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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From SilverPhantom on May 01, 2007
    I always knew that Naruto was blunt... And I need to remember to be caught up on the manga chapters before reading your updates! ^^ Tis a good way for me to remember!

    I saw two or three spelling mistakes, mainly "honeymoon" as "hineymoon" which makes me giggle, and I think you misspelled "drool" to "deool" on the very last line. I think there was another in there somewhere but I couldn't find it again. Overall, a very cute chapter! I can't wait to see more of Naruto's moodiness and how Sasuke deals with it, if you write it!
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  • From Zrina on May 01, 2007
    It's going great!! However, I had to snicker on one of your typos, if it isn't a typo, then it was hilarious as hell.

    'Looks like the hineymoon is over.' Naruto flopped down into a chair, "Hey Baa-chan."

    sorry, hiney... /snicker... so perfect... hehehe
    Otherwise it was very good :D
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  • From ANON - Keyblyder on May 01, 2007
    HOLY MOTHER OF------(claps hand over mouth before saying bad word) Your fic is absolutly amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how they(Sasuke and Naruto) grow together over time!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could say more but i think that i am to dumbfounded to make a cohernt comment..... Do you email people when you update... cause if you do i would really appreciate it if yo could put me in that list. If not i will just have to check the site at a regular intervel(like......... every FIVE minutes!!!!)
    Thanks for writing a wonderful story!!!!!
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  • From TheSirens on April 28, 2007
    So i've been a dedicated reader for some time, and i realized i had never reviewed so here it goes. This is an awesome story i'm really glad i found it and keep up the good work! and can't wait for your next update
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on April 28, 2007
    Good chapie, more coming anytime soon? I know you have it.
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  • From Onyxwillo on April 24, 2007
    Yay! The lemon was good and I liked kiba and hinata seeing off neji and gaara. ^_^

    On another note, I really appreciate your comment on the VT shooters family. Starting my own family soon (son is due in july) I can't help thinking about how his family must have felt. Their grief, betrayal, whether or not they understood what happened, and how they must feel they did something wrong. Its very sad to think someone you love could be capable of such an act of violence. And I pray they will have the strength to recover along with the VT students and staff who were affected.
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  • From ANON - Mino on April 23, 2007
    good chappie, lol I liked the nickname Sandman for
    Gaara, very funny.I agree with you wholeheartedly about the
    shooting, althugh I am not a cancer or a libra (Virgo >.< woot)
    till next time
    *throws you magic cookie*
    -Mino-
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  • From ANON - pia on April 22, 2007
    I loved it, but I stll can't get over the fact you put Temari and Lee together instead of her and Shikamaru. They, like, belong together. But otherwise, another chapter well done. Keep 'em comin', T.W.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2007
    ok thanks. that was a good chapter...ok it was great, awsome what ever. [only likes: itanaru, itasasu, and sasunaru and no other pairings] the lemon was great too. but please put a warning for me when any pairings other then sasunaru are going to go at it. thank you! well cant wait for the next chapter. later!
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  • From minoriofshadows on April 22, 2007
    Haha! I laughed my butt off at this! I swear I almost fell out of my chair at some parts. The'Weapon of Ass Destruction' thing was so funny. XD Of course, sad and fluffy parts made me go 'aww' while some parts made me wanna punch something. >_< The little sessions between you, Sai, and Itachi are really funny, too. -reads one of them- Hehehe...Twizzler...XD Anyways! 0_0; This is really good! I hope you make more! I would be crushed if you didn't. Bye! -dances out of room-
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on April 22, 2007
    OK i'm going to be covering the reviews from the coming home chapter to the newest one. I just have to say lovin the story line so far really funny. Naruto with breasts *holds in chuckle* itachi a new born giraf *snorts trying to keep laughter at bay* Can men pms *falls over laughing butt off. LIke i said i found it very good. Keep up the good work and please keep me posted when you update. Just one question i thought all the sasu/naru slash girls were effected by a jutsu why would they beat the guy up. Oh well review next update.
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  • From ANON - Lici on April 21, 2007
    Virginia Tech might have been bad, and not everything is going to be okay, but thanks for thinking of another school. I'm just upset that VT's student body had to have something so tragic happen to begin with. I hope the boy who did it tries to understand his own judgement even if he isn't alive.

    ANYWAY, Wonderful chapter...Short lemon, but hell, we got one! w00+! I'm about ready to start another chapter for my story...(which keeps adding chapters to itself WITHOUT informing me) Hopefully this will inspire me...*GRIN! >_
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on April 21, 2007
    Hey chickie!!! Totally understand the school/work thing. I'm walking the stage on May 12...and the profs are ticking me off! Papers, exams and a project...oh my!

    I told you...just add hot water to a lemon and bam! Instant yaoi girl Heaven! But...where the heck was the lube? Water alone just isn't enough when you "play" in the water-not slick enough. How the heck do I know this? *coughs*

    I plead the Fifth...

    Update when you can sugs...maybe we can colab a piece when the dust settles for the both of us.

    Love, snuggles and NaruSasu scented shampoo,
    -X-
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  • From SilverPhantom on April 21, 2007
    Good chapter! There were a few spelling mistakes, but generally just the ones people make by being one key off. Other than that, I think it's all good ^^
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  • From ANON - Damp on April 21, 2007
    *Takes a moment for the Families, victims, friends,the people who passed away, Seung-Hui Cho(yes him too), and who-ever else was involved in a good way or bad way in the Virginia Tech shooting...*

    Okay, let's continue with this reveiw.

    There wasn't enough sex -_-. That's my only complaint, but I'm smex obssessed, there never seems to be enough smex...or at least I can never be fully satated. -_-

    What's wrong with being a Libra? I'm a Libra -_-

    Please update, very soon...
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