ducka but YAHOOOO! I never imagined Iruka as an ANBU...he always seemed timid. I was thinking Sakura would be the one who went after those jerks but I ain't complaining!

    In regards to the clothing description, let me say this. I strongly dislike when a reader tells an author what they can and should do in thier stories. Let me give you another example...I have another work under the Original/Erotica/Sex section. One of my reviewers told me that a plot introduction happened too early and maybe that it was also unecessary. If you want his outfit to be the way you wrote, leave it be. You are the Creator...you should have complete control with what happens in YOUR story. I say leave it.

    Sorry for the rant...Xenobia
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  • From llyoung on March 04, 2007
    As to Naruto's clothes the original colors are fine.
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  • From Ecks on March 04, 2007
    I really like the story so far! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Onawa on March 04, 2007
    I really am enjoying your story so far. I have a couple of suggestions - you asked in a previous chapter about the lemon... It was ok, really, but I would have loved to see a bit more (Pardon my spelling) sensuousness. A bit more of the characters luxuriating in the sensations. Maybe a bit more "squishiness" and foreplay.

    I really like the idea of Iruka being a secret Anbu. It is nice to see an Iruka that is soft with a strong core.

    Also, while this is a great break from many of the angst filled stories that abound here on AFF, perhaps a bit more angst regarding the attempted rape of young Naruto. It seemed that his friends had a harder time with it than Naruto did. Maybe I just missed something about his reaction. If so just ignore this comment.

    Also, Thanks for updating so quickly!
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on March 04, 2007
    i think u should leave it as is. Hop to c an update soon.
    Ja Ne =^-^=
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