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By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    Chapter 8: I was with you on Chapter 343. I was freaked out as hell. I mean, I was glad he wasn’t going to just hand himself over on a silver platter to ‘Rochi-kun, but I was worried as hell that he was gonna get beaten or something. . . . Itachi, you sadist, leave her alone. . . . Lol about your disclaimer. XD

    (*reading the Chapter Title*) Good luck, you guys. Don’t die. . . . I wonder if Naruto’s cooking skills are gonna be another surprise for Sasuke.

    She’s feeling dread, eh? Oh dear. õ_o . . . . Heheh, “This is weird. Really weird.” ^^ . . . . For God’s sake, Sakura, 3 days is no big deal. Lighten up, girl. Oy. õ_õ . . . . Lol, love how all three of them said in pieces, “You’re on time for once.” XD . . . . Will you shut up about the dolphin already?! ò_ó (XD)

    Kyuubi’s got a point, Naruto. If anything, Sasuke’ll just be more protective. . . . Okay, the Kyuubi calling Naruto “Naru-chan” seemed a little much to me. ^_^; . . . . Ohhhh, I see now. That’s more overprotective than I would’ve guessed. It’s enough for jealousy. Yuh-oh. But I gotta say, I can understand some worry or concern, but this range of jealousy seems a little much; he just jumped to a conclusion without checking into it. õ_ô And jealous over a friend? Goddammit, Sasuke, lighten up for crying out loud; Naruto spends more time with you than he does with Gaara anyways. õ_õ . . . . Those last two paragraphs were sweet. ^_^ If Sasuke’s got the time off, though, why can’t he go?



    Wha--? You had to give away that Gaara’s involved with a Hyuuga? WHY? (*annoyed*) õ_õ . . . . I’m gonna guess Neji, because I feel weird about guessing Hinata. -_-;
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    Chapter 7: So somebody created a version of that song? Cool. I knew it could be done! ^_^ . . . O.O Love the warning! Sounds good! =D

    I thought C-rank was more of protecting from wilderness and half-assed idiots trying to steal stuff, and B-rank was more like protecting from professionals. õ_ô . . . . (*snort*) “As if standing on his own would take too much energy.” Lol. X3


    Boy, that was random. o_o . . . . I would’ve thought Sasuke could’ve figured that out on his own, about Naruto getting some grace from his training with Jiraiya. . . . Uh, I thought the way Naruto explained what’s real and what’s not needed a little work. Sounds kinda choppy to me. Sorry. (*sweat*) . . . . “I want to see the parts of you that you keep locked away.” >_> (Nah, I knew what he meant, but still. ^^) . . . . So this story is kinda like a romance story? . . . . Didja hear all that, Naruto? He practically proposed to you. ^_^ . . . . Wow, they got down to it pretty fast. . . . (*chuckles*) “When are we going to tell Sakura that I gave you that hickie?” ^^ . . . . I wonder how Sakura’s gonna take it.



    Loved Sai’s and Itachi’s reactions to the chapter. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2008
    Chapter 6: Raining. Not my idea of a beautiful day. Overcast . . . now that’s a beautiful day. ^_^ . . . . And I’m sure that song could be rewritten for anybody and anything. Don’t ask me to do it, cuz I don’t know how, but I’m positive that it can be done. ^^

    Lemme guess: Iruka’s got Kakashi over. -_- . . . . (*snort*) “Way too overprotective.” Good call. ^^ . . . . (*sigh*) Knew it. Kakashi, please don’t do anything while I’m around, I’m kinda stuck with Naruto and/or Sasuke or someone else, so I can’t leave when I want to. -_-; . . . . “Naruto you have the support of [. . .] Iruka and me.” And yet, despite all those people, there are still enough village idiots who find ways to make Naruto’s life hell. ô_ô . . . . Heh. Nice parting line, Naruto. I’d listen to him, Kakashi. ^_^ . . . . Eugh. Iruuuukaaaa, waaaait, I haven’t gotten out the door yet. x_x (Sorry, TW, I’m not into Kakashi/Iruka. XD)

    “Silent but Deadly.” Very appropriate in their line of work. I like it. ^_^ . . . . In other words, “Pot calling the kettle ‘black’,” right? . . . . Oh, Kyuubi, that’s mean. Tell him what the hell you’re talking about! We don’t want him dying of shock! õ_õ . . . . Wow. Naruto sure stated that problem well. ô_ô . . . . Oh, sheesh, Sasuke, don’t get all upset over an understandable concern. Jeez. (Can’t ask anything around here.) ¬_¬ . . . . Umm, TW? I hate to say this, but I think the action in the story is moving a little fast. It seems kind of . . . I dunno, unreal to me. õ_ô . . . . Ahahaha! Hickey! Where’d that come from? ^^ . . . . (to Kyuubi) Mean! . . . . (*snicker*) “Girlfriend.” (*looks at Sasuke*) >_> . . . . Good timing, Kakashi. And I prefer your old excuses. -_-; (Although it is pretty funny for those who have no clue what he was talking about. ^^) . . . . 4 jounin still in their regular team. Sounds a little old to me.


