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Reviews for Overtime

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Raven White on June 11, 2007
    for once in my life, I'm seriously contimplating taking up football
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  • From ANON - Yuri-san on February 18, 2007
    A football game in Konoha! Awsome. That alone had me grinning from the start
    ...And then...
    There was smut.
    OMG The smut!! I need a spatula, because some time during the smut, my eyeballs seem to have flown out of their respective sockets and stuck to the monitor.
    That sex talk was so f-ing hot. O_O And that was some of the best, slightly kinky, animalistic, SasUKE, sex I've ever read. EVER.
    Whoo! People need to make thank-you one shots more often. ;D

    P.S. Neji is a voyeur. XD;;;

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  • From anapana83 on February 16, 2007
    Hah! That was hot. I liked it alot. And Naruto as the aggressor--a very welcomed turnabout here. Good job.
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  • From ANON - pantherrose on February 16, 2007
    Wow, now that was really, really hawt. Wonderful job, and Happy Late Valentine's Day!
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on February 16, 2007
    Yay! What fun! And so sexy, too!

    I smiled all the way through. You've got a really good sense of humor, and it translates well into your writing.

    Hooray for Overtime!
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  • From DarkRainFiend on February 16, 2007
    Oh hell yes! This was the best Valentine's Day present ever! NaruSasu smut always makes me happy, especially since people always seem to see fit in making Naruto uke. He has a demon inside him dammit! Let the boy top once in awhile! Woot! Excellently written me dear. Makes me want to write some decent smut too.
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  • From VRon8899 on February 16, 2007
    HaHa! Cute and HOTT!! Nicely done!!
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  • From ANON - narufan on February 16, 2007
    that was so good. it had me drooling. i love u!! u have a really good writing style. and not just the smut. good luck. happy late valentin's day.
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  • From Zrina on February 14, 2007
    That was allllll kinds of hotttt!!!!!!! Awesome smex!
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  • From ANON - lo on February 14, 2007
    That was awsome. The football game and the sex scene were just awsome. This was just a fun piece of fiction. Great job!!
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  • From on February 14, 2007
    kyaa! oh my gods! i love you so much! thank you so, so, so, so much! you did a wonderful job with this story and i love it so, so much.

    *fans self* wow. if football was played like this more often... i would love it even more. but as it stands, one beautiful piece of work. and naruto fucking sasuke into the ground... *drools* this was hot and fantastic and wonderfully done. (what else to expect from you, ne?) i loved the game, the characters were in character, and the smut... *drooling*

    i love you! *plots kidnapping*

    thank you!
    ~hanyou-elf
    (if you want me to write you anything at all, just let me know... i'll do my best!)
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  • From ANON - Hello on February 14, 2007
    Ha, ha. I like this, especially the end. :p
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  • From ANON - Allys on February 14, 2007
    LOL, *Smirk* Very VERY Nice. Happy Valentines Day, That was an awesome way to kick off the day.
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  • From Adi on February 14, 2007
    O_O

    *drool*

    no coherant thoughts at the moment
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  • From ANON - Fantastical Me on February 14, 2007
    Tee hee. Very cute. I love seme Naruto. Thanks for the Valentine's Day treat!
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