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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Kibou32 on September 05, 2007
    Hi.

    I read your story from beginning to end - at least up until where you left it off - and I realized that this story's plot has potential to being a great story. However, you should beta-ed it 'cause you have an enormous number of spelling and grammar mistakes. If you don't know enough english, that does not give you the excuse to put up some story that is not that quite readable. I know most people don't bother with a spellcheck, but you should.
    Other than that... your story seems like its a bit rushed and lacks perspective.
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  • From minoriofshadows on September 02, 2007
    This is so good! I love it! It was so funny when the baby sprayed on Sasuke. XD!!! -falls off chair laughing- Sighs, that was the best.
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  • From ANON - RSlover on August 29, 2007
    Whoot whoot
    so addicting
    I can't wait to find out what happens next
    This story is so awesome
    Ur doing an awesome job
    Keep up the great work. (loads of cookies for you)
    Can't wait for the next update
    ur so inspirational =)
    And you rock ^_^^_^^_^^_^
    Ja'ne =)
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  • From Gwyllion on August 28, 2007
    Waaahh! poor poor Iruka! Don't be sad.....

    What another awesome fic! Naruto had the right to be pissed at sasuke. Guess he'll be sleeping on the couch then. Heheh... Can't wait to read your next post. Thanks so much for sharing!
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  • From ANON - vampire sawyer on August 28, 2007
    I really love this story. However, I noticed that there isn't anymore chapters(wink,wink). I hope you could write me when you update? See ya!
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on August 28, 2007
    poor Kakashi, doesn't understand why Ruka's mad at him. I can't wait to see how they work this out. Can't wait for the villages reaction to the girl either. Can't wait for the update so i'll leave you with this valued news. Naruto is the true son of the 4th who also has a name but i don't remember it and his mother was from the former Waterpool nation. Tata i'll wait patiently for the update. :P
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  • From ANON - Kirie on August 27, 2007
    So I love this story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Also whats a good web site where the manga is uploaded at so I can start reading it. Please e-mail it to meeeee!!!! Thanx Kirie

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  • From ANON - yaoilvnfx on August 27, 2007
    I love the story so far and just had to comment on the picture you were talking about in ch17. i could never figure out wut it was. thnx. keep up the great work with the story.
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  • From MissMayumi on August 27, 2007
    I loved it!! Ugh..Poor Iruka!! I hope Kakashi will figure out what is wrong with him..and Sasuke..him and Naruto need to have make up sex sometime in the near future.. ^^
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  • From MissMayumi on August 18, 2007
    Thanks for your reviews, TW!!! Mwah! Luff you!!! ^^ ♥
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  • From ANON - mary on August 17, 2007
    I love this story, I hope you write more of this story and more!!!
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  • From ANON - mary on August 17, 2007
    I Love This Story!! I hope you write more!!!
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  • From ANON - RSlover on August 13, 2007
    you never cease to amaze me
    the whole twist of orochimaru having a daughter and then being a complete opposite of him was genius
    and the words you had Naruto speak when his hubby Sasuke was already judging her before knowing her literally brought me to tears
    you are amazing (cookies for you ^_^)
    ur doing an awesome job
    keep up the great work (and thank you bunches for sending me update alerts ^_^)
    lots of love
    Ja'ne =)

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  • From Kagenoshi on August 12, 2007
    Hey! This story rocks...though I'm partial to the NaruGaara, I really love this story and you think you suck at fight scenes? Heh, I think you're pretty good at it...I mean I couldn't write a fight scene to save my life. I was wondering if you ever considered writing a spin off story about Gara and Neji...maybe figure out a way to make Gaara have his wish about having a baby, only in a different way than Naruto. I'm a big Gaara fan and would love to see you do the spin off, but it's your call. I hope to see how Naruto's Uchiha adjusts to having Orochimaru's daughter there, and how Iruka will deal with the fact that Kakashi's old lover will be living with them. More Chappy's please, it feeds my Mpreg and Angst addiction.
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  • From kati on August 12, 2007
    awesome! Obito! WoooooO!! Poor iruka...DRAMADRAMADRAMAYAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
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