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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2008
    Chapter 5: “I’m pleased. I don’t do happy.” XDDDD . . . . So is Sai another favorite? . . . . Oh, please make him someone’s uke! His brother’s, most likely! =DDD

    Uh-oh. I think I know where this title’s going to lead. >_>
    “Created a blade out of water.” So has he developed an affinity with water, then? . . . . Ah, should’ve known that Sai’s appearance in the A/N would’ve been a foreshadowing of his appearance in the story. ^_^ I wonder if there’s a little rival-thing between him and Sasuke in this fic. . . . Yup. Goodie. ^^ . . . . Whatever you do, Sasuke, don’t get caught in a dumb situation unless it’s absolutely worth it.
    Oh my. No subtlety, Sai. Actually I’m wondering if Sai’s really interested in Naruto, or if he’s just doing it to aggravate Sasuke. And yeah, I kinda knew that about the Uchihas. . . . Huh. I didn’t actually expect my question to get answered. Interesting. ô_ô . . . . “Subtly flirting with you?” Bullshit, Sai. XD . . . . (*giggle*) Love the paragraph, “Sai just smiled and moved in for [. . .] ‘Come with me dobe.’” ^^ . . . . “Sasuke carefully led Naruto to the surprise he had spent so much time planning.” For some reason, that puts worry in my mind. õ_o . . . . That should look interesting, a couple of guys out on a picnic on the Hokage Monument’s head. ^_^ . . . . That’s funny. Sasuke said very blatantly that he can’t cook for shit. X3 . . . . “You’re such a virgin.” XD You and me, Naruto, you and me. XDD . . . . I like how Sasuke admits he’s jealous. . . . What happened to making him work for it, Naruto? . . . . (*snicker*) It looks like things are okay, and then, “Sasuke went home to plot revenge on Sai.” It ain’t over yet! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2008
    Chapter 4: Heh. Itachi’s also touchy about touchy-feelie stuff. Cute. Must run in the family. ^^

    That’s . . . a pretty big group. ô_ô . . . . That’ll be quite some commitment. Worth it, but still a big one. The question is, are they willing to live for a while on only ramen? . . . . Heh, only Chouji’s dubious. ^^ . . . . This is gonna be a humorous story, isn’t it? (*wary*)
    (*snort*) Kyuubi. X3 . . . . Fox has got a point, Naruto. You do deserve to be courted. . . . Err, you got some letters mixed up in “Otouto.” It came out as “otouot.” ^^; . . . . Oh, good! Some rocks in the road! =D
    Heh. “Like most Uchihas he’s plagued with insomnia.” So typical, I love it! X3 . . . . Dude. He’s a guy, Sasuke. Treat him like one. -_- . . . . Oh yeah. In hindsight, you mentioned that the group Sakura got together included Team Kakashi. Does that include Sasuke and Naruto? Cuz if they were there, they hardly reacted at all to anything. I think you could’ve been a little more explicit on the group (maybe).
    It’s amazing what some people will do to express their hate. What a waste of energy. At least at another restaurant, if they ignored him, he could get away with giving his friends free meals. . . . Heheheh, good one, Chouji.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2008
    Chapter 3: (*blinks*) Itachi . . . put your cloak back on. -_-

    Never would’ve thought Sasuke’d be the one to do that first. (Maybe in retaliation to Naruto, though.) . . . . Aww, man, that’s sad. ó_ò . . . . Makes sense about Naruto being ignored, but still, would they be willing to skip out on a bill? . . . . Yay, you’ve got some good friends, there, Naruto. They love you, man. (So do I. ^_^) . . . . I wonder who’s gonna get top eventually. (>_>) . . . . JEEZUS!! They hate him that much?! õ_ô (Seems a little over-the-top to me.) . . . . Oh, come on. The bathroom being like that? A little too much, I think! (*sweat*) How the heck can anybody build something like that? I mean, why would they? õ_ô . . . . Yeesh. Like I said, over-the-top. -_-; And how is it that instant ramen survives? I mean, couldn’t the lid break or something? . . . . Oh boy, cuteness. Hey, what happened to starting subtle? Okay, he started subtle, but it moved along this quickly?? (*sigh*) I was kinda hoping things would take a little while before reaching this point. . . . Wow. That was . . . abrupt. ô_ô
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2008
    Chapter 2: (*snort*) The A/N was hilarious. XD
    Tight? What, is Sasuke slimmer than him? Either way, Naruto must look gorgeous. *_* . . . . Does he still call her “Sakura-chan” out of habit then?
    “An irritant?” (*giggle*) . . . . LOL, how Sasuke got rid of Lee! XD
    “White Boy Rapper?” Oh please tell me it’s Rockstar. >_< . . . . Nice reasoning, Naruto. (Thank God you and I agree too. *sweat*)
    Huh?? “These pants are so tight you can tell my religion?” Sounds hilarious, but I don’t know what it meeeaaaans! XD' But I love the second line, too. He’s got some great lines in this. XD . . . . Love the descriptions of how Naruto reacts to the clothing. ^^ . . . . HAHA, Sasuke liked that one! XD . . . . I like Naruto’s line about practicality vs. style with him. ^_^ . . . . Just out of curiosity, what magazine or book is Sasuke pretending to read? . . . . Heh. Trust the guy to know what a guy might like. ^_^ . . . . Whoa, that’s one hell of an outfit. Please accept it, Naruto. (I wonder how that was in the store. Kinda convenient, wasn’t it? Not complaining, just saying. ^_^) . . . . Shoes? You’re kidding, Sakura! Practicality, here! He’s not a girly shoe-freak! Oy! õ_õ
    Good, Naruto, putting your foot down like that. You and I should get along well. ^_~ . . . . Oooh, cool! Kinda like superhero boots! =D

