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Reviews for Why Orange?

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From LadyRonin on January 18, 2008
    i don't why you would want to rewrite the last chapter because i thought it was blazin. i am so sad this story is winding down. at the funeral i'll be the one with all nack and red flowers on my hat. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From Zigana on January 13, 2008
    Please don't rewrite, I like this chapter. I think the bloodline and the summoning are cool. What is Hikari going to be able to do? Will Mikomi get left behind because she is not an Uzamaki-Uchiha or because she an Uchiha will she just stubbornly keep up with cousins? Can't wait to see what happens down the road.
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 12, 2008
    hey there! if it isn't too much trouble, and not breaching confidentiality or anything, could you e-mail me the name of the author you mentioned? i wanted to offer some support. or if you don't feel comfortable giving me the e-mail address, please pass the message on to that person. i can't write fiction so am more than willing to give props to those who can and do.

    i agree about there are some awesome stories out there that are just hanging, and it's probably because they got busy or were discouraged. example; there was a fic called kittychaos in kohona that was absolutely the bomb! but not only was it not finished, it's completely GONE!!! i can't remember the author but if it's who you mentioned, please pass on my regards. and even if it's not, please pass them on anyway. thanx!
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  • From solitare1 on January 11, 2008
    This is one of my all time favorite stories! Poor Naruto and Sasuke, 1 fox child, 1 snake child, and 2 girls that probably has the maynglo(SP) thing in the eyes. Needless to say, the village will be well protected from now on. I'll be sorry to see this one end.
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  • From ANON - Xenobia on January 08, 2008
    You don't need to re-write this chappie. Do your author thing and wrap it up as you see fit.
    I have enjoyed all of your works and I look forward to the future.
    Let me know if...when you're ready to co-write a fic with me.

    Hugs, kisses and all of the NaruSasu chibis running amock,
    >X
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on January 08, 2008
    funny and awesome naru-chan's kids hav kyuubi bloodlines cant wait to see wat their skills will be and kana is so lovable ^_^. update soon adn great job
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  • From SilverPhantom on January 07, 2008
    I think you got one or two mistakes in there, basically a "needs a space between the words" and I think there should have been a "don't" instead of a "do" type of situation, but other than that, I think it looks good! The chapter came out good despite you not quite happy with it and I look forward to more.
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  • From MissMayumi on January 07, 2008
    woot!

    Love ya! So please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on January 07, 2008
    THIS IS ENDING SOON!? Nooooooooo, whyy, I'm enjoying this! At least tell me Naruto and Sasuke are going to go at it one more time before this ends? They haven't done anything in awhile. And please tell me we get a years later Epiloge?
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  • From love2bug63670 on January 05, 2008
    It took me two days to read this and now there is no more chapters. I think I'm gonna cry, please update soon.
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  • From kinai26 on January 01, 2008
    Hi T.W.

    I love this story... itīs so exiting and extremly well written - Thank you for writing it XD I just canīt stop reading it :D

    About the Authors rant.
    Iīve been flamed for my writing style too, and I almost felt like quitting too. Thankfully I have a lot of sweet and very loving readers, who got me back into the mood to go on writing.

    I agree with you on the last note: If you donīt have anything nice to say... then donīt say anything at all.

    I hope that you friend will begin to write again soon, because the more writers - the merrier XD
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  • From Gwyllion on January 01, 2008
    Wow! What a load of action and the cliffie got me on teh edge of my seat! You wrote the action scene really well. As a comic book artist, I can def picture these in panels. Well done! Can't wait to read more from you. :D
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  • From NarutoUchiha on December 29, 2007
    I always loved this story XD
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 27, 2007
    i love your story, your writing skills are amazing. i wish you updated more, but i'm happy that you do at least update. keep up the amazing work :]
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  • From ANON - Melony on December 23, 2007
    I am finally onto chapter 49 and you mean to tell me this isn't finished... ARGH!!!... why have you not finished yet I really want the ending... sniff... I'm so sad... Please update as soon as you can!
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