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By : Mikeal
  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2007
    That was weird, but at least Kakashi's plan worked. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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  • From Zigana on February 14, 2007
    I am so enjoying this. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2007
    I hope Kakashi's plan works, but will Naruto really get jeslous? That would be something to see. Hurr with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2007
    What is Kakashi's plan b? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Dragon7 on February 12, 2007
    How funny Naruto watching Sasuke would that going to be one long night. Nooooooooooooooo
    to them artificially inseminate someone. Please find some way to have Sasuke become pregnant with Naruto baby. “Mpreg are grate!” and please make this into an mpreg if your going to have Sasuke have any kids.

    P.S. Grate chapter

    P.S.S UKE SASUKE RULS hint hint

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    Wow!! Four new cbapters in one day,awesome!! Will Naruto and Sasuke get together? I hope so. Hurry with the next chapter or chapters.
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  • From Eternel on February 11, 2007
    not to be rude, just to help you out, sometimes when you do spell check it doesn't catch the words that are spelled correctly, but out of place. exp: their vs. there, it wont catch this cuz it's spelled right but not in the right context...i think that's the right word...anyway um, I didn't really notice any/many mistakes, don't remember cuz I've been reading a lot of stories lately. and like you said if it's ooc too bad, that'd how you want it to be, it's ur story and if ooc is a part of it then that's just fine people don't have to read it if they don't like it. anyway i liked your story, i think it was going places and it was pretty good, don't let what others say bother you too much. it's one thing if you wrote a really shitty story(which you didn't by the way, it was pretty good even for having not written for a while), vs. writing a story that isn't half bad to say the least.

    - snow_angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    I like you story the way it is. I'm not disgusted at all by it. Just wanted to let you know.
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  • From Dragon7 on February 11, 2007
    Who care's if their are spelling mistakes and if characters are ooc the story is fucking grate so keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    Poor Sasuke. I hope Kakaishi can fix this mess. Hurry the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - ANON on February 11, 2007
    We've established the fact that you want your stories kept short, but dont'cha think it'd be nice to make them NOT ooc, and spaced out? I think so. Revise the chapters, repost them. If you can't do it yourself advertise for a BETA.
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  • From ANON - ANON on February 11, 2007
    Kay, this story has a ton of mistakes.

    1. It's too short.
    2. There are a /lot/ of mistakes
    3. All the characters are ooc in this chapter.
    4. Get a BETA. BETA's can help improve stories.
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  • From Dragon7 on February 11, 2007
    I hope that Kakashi and Hokage kicks that ASSHOLE Gokai ASS. poor Sasuke living like that. Udate soon I have to see what happens next.


    P.S. Grate chapter
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  • From Kyandoru on February 07, 2007
    Slow? What's that mean? Anyway, thanks for updating!
    ja ne
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  • From ANON - b on February 07, 2007
    Amusing,very.Well written.You have a certain elegant nonchalance, I like. Note to other authors,I can't reveiw if you don't let me. whats the deal?
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