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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Sarah on March 15, 2007
    I love your story [ha i wonder how many times you've heard that] Anyways i was spazzing when i thought Naruto was gonna die God i almost cried. I'm such a sap, but about you. You have a fucken amazing talent, and your fine at fight scenes. Keep up the freaken fabulous work
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on March 15, 2007
    S**t woman, you had me scared...but you're right, it was necessary for Naruto to almost die. Now, the villagers need to bow down and kiss Baruto's a$$ for treating him as bad as they did.

    *giggle*I love the fact that Sakura is with Choji...is cute.

    Hugs, watermelon and lemon body shots,
    -X-

    PS->Works getting alot better now that I've shown them that I have mad skills...>:-}
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  • From on March 15, 2007
    LOVE IT, NOW HURRY UP I WANT MORE!!!!!
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  • From anapana83 on March 15, 2007
    Awww yay, Naruto is back with us. Good. I was scared there for a moment till you told me there were like over 40 chps. lol. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on March 15, 2007
    I've been keeping up with this story and i love it. One suggestion i have to make could you maybe use a key at the beggining or after the chapter so we know what the english defenition is of the jutsu's. Other than that its a great story.
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  • From ANON - mary on March 15, 2007
    very very very very very very very very very very GOOD!!!! keep going!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on March 15, 2007
    Yaaaaaay! An emotional side to Sasuke, he needed that wake up call, they all did. Sasuke need it so he'd remember Naturto's mortal, tresure him, and the village, as you said, needed it to realise, he is the holder of Kyuubi, not Kyuubi himself. Nice job, looking forwerd to more. ^^ (Ooooo I love this new keyboard ^.^)
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  • From ANON - Lici (lazy login brat...I have an account, I'm just too lazy to travel through all that red tape) on March 15, 2007
    I LOVE YOU!

    Yes, I must say, your fight scenes need to get a lot better. Maybe you should look up another fic or even google it on the net. When writing a fighting scene, find a focal point and tell it from that view....Tsunade, Jiraiya, Kakashi, me^_^....Pick a certain character and then use that one person to visually describe what's going on. Don't be in their mind or anything, but make it seem as if they are watching as well as participating the in the battle. Just little flashes and emotions of extremes are wonderful to make the fights more thrilling and demanding of attention. If you want a demonstration with this particular fight scene, I'll come back when I can and have one ready for you so you can see an example.



    STILL...

    You are my ruler. I kneel as I cry tears of joy!
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  • From ANON - mee on March 15, 2007
    iiiii how sweet...and the ending...i can't wait 'till next update :D
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  • From ANON - nette on March 15, 2007
    ok 1st of all whoooooo naruto-kun's not dead *does happy dance* ok im happy now. i liked how the only way to get naruto to wake up was by sasuke threatening him lol. wat motivation. Xd cant wait for the next chapter. no seriously i CANT WAIT so update soon...lik now perhaps...no ok then XD
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  • From ANON - Hello on March 15, 2007
    Yay, Naruto's awake, just by Sasuke insulting him would wake him up.. Heh, Tsunade will freak out... right? As in the good freak out way.
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  • From ANON - seraphym on March 15, 2007
    I'm so glad Naruto woke up! Sasuke would probably do seriously crazy if he didn't. I hope there's a happy ending coming soon!
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  • From ANON - AoiKitsune on March 15, 2007
    OMG!! i thought u killed Naruto there for a min.
    awww dats so cute Sasuke really really loves Naruto!!
    well, love n u no it so plz update soon. Best of Luck.
    AoiKitsune =^-^=


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  • From ANON - Mino on March 15, 2007
    *chokes*
    omg don't die Naruto ;-;
    >>;
    anywhom, I liked the fight scene,
    I thought it went well *nodds*

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  • From Vikuta on March 15, 2007
    i'm crying. can u believe it? i know that u would not kill Naruto, but still.... (don't you dare to kill Naruto, Sasuke gonna kick you're ass if you do so...)
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