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By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

From solitare1 on December 16, 2008
This was a great Christmas gift! Thank you TW!
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From ANON - LEA on December 16, 2008
THANK YOU.
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From auronsgirlfriend on December 16, 2008
He he i loved it in the end. the next generation of shinobis and all so simular, great ending. :)
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From TheSimi on October 12, 2008
You write the smexiness so well! It�s temperature of the sun hot! (just thought you should know). What makes this lovescene extra good is that you show so clearly that the people involved love and want each other very much, plus they say that make up sex is always the hottest.

Ooooooh the drama, fucking Mizuki trying to hurt the babies�thank goodness Kana was there but I�m sad that she got hurt. Oh Will Kaji have the ability to summon snakes too now that Kana�s blood mixed with his, I mean Sasuke can already do it so it wouldn�t be too far a leap to think that maybe Kaji can too now�(okay I can feel myself rambling but I hope you understand what I mean).

I�m glad that Mizuki is dead but what�s wrong with Arashi?????? (bites nervously on thumbnail again, there�s hardly any nail left now *sniffles*).

I can�t believe how amazing you are, with every chapter this story is just getting better and better. Thank you so much!

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From TheSimi on October 12, 2008
The return of Kyuubi�again, that furball is really amusing and he has some good points. The part about Naruto�s intelligence being that of a hamster before him is a little mean though. I think Naruto has Kana pegged spot on. I hope that Sasuke will warm up to her eventually but we all know how stubborn he can be so I�m not going to hold by breath.

Aww Kana is in love with Udon�cuuute! At first I thought it was Konohamaru but I smiled to myself when I realized that it was Udon that she fancied.

Sakura is pregnant , I�m happy for her and Chouji.

The fact that Sai is Obito�s lover were revealed(I loved all the others expression when they found out) and Kakashi and Iruka finally made up, that makes me so happy. Kakashi telling Iruka that he owned all of Kakashi�s heart had me squealing like the fangirl I am (though I try to deny it).

Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter!

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From TheSimi on October 12, 2008
Oh did Hinata think that Kana was Orochimaru? She must know that the snake-bastard is dead and cut to tiny little pieces�Maybe she just panicked. Hinata is so gentle and she accepted Kana with no harsh words after the first misunderstanding (I really like Hinata).

Ha ha ha Naruto asking Kana what�s so interesting about the bushes when she�s trying to be sensitive and give him privacy while he binds his breasts�.There is only one Naruto.

Anko is great, first totally pissed and then wanting to teach Kana. Anko and Kana�a scary combination but I do believe that Anko can really understand Kana, they think alike.

WOW Sai and Obito!!! I did not see that coming but I�m happy for them. Also I�m glad that Sasuke and Naruto has made up, I don�t like it when Sasuke�s pride gets in the way, it�s good that Naruto can bring him down to earth with the rest of us mortals again.

Thank you for this chapter!

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From TheSimi on October 12, 2008
Sasuke is really tense with Kana around. I can understand why and that it�s most likely subconscious on his part but still, he of all people should know better after everything that Naruto has told him about his own childhood.

I think Kakashi made a mistake when he sent Iruka upstairs while he talked to Obito. That action isn�t gonna do anything to ease Iruka�s fears, he probably thinks that Kakashi wants him out of the way. I can�t believe that Kakashi is so clueless that he doesn�t see how uncomfortable Iruka is�oooh this is going to spell trouble for this couple.

I�m really happy that there are no romantic feelings left between Obito and Kakashi but I hope that Kakashi will be quick to let Iruka know that too. What does Obito mean by "disposable fucktoy"? Did someone among the Uchiha clan abuse him? If that's the case then I say Go Itachi!!!

What will Kana think of Naruto training with Hinata?

Thank you for this chapter and I�ll jump right in and read the next one!

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From TheSimi on October 11, 2008
Nooooo I was wrong again�.totally and completely wrong with no excuses what so ever. The mystery girl was Kana, Orochimaru�s daughter O.o!!! She doesn�t seem too fond of her daddy dearest does she�

So Kana and Obito are also going to be living with Naruto and Sasuke? That must be really hard for Iruka, I�m still worried what Obito�s return from the dead is going to do to Iruka and Kakashi�s relationship. And will Sasuke be able to handle a face that look just like the snake-bastard around his children? I would probably have a problem with that.

It�s going to be an eventful and dramatic month that�s for sure�

Thank you so much for this chapter and I can�t wait to read more! More reading will have to wait a couple of hours though�that pesky annoying thing called sleep is calling out to me again�

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From TheSimi on October 11, 2008
Hot hot hot hot hot hot!!! (OMG I think I�m choking on my tongue here�)

This chapter was hot and romantic at the same time. Sasuke and Naruto got reacquainted with each other�s bodies and I think Naruto did a damn fine job of topping, Sasuke certainly didn�t seem to have any complaints.

