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Reviews for Because I Belong To Him

By : Nasan
  • From GhostwriterMO on April 01, 2007
    LOVE IT!!! CAN'T GET ENOUGH NARUTO AND HINATA AND THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST!!! PLEASE (on hands and knees)MORE OF THEM!
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  • From Tenithus on March 16, 2007
    A job well done comrade, very nice story. Continue the great work us Naru/Hina people are doing, there's none pairing so beautiful and heart warming as a Naru/Hina fiction, unless it's very poor in quality, anyways, continue our glorious march till the day when Naruto have a real Naru/Hina episode, move out comrade.
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  • From ANON - peter on March 12, 2007
    i love it, for once there is an actual belivable plot nit over the top like some people do. nice and slow build up, as it wasnt rushed. you are right about not enough sex in it but as you said there will be another chapter in it with more sex so it doesnt truly matter. i would liike to see a story with naruto/hinata/ino by you as i have a good feelin about you style of writing. thxs for the story and wish you good luck with any future writings
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  • From ANON - Logan on March 09, 2007
    it is so unbearably refreshing to come across a real story on here again. i feel like a very disgruntled gold miner half the time, i spend weeks panning and only come up with a few nuggets and a whole lotta mud. there were a few moments when hinata came off a bit out of character, but it was still well enough within the margins that it could conceivably happen like that. i would very much be happy to have another installment of this story, it's length alone warrants attention. i can't stand those little fic-lets where you have three to thirteen so-so paragraphs then a big "to be continued!" well the only advice i could really offer for improvement would be to work on not moving too fast with hinata's development as a character, she tends to go fromextream to extream a little too fast at times. tone iot back and make it more gradual and i think you'll have her down. oh, i thoight you handled the pacing awesomely, by the way. it's one of the more subtle marks of a great story and you really nailed it. bravo for that. well i will cut this short, lest it turn into a love letter and not a remotly constructive review, but seriously. keep it up, you're restoring my faith in fanfiction authors. also, in closing, the ninjas vs pirates moment was a hoot
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  • From ANON - Shadowfox on March 05, 2007
    this stroy is great i hope you add more to it or make a sequel
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  • From ANON - overlordofnobodies on March 04, 2007
    Great storie. Well written, great detail ,very funning and good size. I really like how you written it.
    Can't wait for the next one but take your time and make a nother awesome storie.
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  • From ANON - ManKyYen on March 03, 2007
    Well written, intelligent and with an actual plot. A rare thing to find. :-)

    I really enjoyed it and would be glad to read another chapter or two.
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  • From KageFuusha on March 02, 2007
    I LOVE this story! So much beautiful and well written crack, I laughed until I almost cried! I hope you come up with a second chapter, same size as the first chapter, soon!
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  • From ANON - Barry White on March 02, 2007
    Ninja Pirates! LOL
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  • From Nameramthgin on February 28, 2007
    well, i have to say it, absolutely awsome story. Really, it was very well done. you should be proud of yourself. on top of that here is a tidbit for fun. When i entered your story into microsoft works, you had A TOTAL OF 85 PAGES!!!!!! ON TOP OF THAT A WORD COUNT OF 32980.............
    GREAT JOB. I really hope you continue on with this story.

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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on February 26, 2007
    MAN! this was a pretty hot fic and I'm not just saying that. I also love the fact that you had a good plot to go along with the sex scene. It made it more realsitc in terms of the Naruto charac ters and what not. GOOD JOB!!!
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  • From nimistar on February 25, 2007
    amazing story, this is one of the best stories i have read on aff. i love your style of writeing, many of the other authors here spend alot less time on the story which makes it hard to read. i hope to see more stories and another chapter from you.
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  • From ANON - Krad on February 25, 2007
    woah, that was just... awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Agramahad on February 23, 2007
    Its a very nice, well written, really funny story and i do hope the author continues and makes another chapter. What I'm really curious about though is how many people got the 'Tan Tan Tanuki' song. I fell over laughing after reading that. If you all want to know what it mean look up 'Tanuki' on Wiki. The song, and translation, is there for all those interested.
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  • From omegasgundam on February 19, 2007
    Damm near perfect. It's so hard to find a good het story 'round these parts. If you could continue this it would be one of the all time greats on this site. It might even help stemm the tide of Yaoi crap.
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