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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From lupin2000 on March 15, 2007
    OMFG!!!!! THAT CLIFF HANGER SUCKS ASS!!!! FLAMMAGE.... but i love the story... cant wait for the next chapter....
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  • From ANON - kimiko-chan on March 15, 2007
    NOOOO Naruto!!!!!!!!!! ;_; T~T ;_; Naruto cant be dead o_o ;_;
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on March 15, 2007
    You always gripe about you fight scenes! You did really good onthis one...but Naruto dying? When I read it, I started thinking about "My Heart Bleeds for You". Granted, Naruto's means of going to the training field in the sky are different, Sasuke's reaction was kinda like my story. Oh wait, duh, I was inspired by you. Anywho, keep going and stop being so hard on your abilities to writing fight scenes...you're awesome.

    Hugs, smoochies and NaruSasu shaped cookies,
    -X-
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  • From on March 14, 2007
    why orange is awsome so far T.W
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  • From ANON - Lici on March 14, 2007
    I love you!
    When you update could you kind enough to email me?

    kiki_yaoi@yahoo.com


    Much thanks! *Cookies*

    And your slash isn't bad. Go to narutofic.org and look up JBDragon and Madame Mere....they aren't half bad and you might get some fantastic ideas from them. I did!
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  • From dragonite2388 on March 14, 2007
    the battle scene wasn't as bad as u thought... it was good... and about naruto... hmmm... i wonder what will happen.. cant wait for tomorrow! ahahaha (^^,
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2007
    noooo you cant kill naruto the story needs to go on
    anyway i think you did a good job with this chapter but
    it needs some editing.

    i love this story and you should keep going ^-^
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  • From ANON - nette on March 14, 2007
    ok first of all how dare u injure our blond hair ninja. ok im done. i think you did a good job at your first attempt to writng a fight scene. i could follow it easily so it was ok. it was a good chapter (except my blond hair ninja got injured) but overall i liked it and wished u didnt leave an evil cliffy again. u r mean in a good way XD
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  • From anapana83 on March 14, 2007
    NOOOO! Naruto can't die! There's still so much stuff that has to happen...right?? Anyway, you left us with our hearts in our throats. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mar-chan on March 14, 2007
    I AGREE WITH ITACHI AND SAI SADISTIC SADISTIC SADISTIC! PLEASE LET NARUTO BE OK! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'LL DO IF HE DIES! and this chapter was actually very good. I suck at fight scenes too.
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  • From emp78 on March 14, 2007
    O.O OMG! Your fight scene was okay. You described what each did without overmuch detail which, in my opinion, kept the story clean and flowing. but letting the kyuubi-boy die, even temporarily, T.T !! Update, update, update!
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  • From ANON - mee on March 14, 2007
    OMG!?!?
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  • From ANON - devil child on March 14, 2007
    You write good fight scenes I don't see why you said you suck at them, you should have more faith in yourself. Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2007
    Judging by your conversation with Sai and Itachi, don't think he is dead... yet. Hope you update soon!!!
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  • From Trollmia on March 14, 2007
    Shizune and Shikamaru??? Now that's entertainment!! Good choice of totally of road pairing... *gleams happily*
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