Ooooh what a cliffie!!! Obito�s alive? What will that mean for Iruka and Kakashi? Who is the girl, is it Rin or (GASP) Kushina?

Thank you so much for this chapter!

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From TheSimi on October 11, 2008
Okay I was wrong�There was going to be a fight about the shower but at least it turned into lust so I wasn�t completely deadly massively wrong� right�right? (Dammit agree with me so that I can have peace of mind!) A celibate Uchiha must be a sad thing, especially with a blond temptation so close by�

Wow Iruka has quite a temper, if I were Kakashi I�d be afraid to open my mouth with all the threats of being gelded�Of course in Iruka�s defense I have to say that most of the things coming out of Kakashi�s mouth are crude and obnoxious. Iruka and Kakashi were nice to offer to babysit so that our new parents could have some alone time together.

Hotness ensues and Naruto�s going to top�You ARE eeeeeeeeevil to end the chapter there� Now I must hurry and read the next one!

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From TheSimi on October 11, 2008
Poor Kakashi I feel for him. Feeding and changing triplets are no easy task (I know since my brother has triplets) and here there are four babies�It was about time he remembered Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, sometimes the easy way is the right way.

Naruto has his own sets of problems, getting back in shape and learning to fight with breasts in the way. I can�t help but wonder what the others have done to deserve getting pranked and what kind of criteria Naruto uses when he decides on who should get pranked and who should not�Will this trait be passed down to the kids or will they be stoic Uchiha�s the lot of them?

About the occupied shower�I�m not sure they will fight when there is so many nice things you can do when you are two in a shower, after all sharing is caring :)

Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter!

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From TheSimi on October 10, 2008
I like that kyuu is back, I�ve kind of missed the furball. Sasuke making cooing baby sounds is something that I would almost pay to hear� It�s going to be interesting to see how Naru will act now that he uses his extra senses.

The normal life with babies is so cute and Sasuke is at least there, helping to care for the children and supporting Naruto. So how will it go when �mom� and dad has to go on missions at the same time? I�ll guess I have to read on and find out�

Iruka and Kakashi moving in�brilliant!

Thank you!

Oh and it�s October 10 when I�m reviewing this�Happy birthday Naruto!!!

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From TheSimi on October 10, 2008
Sasuke is so cool here: "Learn to live with disappointment." (though you won�t live for long) � My inner fangirl is squealing happily (I�m not too pleased with Sasu in the new manga chapters nut here LOVE him). Hinata is also cool�just because she�s shy and gentle doesn�t mean she�s weak, I wouldn�t want to get on her bad side.

Yay Asuma is headless and dead. Now hurry home to your husband Sasuke!

I hope that Sakura is pregnant. I think it would be really nice for her and Chouji to have a baby and besides it would give the newest Uchiha�s a playmate.

Admittedly I don�t know that much about childbirth but I think you did a really good job of writing it. I was there almost pushing and panting right along sides of Naruto. (this might sound gross but it�s really a compliment when you think about it�hmm I think I�d better start thinking before I babble).

Aww the babies are beautiful and the names just perfect!!!

Thank you so much for this chapter!

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From TheSimi on October 10, 2008
OMG Itachi has a baby girl!!! Well technically had since he�s dead which I find sad�I like Itachi.

I wonder who the old enemy Akuma is since Itachi destroyed Akatsuki�and will said enemy come after Sasuke and Naruto now?

Mikomi seems adorable and what a good thing that they got four cribs in the babyshower, they�re gonna need the extra one. Of course Sasuke is sad, after all that�s happened Itachi was still his big brother. There were good times too in their childhood.

Is it really such a good idea to send Sasuke away from Naruto at a time like this? Wouldn�t they be stronger together? Thank goodness Naruto still has Iruka to comfort him.

OMG no.2 On an entirely different note, have you read Naruto manga chapter 420??? The drama�.

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From TheSimi on October 09, 2008
Hmm I never thought that Kakashi would respond well to threats and bribes�Maybe it only works when Iruka is the one handing out both. It�s lovely that Naruto calls him Iruka tou-san, it really showa what an emotional bond these two share.

The thought of Ibiki buying a purple stuffed bunny scares me�The ANBU captain in a toystore�.Arghh the trauma!

Ha ha ha the mood swings are starting to get to Sasuke, I knew they would.

What is Kisame doing there covered in blood????

An eeevil cliffie and to make matters worse I have to wait until tomorrow to read more chapter�I curse this thing called sleep that you supposedly need to function�curse it I say!

Thanx for the chappie�

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