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By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

From Telpei on December 09, 2007
Aww, chapter 3 was tooo cute!! :D Sasuke's such a romantic at heart. And poor Naruto, I really want to burn all those stupid villagers. Grr. I hope Sasuke and Sakura put them in the right place!!
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From Telpei on December 09, 2007
Ahahaha, 'this shirt has more holes in it than one of Kakashi's late excuses' ^____^ Priceless. And Sasuke's sooo taking advantage by picking out outfits for Naruto. I really wish I could see him in those leather pants! *drools*
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From Telpei on December 09, 2007
Hehe, Sasuke's so sneaky. Too bad he didn't burn the boxers too, but they are awfully cute. Leave it to Naruto to find underwear with ramen on it. This is a really cute start!! (I've been putting off reading this fic for a while but finally got around to it ^_^; )

ps - Itachi sure is a pissy bastard. Talk about a drama queen lol. You're thinking of writing a fic with him as the good guy??
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From ANON - Kori Kodomo on December 09, 2007
OMG you need to keep going! Iv noticed you seem to keep putting all the yaoi yummys in the same house. I find that funny. But keep going! I wana see what happens with kana
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From KoibitoFemme on December 09, 2007
*gets pushed in by Kami like shes Shika and Kami is Ino* Troublesome. Ok So Kami all but attacked me telling me you told her who the author was. She even sent me the link to her story. I didn't bother to read it cause its not finished and since ol girl refuses to continue then I just opted to read the one shots. I don't understand why she got flamed. They look good to me. Shit her stories are a lot better than some I have seen. I mean I have read some stories that made my damn head hurt from the wording and grammar. I am not the best with grammar but hey I'm not the worst either. But anyways maybe should come to AFF I don't think the folks here are that immature to be assholes like that. I only got one flame since I started and I just deleted because as Kami told me recently I just don't give a fuck and I really don't. But then again I don't see the point in telling a person how I didn't like their story rather I let the story be because honestly if the author enjoying themselves more power to them. Not to mention ol girl put more than one reason why she was stopping. If its just cause of the flames well that really sucks and maybe she should just move to another site but if its for more than that well we can't do anything but hope she one day comes back. Its a shame too she writes pretty good to me. Just my opinion hope you update soon by the way. Ja! *goes to find Kami and yell at her for making her do something she was too lazy to do*
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From KuroShinigami on December 08, 2007
T.W.
.... you definately are living up to your penname. I normally hate cliffies... although I have a bad habit of making them myself, I find that it just sinks the hook in a bit further. I hope your update soon and keep me alerted to new chapters.
*Hair rises all Crusnik-like & eyes go from dark blue to dark crimson*
Flamers should bee eatten.... If someone doesn't like a story then they seriously shouldn't read it. That being said I happen to really like this story though I never saw the Sakura/chouji pairing coming. It's awesome that you're not feeling the need to conform to the expected. I hereby place you in the same category as Mrs. Cake whom is one of the most awesome authors I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Yoai is SMEXY.
Reaper
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From Kagenoshi on December 08, 2007
Okay, I'm here on behalf of Kurai Kisu and myself, she told me about your rant and I felt compelled to do something about this situation. I thought maybe if we knew who the author was we could post reviews on her encouraging her to keep writing. I mean hey...I don't like the SasuNaru pairing anymore, but I'm not gonna go out bashing someone because they wrote about it...and there are some pairings I like that others may detest, I wouldn't want them flaming me just because they didn't like the pairing. It's our different opinions that make us all unique indiviuals. If we all liked the same thing, this world would be absolutely boring! I mean look at Kurai Kisu and I! She just adores the SasuNaru pairing, while I detest it (my loathing started a few months ago) but we don't let that get in the way of our writing with each other. This author needs all the encouragement that we can offer, she shouldn't quit writing because some asshole can't keep thier nasty trap shut! Please consider our idea of sending encouragements to this author through reviews...and spread the word to others as well. The more people who encourage this author, the better. If you like the idea email me at kagenoshiseisai@aol.com. If we do this we might get her back to writing again! Ja ne!
~Kami~
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From ANON - RSlover on December 08, 2007
T.W.
I just have to say that I applaude you and agree with you 100%. I think it's really (censored) up that people would flame like that to the point where the author would feel the need to quit and then do it, especially when the stories are really good. Just like you said, it's ok to send a review like your example, But to be so cruel is just unnecessary. I'm really sorry that the author was flamed...no harrassed like that. It's just complete bullshit and those people need to get whatever is shoved up their ass out. And if you people who flamed this author are reading this...you need to learn how to respect others, especially on their work. If you don't have anything nice to say, then keep your dumbass mouths shut. And T.W. if you can somehow, tell the author who went through this I send them my deepest apologies on this and to not give up on something they love to do because of some dumbass people who don't know what the hell they are talking about. I really hope this author returns and continues on their work. I also look forward to the rest of your stories as well =)
Ja'ne ^_^

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From ANON - rae on December 07, 2007
hey I like your story! don't mind them. well, keep on writing, bye
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From Plaguerose on December 07, 2007
Keep the bashing!!!!

Question, and please don't get mind at me, who came up with the word flamming/flames for reviews? I keep thinking that who ever sends flames has a weird way of looking at life that if they don't like it, it's stupid and they should shut up if they have nothing good to say that would inprove the writers passion to continue the story and I really liked and can no longer see the true ending that they were planning for.

Sorry about making you read this , but keep up the good work and I like to see how you will continue this story.

So ignore the stupid people(and I might be one of them) and do what you want and continue.
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From ANON - Damp on December 07, 2007
NOO! Which author decided to quit just because of a very evil flame??!!

-Damp *That's right, if you people can't say anything nice, or at least tactfully say it, then DON'T SAY SHIT!*
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From inumoon3 on November 26, 2007
About time Kakashi and Iruka got back to their old selves!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!
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From limonata on November 26, 2007
Love the story so far, couple things: Ch. 2 typos- vinal is spelled vinyl, and coller is collar. And thanks for explaining the "see my religion" thing at the bottom- I got the general idea, but now that I know what the expression means, I can't wait to use it. Ch. 3 typos- Thanks for *tresting* me to lunch, rejioned=rejoined. Ch. 4- voyer is voyeur- stupid French words, I know. Naruto just *sughed*. Ch. 5- that bastard Sai kisses your cheek- kissed, you want past tense. Ch. 6- tohught- this one needs a definition, I like the way it sounds- or a transposition of o and h. But I still want a definition. and ballistic, with two Ls. interrupted with two Rs. pursuing instead of persuing.

Okay, second thought, if you want, I'll just copy/paste this into word, send you a clean version and a list of things I changed- it would only be spelling and capitalization. If that sounds like an okay deal, email me to say that at amyspear@u.washington.edu and I'll have the whole thing done in a couple days. I love this story, but the transpositions are hurting my very anal retentive soul. If not, I still like your story, and it's making me skip class...
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From ANON - Xenobia on November 21, 2007
TW!!!! Get your butt back here! Nothing for months and months; then, you stop in the middle! Jeez...you are making me crazy.

Oh well, I have to admit that I like the idea of Kana/Udon. I was worried-thought you were going to pair her up w/Knonhamaru.

Take care and have a wonderful holiday!

S'Mores, Coco and SasuNaru marshmellows.

>X
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From ANON - lala on November 21, 2007
Aww, I loved this chapter. It was so cute. I've been waiting for you to write. It was great ^^
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