    Huh. Itachi’s pretty open with you, eh? You guys seem pretty close (good thing you weren’t closest, otherwise he would’ve killed you. *sweat*)
    Thanks for the religion explanation. I started thinking of that, but I wasn’t sure. (So . . . is he circumcised? >_>) And yeah, I’d like to know about that Kawaii no Jutsu, please. (I get the feeling I’ve seen it in a little comic somewhere.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    This is one I’ve been dying to read for a while.
    Chapter 1: First line, and already it sounds cute. ^_^ . . . . Oh, that’s kinda clever: “Naruto’s mindset determined which head he sat on.” Cute. ^^ . . . . They’re being kinda open with each other, aren’t they? That’s a little unusual. . . . The answer to the title already? . . . . Wow. That’s a cool reason. I like it. . . . (*snicker*) “Well it’s not like I’m [. . .] is the next best thing.” XD . . . . Oh wonderful. (*sarcasm*) Two idiots who like each other and have no freakin’ clue the other likes them back and are both afraid to try stuff. (I’m not bashing the fic, it’s just something I see in a lot of stories, fanfiction and real books, that always makes me wanna knock some heads together.) . . . . Love how Sasuke’s going through the scenarios in his head. Heheh, “I don’t have much to lose other than my pride.” Didn’t that mean a lot to you, Sasuke? XDD I love how he’s not freaking out about it. ^^ . . . . Ah, so they’re jounins now. That would make sense with them being a little more open to each other. How old are they now, I wonder? . . . . “I have no sense of style whatsoever.” XD I dunno, Naruto, I always thought you looked pretty hot when you were 15, with the orange and black and the long ties to the hitai-ate. (Got no style, my ass.) . . . . Cool deal, Sasuke. Love the addition of “Anything legal.” Good thing you caught that. ^^ This should be fun.
    Aww, so Sasuke can’t do what Naruto might think up for him? Darn. But this looks good too.

    Oh boy, dialogue A/Ns. Those can be fun. Is Itachi your favorite character? Cuz he’s a good one. ^_^ (Mine’s Sasuke, though Itachi’s somewhere on my list. ^_~)

    My reviews are pretty big, so just in case, you can reply to me on LiveJournal (same username) or watergale18@yahoo.com. ^_^
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  • From suzie on March 29, 2008
    just to let you know...
    I love this story, mostly the
    conversations you have with
    charters, before and after.
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  • From squirrelc on March 21, 2008
    I LOVE YOUR STORY. I know it's not much but thats all that needs to be said.
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  • From ANON - Kenichi Matsuyama on March 13, 2008
    KAWAII!! more onegai!! Watashi no suki desu, no!!
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  • From bloodstone on March 05, 2008
    I ran a cross this story onice before, and liked it, but when I never saw an update to it, I forgot about it. But a copule a day ago I found you on someones fav auther list. I checked it out, and found this story again, and about squiled in dlight when I was that this story not only contuing, bit had been update to "50" chapters. I fliped. I'v spent three days liveing and breathing this story. I was late for work one moreing cause I lost track of the time reading it. It is really good. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see where you tack this story now. Good Work! ^__^
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  • From ANON - JJ on February 17, 2008
    what up I love ur fic. I like how u explain the story behind the orange sout. I love the story with all of the twists and i think out of all the fics i have read u paint a perfect picture of the love between naruto and sauske along with the kakashi and iruka one as well. I love how u have written thins story and i would apreciatit if u could notify me if there is a new chapter and of any other fics u are going to release thank u and keep on writen this good stuff later.
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  • From Deandraquin on February 14, 2008
    Hi, oke it took me 3 days to read all the chappies. I think this is a GREAT story *starts bowing*. I just wanted to ad that even though the side pairings are not the usual ones, I think it was brilliantly thought of. Somehow they seem to work just fine. I really don't know anymore to say except: GREAT story!!!!!!!!

    Oh and a little word to Itachi:

    Stop your bitching. T.W. writes great stories and you know that too. And if she wasn't so "insane" you wouldn't get to do all the fun stuff with Sai. *sticks tongue out to Itachi*

    Here maybe this will help get Itachi to pipe down *hands T.W. a Itachi puppet and a load of needles*.
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  • From ANON - Madara man on January 25, 2008
    i have followed your story please dont stop writing it i love it if you do end it write a sequal
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