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Reviews for Mating of the Fox

By : bloodrain01
  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2007
    Ookay. First chapter was pretty good, with the exception that Naruto's eyes are blue, not green, aka. sapphire not emerald. After that tho, whoever continued the story has appaling grammar and spelling skills. They skipped parts, miswrote parts, and overall did a poor job of writting. I even got lost reading it. I know this is pretty much just a porn site, but come on. That was just sad.
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  • From shadowdragontwister on June 11, 2007
    wow...this is awesome
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  • From JudgeofRokubi on April 25, 2007
    All I have to really ask for is put a bit of a story behind how Naruto got each girl and do some checking on the spelling and I am happy
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  • From writer33 on April 23, 2007
    thanks for the review of my storie and you not bad your self keep up the good work and i really do like it.
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  • From Jin on April 21, 2007
    You're forgetting about Ayame.
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  • From RacerX78 on April 20, 2007
    So cool naru/anko action. I wonder what the babies would look like. Continue
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  • From nimistar on April 20, 2007
    i really dont understand your story. its good porn but the story just jumps from one point to another with nothing tieing the chapters together. i guess its pwp with an attempt at a story.
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  • From warprince2099 on April 19, 2007
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(I hope you make this into a Harem fanfic with Tayuya, Tenten, Temari, Hinata, Sakura, Ino and Anko in Naruto's Harem)
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  • From warprince2099 on April 19, 2007
    That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(I hope you make this into a Harem fanfic with Tayuya, Tenten, Temari, Hinata, Sakura, Ino and Anko in Naruto's Harem)
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  • From Jin on April 16, 2007
    I just noticed you spelled Ayame's name wrong. You might want to fix that.
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  • From Jin on April 16, 2007
    I love Naruto/Ayame lemons. They're so rare. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 13, 2007
    The only thing that I hate about your story is that your not clear about what is going on between them and different views are thrown in without telling us what is going on. I like the way your making Hinata a lil freak and Naruto finally sees her instead of Sakura. When does this all happen when he comes back from training or what. How does this effect Tenten seeing them having sex
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  • From ubermann on February 13, 2007
    nice work man keep it up


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  • From tasukigirl on February 12, 2007
    So it's interesting really. I started reading the first chapter and was like... wow, things are getting pretty hot and heavy pretty quickly and I sorta kept waiting for you to tell us who was actually like... making out. Very detailed description of two people getting it on, but you sort of left something out... the characters- Descriptions, little kinks to their personality and most of all, description. Naruto has blue eyes, not green. Half the time I was thinking... Gaara?
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 10, 2007
    The only thing I didn't like was all the missing details of what is happening. Plus your spelling was a bit terrible. It took away from the reading cuz we would have to think what you meant to put and other than that it was ok but can you fix the mistakes in chap.3??? But you keep up the writing
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